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A group where you can finally let people know what you want! Whether it's comments, general feedback, a sandwich, harsh criticism, views, likes, or anything else you can finally let people know exactly what you want! Would you like fries with that?


[THERE ARE NO SANDWICHES.]

Also please do not start flame wars OR add stories that are just meant to offend people.

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Hey, I just posted a revision for one of my old stories and I was wondering if I could get some criticism feedback. It's called Infernus Astartes: Ruinous Son. I'm really curious as to seeing what people think about it.

Hi this is Zeroraid, I've been writing on Fimfiction for over a year now and I'd really like some feedback on the stuff I write. Recently, I just posted a story here hoping that someone would take the time to read and offer some feedback, doesn't matter if its criticism or just explaining what you like about it, or even a question. I would just like to know what people think about my writing and see how I can improve it.

Not sure of the status of this group, but I may ask if you could perhaps comment on my story please?

Be prepared for a couple more stories:twilightsmile:.

My story needs likes and constructive criticism.

I SAID I WANT PANCAKES!

I want sandwiches. And delicious pancakes.

Flight tells the story of a pegasus rebellion against the oppressive batpony regime. As an allegory, it delves into the nature of depression, trust, truth, and revelation. Enjoy! :pinkiehappy:
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COOL! A PLACE WHERE WE CAN GET FREE COMMENTS!

Wade....I don't think that's the point of this group...

WHAT?! Then what's the point? IT'S CALLED FEEDBACK!

I think it's more about people giving advice and general knowledge to the new writers

BORING! BRING ON THE COMMENTS! SHOW ME THE LOVE THAT I DESPERATELY DESERVE!

Dammit Wade....

Hi. I'm new to FimFiction and am writing a story. Comments would be nice. Feel free to check it out. Thanks

~SkyOfStorms

Attention everypony, please do not ignore this. I am a little busy with college work so I won't be making new chapters as quickly as I hoped. But to those of you who are reading my fanfic and find it entertaining, could you leave comments telling me what you think of the story so far. Tell me what you think of the events that transpire in the chapters. Receiving comments is one of the biggest reasons why I started this. I tried to put my fanfic on deviantart but no one ever gave me any comments for it, so I took it off the deviantart account. I'm hoping the same doesn't happen to me here.

"Also please do not start flame wars OR add stories that are just meant to offend people."

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--prevent flame wars and troll stories on the internet.

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