One Day

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Sometimes, a dream can seem so close, yet so far.

Cover Image from here.

The original speedwrite (in author's notes) was written for the Quills and Sofa's "Fiddlesticks" Speedwrite Contest, on Sep 9, 2023. This version was polished for publish since then.

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Love And What Came After

Love And What Came After #1 · January 31st · 1 · ·

I love plain pancakes and milk!

This is decently edited considering you, apparently, only did so in 15 minutes. I only detected a few errors while reading.

6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #2 · January 31st · 1 · ·

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oh, no! This published is fic is after I've polished it quite a bit. The original speedwrite written in the time frame is the link in the author notes! I doubt I can write this well with just that time haha^^"

Teardrops

Teardrops #3 · February 1st · 2 · ·

Interrupt: Siks-dea is sixty-ing again.

ThePeer

ThePeer #4 · February 1st · 2 · ·

God, this is so fucking depressing.

Maybe... one day. She'll achieve her dreams. I really hope she does, this doesn't have a tragedy tag after all.

Rewan Demontay

Rewan Demontay #5 · February 4th · 1 · ·

Dreams, so close and so far, a hurtful yet helpful reminder of us all.

RB_

RB_ #6 · February 8th · 1 · ·

This is a very grounded, non-rose-tinted look at what it can mean to have a dream you haven’t fulfilled. And yet I don’t find it depressing, because Fiddlesticks hasn’t given up on hers, and that makes me not want to give up on mine, either.

Thank you for a good fic.

fluffytailmofu

fluffytailmofu #7 · February 9th · 1 · ·

Wow. Okay, this got a definite thumbs up from me. The last paragraph was... well, not quite a wham 'line', but a wham moment, which made every other part of the fic come together beautifully.

Daelyx Len Auphydas

Daelyx Len Auphydas #8 · 6 days ago · 1 · ·

At least she can still play for her family. Someponies dont even get that luxury. And at least they are keeping their chin up.

its rough. But there's still hope.

Jymbroni

Jymbroni #9 · 6 days ago · 1 · ·

I actually really enjoyed this a lot. It takes a concept that really isn’t explored that much in this fandom where not all dreams come true in a slice of life format. It adds to the personal touch and tugs at the heartstrings because we all have felt what Fiddlesticks is going through. Bravo! 👏

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