This place is for people who really want comments on a story. After all, who doesn't like comments? First stop is the Introducing Thread for anyone new to the group. Come on now, don't be shy... like me. Anyways I hope you get what your looking for in this group and have a great time while doing it.
Could more people comment on my new DD story?
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I'd love to have thoughts and feedback given to my on one of my One-Shots. Just a heads up, it's part of a larger project.
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I love getting comments and views on my stories, if anyone is willing here are some of them.
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- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
- Comedy
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[Take note that some of these are sequels.]
I'd appreciate some reviews on my newest story, Rainbow SatAM!
- MLP: FiM
- Sonic
- Dark
- Adventure
Living life as a part of a rebel alliance is hard, but Rainbow finds a way to make things way past cool!While I'd love comments on really any of my currently working on stories, I would appreciate any on My most recent ones.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/501424/the-infinity-of-spike
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/450876/jabberwock-changeling-of-mythicality
I just hope my stories are enjoyed by people.
I would appreciate a comment on Fallout Equestria Lionheart!
I would appreciate for comment on "The Road of Courage!"
I would love some reviews and comments on my story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/479044/mystery-man-of-sweet-apple-acres
Would appreciate comments on my story!
I hope I get good reviews...
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I would dispute that but then I realized that you delete everything, so there's no point as any example I give would be deleted.
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You do not know the definition of "constructive criticism"
I need to get some helpful reviews and positive comments on my story.
Flight tells the story of a pegasus rebellion against the oppressive batpony regime. As an allegory, it delves into the nature of depression, trust, truth, and revelation. Enjoy!
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Since your "Introducing Thread" link keeps signing me out of my account before putting me into the thread, I'll introduce myself here.
Hi, there! I'm Eskerata. I've written stories that are sad, funny or violent. I've written some horror stories, too. I've put two of my comedy stories on this group to test the waters, as it were. I hope to have a good time here.
I'm very eager to get comments on the story I've submitted. It's one of my most successful stories, with several new readers every day. Yet feed back is very rare, I don't get many faves or ratings and I haven't had a comment in months. I need to know, are all these readers even enjoying the story?
That's Not How It's Pronounced!