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Aether Spark


I'm a highly imaginative and clever storymaker with a great imagination and desire to make great stories, I'm very dedicated to my stories and will always do my best to finish them. :)

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This story is a sequel to Friendship is absolute chaos


With a strict deadline to control their new Chaos magic, Twilight Sparkle and her friends must cooperate against the temptations to use their powers for selfish reasons and fight to maintain control over them.

But they quickly realize there is more danger to their new powers than they realize and soon, so will everyone...

[So sorry for the long long wait but it's almost over, I thank George and KingSombraTheTyrantRuler for helping me get this ambitious sequel to the beloved first story made, I hope you all love it.]

I also will credit m3Atl0afman for the image, as they drew it.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 104 )

I have been Wait for this one

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I hope I did well enough on it, sorry about the long wait :twilightsheepish:

Nice chapter.
Just remember that the mane six and faceless generic pony-blobs aren't the only inhabitants of Ponyville, nor Equestria. All this chaos is gonna effect everyone around them.

I do want to see where you go next with this. Congrats on not giving up.

Ooh things are getting interesting! can't wait for the next chapter!
My guess is Twilight couldn't control herself!

Hah, I can't believe this comes out right as I finish reading the prequel.

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Thanks 🙂

As for ponyville it will be the main focus for this story, but the rest of Equestria and it's outer lands will be involved later

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As a fan of mental change, I like the idea of seeing the POV of the PONIES changed beyond recognition and their thoughts as their six new goddesses reshape them and their home to their whims.

Sea, beach, rooftops, trottingham, dragon lands, space, canterlot while Celestia was reading Luna’s diary.

God damnit Celestia, Twilight is losing it really fast and that Little voice in her head seems to be just her who has that, And that's a scary thing

Whoa!! that was not normal at all!
Wait Celestia was reading Luna' dairy!?
Keep em' coming!

That was a good story so far goodluck with the rest of it.

Just in case anyone is too young to get the reference:

Never mind other are hearing it to, else i have a Feeling like there might have been a chance that if it was not all of them there got turn into draconeqqus’s at the same time that Twilight might have been right on the idea of Control, its just with how much Chaos there is do to there being 6 of them its going 100% Bonkers

Twilight will be the one to break first, I just know it.

“No, I refuse to acknowledge Discord is right about chaos magic being inherently uncontrollable!” Twilight said

Just admit it, Twilight!

heh love the disney ref there at the end!

So Twilight murdered a buncha Pinkie clones, now Pinkie has murdered a buncha Twilight clones.

canterlot while Celestia was reading Luna’s diary.



Celly! SHAME ON YOU!

Given Starlight Glimmer is an embodiment of order, she'd end up more like Accord than Discord.

The 'where am I?' cliche? Really?

Nice to read another chapter.

Somewhere there's a quadriplegic unicorn whose ticked off that them using their magic to get stuff done isn't considered 'honest work.'

You watched Centaur World didn't you? :-)

And Pinkie Pie is already chaos incarnate, so why should her chaos push back against her at all?

Great reading another chapter.

Of course, the voices aren't alien parasites, they're another side of the girls' psyches.

By the way, how many chapters will this story have?

Rarity is going to end up stealing one of the others boring orb and use it herself for her meeting if she has not already do it to Rainbow it's a feeling i am having for she is the one who has been having the hardeds times with Control

That was a good chapter.

Apple Bloom being in charge for a day WOULD be a good learning experience for her. Humble her, and get her some work and management experience.

Canvas couldn't make it because her train was delayed but her assistant could? How did that work?

"“Eh who cares about that job anyways, too much interaction with idiots,” The voice said"

RD also has a bajillion jobs at this point anyway. It's a wonder the mane six haven't suffered heart attacks or a stroke or a nervous break down.

This voice isn't anything new to Fluttershy. I imagine she's lived with a version of it for most of her life. This part of Fluttershy has always existed. Fluttershy's already had this drama. The voice isn't telling her anything she hasn't heard before.

Not to mention being the closest to Discord, she knows the truth of his nature, and now her nature, better than anyone.



A part of me almost imagines at the very end Starlight turning into an Alicorn of order just to balance out there being six more draconequi.

But that would shift the focus of the story way too much.

I wonder what kinda dreams the six will have. And how Luna will handle things. If she can at all. She's almost all powerful in the dream world.

Aw man short chapter, Oh well that's okay take your time

And the world is Chaos

That was a good chapter.

Thanks for continuing this at a steady place. But I can't help but feel that the other Ponyville residents are a generic blob for 99% of the story here, when they're the ones taking the blunt of the Mane Six's chaos magic.

Nice to see Celly comes to the logical but incorrect conclusion.

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Not sure how to fix the blob problem, should I edit to include them more?

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Not edit. Just include from now on how the individual residents of Ponyville are dealing with all this rather than just the mob.

tick tock tick tock.... give it about 1 and a half day

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Who can say for now? :rainbowwild:

In other news, I made a rockin' new blog post that enables you to choose my next story by vote, be sure to swing by. :pinkiehappy:

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i give it about half a day before it blows up

Meanwhile back at the Castle of Friendship, the single compacted sphere of chaos magic sat on a table.

“You have nothing to worry about,” Twilight said

The orb bulged and grew…

That's what you think, Sister

Glad you finally made it past the work week, 5 more chapters to go, keep it up!

That was a good chapter.

"the single compacted sphere of chaos magic sat on a table."

Where did that come from, or is that a big reveal that Twilight is sort of 'cheating' herself?

Thank you for having Mayor Mare have personality and actual dialogue her.

And thank you for NAMING Rainbow Dash's whether teammates.

And thank you for writing this chapter. I look forward to each of these chapters. Waiting for the ball to drop.

Greed prepared to fire another beam when a rock impacted the side of her head and she grunted in pain.

Look out, here comes Tom!

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well when it came to Rarity you were right damn, And it turns out i am right about who got the lows control of themself

Wow the girls are starting to lose it, I'm surprised Twilight hadn't noticed the containment sphere!

New chapter. COOL!
Extra long chapter! Even cooler!


So Chaos RD is a freakin' monster.

I'm surprised AJ didn't threaten to smash her own head in to silence the chaotic voice DARED insult AJ's family.

You think Shy's chaotic side would be nicer with the CMC... they're practically agents of chaos themselves, ask Ponyville's residents.

So Chaotic Shy TORMENTS Sweetie Belle... then for fun rewrites her memories so Silver Bell thinks it's the rest of Ponyville that's gone crazy saying he's supposed to be a filly.

Button Mash, "AHHHHHH!"

Why do I imagine Silver Bell hitting on Scootaloo, which freaks her out even more knowing Sweetie Belle isn't right in the head.

"Pinkie was throwing a party for Rumble, a young colt from Sweetie Belle's class. "

Thunderlane's younger brother.
He spent one episode starting his own Equalist movement.

celebrate the holiday that makes light of the fact your one year closer to death,

You mean the holiday that means you've told death 'screw you' for one more year.

“Umm…Ok! Let’s move onto the presents while Pinkie makes a new cake, mk?” Mr. Cake nervously said.

We saw just how fast brain-zapped Pinkie Pie could cook, all that energy and drive brought to a single laser focus.

Ironically, I think chaos and harmony are meant to exist in balance.

The most harmonious place in Equestria was Starlight's Our Town.

Also one of the comics even focused on Scootaloo and Rumble together learning the history of the one Earth Pony to ever join the Wonderbolts (using artificial wings).

Only one way to find out, And something tells me if this fails Twilight will be the last to lose her cool or if they vent their chaos magic chances are they might get crazy with it probably to the point where they can't stop and things get REALLY out of control, only three more chapters left. By the way what happens with Luna and Celestia?

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