I don't always draw, but when I do, it's mediocre. But here it is anyway.

TSpreading Kindness
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Horror
A young hippogriff student begins attending the School of Friendship. Her roommate is annoying, she can't stop thinking of home, and horrors hidden in the dark are beginning to reveal themselves.
Fluttershy
OC
Silverstream
SwordTune · 7.7k words · 9 1 · 134 views
TAnthology of Everything
MLP: FiM
MLP: Comic
Adventure
Random
Anthology
A collection of stories designed as the playground of an overactive mind. Here, anything and everything can be written.
Alt. Universe
OC
Other
Main 6
Main 7 (EqG)
SwordTune · 31k words · 13 2 · 169 views
TThe Nightmare Knights Become A Band
MLP: FiM
MLP: Comic
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
Frustrated with her sister's free spirit and new adventures, Luna resolves to find something new to live for, now that she is retired. The answer: A power metal band. And who better to join her on her quest than the Nightmare Knights?
Luna
Lightning Dust
Starlight Glimmer
Svengallop
Tempest Shadow
SwordTune · 82k words · 27 3 · 299 views
TNew Year's Future
Equestria Girls
Romance
Slice of Life
Sunset's back in her home town for the winter break. After a long first semester at her university, she's glad to finally be back with her friends. One friend in particular, Marionette, will help her prepare for the future to come.
OC
Sunset Shimmer
Main 7 (EqG)
SwordTune · 8.7k words · 12 0 · 223 views
TUnder A Wild Star
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Sci-Fi
They walk Eldyrea on two hooves, in the scales of dragons. They wear the manes of kirins and look through the sharp eyes of griffons. And they were once the future of Equestria.
OC
Dragons
Kirins
Hippogriffs
SwordTune · 38k words · 14 2 · 183 views
TL'Hotel des Animaux
MLP: FiM
Dark
Slice of Life
The Hotel of Animals, a regal place below the cottage of a widely know caretaker of animals. All pets tired of their daily, uneventful lives know that it is the only place to rest and relax. Some of them even know of its more "tantalizing" services.
Winona
Opalescence
Other
Pets
SwordTune · 10k words · 192 views

The Sunset Shimmer Collection

Fighting to the Top Canterlot High School has been chosen as the next host for the Inter-regional Fencing Tournament. Even after tying with Crystal Prep at the Friendship Games, CHS is still the underdog of the sport. Well, not any more, if Sunset has her way. by SwordTune 23,279 words · 48 · 2
A Summer's Gift With university life just a few months away, Sunset and her new friend, Marionette, explore each other a little bit and find some fascinating things. by SwordTune 4,255 words · 14 · 1
New Year's Future Sunset's back in her home town for the winter break. After a long first semester at her university, she's glad to finally be back with her friends. One friend in particular, Marionette, will help her prepare for the future to come. by SwordTune 8,748 words · 12 · 0

The collection of my stories which follow the path of Sunset Shimmer as a fencer! From her first competition at CHS to making new friends she never thought she'd have, look upon where Sunset could go as she leaves behind the world of magic and finds herself a new life. (More to come)

Oct

13th

2020

Multiplet Midnight Madness (Surf and/or Turf, Beastars, and Animal Allegory) · 8:32am October 13th

Just posted a short one, but I promised I'd do this, so here I am. Let's talk about animal allegory in My Little Pony and Beastars.

Report SwordTune · 18 views ·

That One Time I Made A Shipping Video

I looked to see whether Eldena Doubleca5t had made a video on My Little Pony ships. Seeing as that has not happened, and I can find no fan-made videos, I have taken it upon myself to throw this video together to stave off the desire to see MLP ships, at least until a real video comes around. All images were taken from Google.
Check out Eldena Doubleca5t, the original source of the audio:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCqhVP3hxi6o8vDoFkUzMKew

I Review Stories

Previously I made review requests at random times. It was easy on me but a little chaotic. So now, I just make the requests on my page. If you want a review, leave a comment on my page or a direct message with the link. I'm willing to take a look if I have time. However, I do have a number of requirements:

1. No stories with red tags. Mature themes are okay but I'm hypercritical of the excessive use of gore/death/violence. If you believe you don't use those tags for shock value, I'm willing to take a look. Sex/clop is hard no, however.
2. I have time, but not infinite time. Writing a 20k word story takes me a few days so I will also put my reading at that cap (if it's a little over like 21k that's also fine). For longer stories, I will base my review on the first 20k words.
3. Must be complete, or a major part/arc of the story is complete. (If you plan to have a longer story, but the first parts add up to the word cap, I will still look at them).
4. This one's not a limit, but just a warning. I'm not your spell check or editor, I expect a polished work if you're asking for a review. If there are severe grammatical or spelling errors I will rate it harshly.

Below are links to reviews I have recently done. I try to be as fair as possible, so expect this level of criticism:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/443322/review-of-sunset-glimmer-by-ninjadeadbeard

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/442841/review-how-to-host-a-party-by-uz-niamat

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/437095/review-of-silent-wings-by-indigo

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/437032/review-of-bracebracebrace-by-the-red-parade

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/437030/review-of-anarchy-pony-of-chaos-by-ninjadeadbeard

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/437028/review-for-easter-sunday-by-artist

Comments ( 50 )

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Chatoyance

Chatoyance #50 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

I would like a review, please. For this story:
cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/636j-1432471364-85294-medium
Injector Doe: That Indestructible Something
A young woman awakens transformed into an Equestrian pony - yet no other human being can perceive her new body in any way whatsoever. With clumsy hooves, but a bright mind, Gregoria Samson must trust in herself to discover the incredible, monumental truth behind her impossible change.

♥ As Featured On Equestria Daily!

KatonRyu

KatonRyu #49 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

Hi there,

I saw your post asking for stories to review in my feed, so I figured I'd give it a try. This story was a bit of an experiment for me, so I'd be very interested to know how you would review it. It can be found here:

EBroken Mirror

Slowly, the magic faded out for the last time. Sunset sat slumped on her knees, staring through blurry eyes as the glow dissipated in the darkness. It was over. The portal was gone.

KatonRyu · 4.2k words · 37 3 · 827 views

Thanks in advance for giving it a shot!

Elie Stickmin