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EMy Little Pony Friendship is Magic The Movie: What If?
MLP: FiM
MLP: Movie
Adventure
Drama
Thriller
(Takes place within my "What If?" rewrite series, familiarity with its volumes is recommended.) An alternate take on the 2017 movie exploring if scenes had played out differently, and some characters were written differently.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Spike
Other
Main 6
Tempest Shadow
SuperPinkBrony12 · 20k words · 10 1 · 187 views
TA Student Turned Princess
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
A young student opens his eyes on his first day of college... in the body of Princess Celestia herself.
Violence
Profanity
Human
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
FlightfulPone · 2.4k words · 176 3 · 1.8k views
EPassing The Badge
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Rainbow Dash is uncertain how she'll balance her life as Captain of the Wonderbolts. The former captain has a few words to say.
Rainbow Dash
Spitfire
6-D Pegasus · 2.5k words · 54 3 · 419 views
EShow Me The Stars
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
A young boy in the city dreams of seeing the stars through the smog. Far away, a certain Princess hears his dreams.
Human
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 69 0 · 549 views
EHer Majesty's Special Helpers
MLP Gen 5
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Follow Thunder Flap and Zoom Zephyrwing on a typical day in the service of Queen Haven: Overseeing security prep, smuggling Alphabittle in for a not so secret rendezvous, waiting for Zipp and Pipp to show up. All in a day's work.
Other
Queen Haven
Thunder
Zoom
SuperPinkBrony12 · 4.8k words · 19 0 · 284 views
EEclipse Awareness (Or Lack Thereof)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Following Twilight's coronation, Celestia and Luna organize a mutual solar eclipse to celebrate the end of their rule. Unfortunately, they forgot to let anypony know of this.
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 185 5 · 1.7k views
EDiamond at a Crossroads
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
(Takes place within the universe of "The Sitter with the Diamond Tiara" and its semi-sequel "A Dazzling School Daze".) Plagued by uncertainty about her future, Diamond Tiara visits Cheerilee in hopes the teacher can guide her one last time.
Diamond Tiara
Cheerilee
SuperPinkBrony12 · 2.9k words · 16 0 · 153 views
EThe Tale of Spike's Egg
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
(Collab with yodajax10. Takes place immediately after "Father Knows Beast".) Spike flies to Canterlot to ask Princess Celestia for answers about his past. Princess Celestia opts to tell Spike about how his egg ended up in her care.
Spike
Celestia
OC
Other
Main 6
SuperPinkBrony12 · 9.4k words · 25 0 · 684 views
EDON'T WRITE TO PRINCESS CELESTIA AT 3 AM (GONE WRONG!)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
The Cutie Mark Crusaders test the urban legend of writing to Princess Celestia at 3am. Nothing goes wrong.
Spike
Celestia
CMCs
6-D Pegasus · 2.7k words · 235 2 · 2.7k views
TThe Malevolent Multiversal Misadventures of Mare (April Fools 2024 Special)
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Comedy
Random
Once upon a time, there was a random pony in Ponyville. When a villain shows up, this overpowered Mary Sue of a character must venture bëÿönd Extria im order to find thr Generic MacGuffin. Only then will she have a chef of defeating this boring villa
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Bat Pony
Misty
Admiral Producer · 32k words · 17 2 · 140 views
EThe Long Wait
MLP: FiM
Sad
Celestia counts down the centuries until her sister's return.
Celestia
6-D Pegasus · 1.7k words · 105 1 · 1k views
TBatmare and Super Dragon: Worlds Collide
MLP: FiM
Drama
Thriller
(A crossover sequel to both "Batmare Triumphant" and "Dragon of Steel II".) The worlds of two costumed superheros: Batmare and Super Dragon, become intertwined. And the two heroes must adjust to their shared universe quickly.
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Applejack
Spike
Other
SuperPinkBrony12 · 17k words · 124 views
EBlues Clues: Happy Easter Blue!
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Slice of Life
Spike, Inferno, Rarity and Sunset all need to play Blues Clues to figure what Blue's favorite thing to do for Easter!
Crossover
Human
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Rarity (EqG)
Spike (EqG)
Big Imagination E · 5k words · 6 8 · 152 views
ERarity's Magical Boutique
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
(Based on "Rarity Catches a Cold" on YouTube by Magpiepony.) Rarity becomes sick while trying to finish up an order, and is forced to stop working. However, her illness causes parts of her workshop to magically come to life and work on the dress.
Rarity
SuperPinkBrony12 · 1.6k words · 15 0 · 149 views
TA Talk With A Bully
MLP: FiM
Mystery
Sad
Slice of Life
After the CMC come home with black eyes, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity take it upon themselves to find out what happened.
Narcotics
Violence
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Applejack
Rarity
Diamond Tiara
CMCs
Artist · 3.5k words · 22 20 · 530 views
EThe Sad Story of Spike
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
After the defeat of Opaline, Sunny pays another visit to the dragon lands. She has a few questions for Spike about how he became dragon lord and left Twilight all those years ago. Spike reluctantly agrees to explain everything he can.
Twilight
Spike
Sunny Starscout
Opaline
SuperPinkBrony12 · 4.9k words · 43 1 · 1.4k views
ETwilight Learns How to Ice-Skate
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Twilight wants to learn how to ice-skate to impress Flash.
Twilight
Pinkie
Other
Main 6
Flash Sentry
Heroic412227 · 4.3k words · 14 2 · 422 views
EHome is Where the Horn Is
MLP Gen 5
Sad
Slice of Life
Comet has a talk with his fellow unicorns Izzy and Misty about home as he tries to adjust to life in Maretime Bay. Izzy and Misty, in turn, share their thoughts based on their experiences.
Other
Izzy Moonbow
Alphabittle
Opaline
Misty
SuperPinkBrony12 · 5.2k words · 14 1 · 345 views
TA Cheesy Arrival
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
(A prequel/sequel to "A Cheesy Reunion". Rated Teen to be safe.) As Lil' Cheese and his parents await the birth of Maud Pie's foal, Lil' Cheese's mom and dad recall the events leading up to his birth, and all they had to endure as a result.
Pinkie
Other
Cheese Sandwich
Lil' Cheese
SuperPinkBrony12 · 3.8k words · 16 1 · 442 views
TOnline Bullying Is Not Cool
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
My name is Little Snow andI’m being bullied online because of my disability with ponies saying that I’m not actually disabled and that I’m just faking it, I keep telling them I am not, but they don’t listen to me, one day it gets so bad that.
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Apple Bloom
OC
Artist · 1.2k words · 442 views
EOne Day
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Sometimes, a dream can seem so close, yet so far.
Fiddlesticks
6-D Pegasus · 1.7k words · 33 0 · 319 views
EOld Mares Talking
MLP Gen 5
Sad
Slice of Life
Not long after the defeat of Opaline, Grandma Figgy comes to Maretime Bay to have a talk with Phyllis Cloverleaf. In particular, she wants to address Phyilis' seclusion and lack of involvement in the changes happening in Equestria.
Other
Phyllis
SuperPinkBrony12 · 2.1k words · 18 0 · 351 views
E601 Corn Neck Road
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Drama
This is a tale of a guy that lives on an island a few miles out of the state of Rhode Island. He meets an unexpected visitor from another world and comes to terms that there are aliens in the galaxy. Lets see his story shall we?
Alt. Universe
Human
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Lyra
Main 6
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH · 8.9k words · 9 6 · 318 views
ERoyal Canterlot Sleepover
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Not long after taking the throne, Twilight finds herself in need of company while she waits for her first friendship council meeting. So she decides to invite her old Canterlot friends over for a sleepover.
Twilight
Lyra
Other
Minuette
Moondancer
SuperPinkBrony12 · 3.7k words · 41 4 · 669 views

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