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Twilight finds a brick in her shower.




Now with an audio reading by Mystery Pony Fiction! Give it a listen HERE!



Yes, I intentionally misaligned the cover art. Why? Because I can, and I will.

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Very good, I g8ve it a *metal pipe noise* out of ten.

This was silly. i love it!
Just a fun little story :twilightsmile:

"Let's see what secret mysteries our sisters have been reading about that they don't want us to find out."

Oh, dear 🤣. This should be fun.
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:facehoof:

They are going to need therapy after those magazines.

Twilight and Spike watched in silent confusion as she proceeded to casually trot out the bathroom and down the library's stairs to the entrance as if spontaneously manifesting oneself in somepony else's bathroom was a normal day-to-day occurrence, all the while humming one of her many joyous tunes.

The tune in question was the theme tune to Father Ted, the episode being Speed 3? :pinkiehappy:

Which having read to the end, fits in far more ways than first expected. Especially when Twilight finds out. :trixieshiftright:

This great! Thanks!

In "Canterlot's Hottest" there were literally just Celestia, looking judgingly
That was actually dystopian fic

jk, i smiled on this one!

"Yes, I intentionally misaligned the cover art. Why? Because I can, and I will."
YOU ARE AN EVIL PERSON:flutterrage:

I honestly was expecting a "dropped a brick" story with Twilight because she stressed out too much. Still funny, don't get me wrong. Twilight’s naivety was quite humorous.

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"Alright, kid! You wanna throw bricks!?"

This was great, the beginning also makes me think of Anon breaks octavia's shower XD

... why does applejack need a large store of fake bricks?

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I mean, where else would she hide the bodies?

I saw the title of this fic and I thought to myself, "I mean now I have to read this." Very glad I did, lol

This is a pretty funny story. I like how Twilight stills has to closely examine an inanimate brick.

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Feed 'em to her pigs. Pigs'll eat anything. :pinkiecrazy:

I honestly expected Spike to have been using it for a loofah

:moustache: What a lame magazine ...
:unsuresweetie: Even Play Colt has better articles

:unsuresweetie::moustache: RARITY!

:facehoof::raritystarry: I have the strangest feeling

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If it's hard to fit 1 magazine in there, you're not hiding a whole body inside. Drugs on the other hoof...

Twilight blinked in surprise. The brick did not return the gesture.

How inconsiderate!

Twilight heard Spike let out a quiet gasp, and she quickly turned to face him, letting her catch the quickest flash of recognition within his emerald eyes before they darted up to meet hers. "Uh, why is there a brick in your shower?"

I see...

Twilight and Spike watched in silent confusion as she proceeded to casually trot out the bathroom and down the library's stairs to the entrance as if spontaneously manifesting oneself in somepony else's bathroom was a normal day-to-day occurrence, all the while humming one of her many joyous tunes.

:pinkiehappy:: "Well, it is completely normal."
:pinkiecrazy:: "Isn't it?!"

"Yeah, it was me, sorry Twilight. I just wanted to see if I could melt a brick with my flames, but it caught on fire so I panicked and used your shower to put it out."

At least he didn't accidentally teleport the brick to Princess Celestia.
Things he sends to her tend to manifest above her head , after all
...

"Let's see what secret mysteries our sisters have been reading about that they don't want us to find out."


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.


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:trollestia: At least it wasn't a Lego brick

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Bought them thinking they were actual bricks?

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That depends on how small the pieces are. :pinkiecrazy:

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I mean, at that point you've already gotten rid of the bodies

There is a brick in her shower.

That’s cute.
In a messed up kind of way.
:rainbowlaugh: :moustache::unsuresweetie:

You know, a while ago I came up with the idea to hide something inside of a fake brick, and they all laughed at me.
I feel so vindicated right now.

Moral of the story: Never trust a brick.

Ah, "Canterlots' Hottest Crossbuns and Scones"! I eagerly await my weekly issue for Saturday afternoon teatime! *Alondro adjusts monocle and snorts snootily*

Canterlot's Hottest:

Spicy Cuisines?

Fashion Trends?

Hot Spring Spa Treatments?

Days of this Upcoming Summer as Forecast by the Cloudsdale Weather Bureau?

What, oh what, could it possibly be?!

Sweetie and Spike stepped back to admire their spoils. Two magazines, one with an uncountable amount of creases all over it, rested on the floor of the clubhouse. On the top of both read in bold, stylish font: " Canterlot's Hottest ".

Uh Oh...

There is nothing bad in there?... Right?!
:twilightoops:

Don't know why Applejack has so many of these, but if you ever need one in the future, she's your best bet.

:pinkiehappy:Apple jack Why did you hide the white sugar?

What a funny story! It is just like the official episode. I only hope that Canterlot's Hottest is not Canterlot's Horniest...

I've read this aloud for the audiobook version to come soon.

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Dougal meeting Pinkie Pie would be amazing.

This is definitely a story that I didn't expect, but I'm glad exists. Super fun premise and totally with in character for all the participating parties, plus I would enjoy seeing there reactions after opening that magazine up. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh, and congrats on the audio reading! I listened to that before heading over to leave a comment.

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Added your audio reading in the description! Thanks again! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, although it seems to link to whatever you were watching last on youtube, something playing an instrument.

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I just discovered this trying to share the reading with someone oh my God xD I fixed it now

A nice little simple story, characters act themselves, description of objects, scenes and environment are good for creating images in ones head, and the interesting premise and story are nice. Wasn’t expecting that little turn of events at the end tho. Overall a decent read.

Definitely will read the sequel

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It has nothing to do with the story or your comment, but whenever I read the word 'loofah' I think of that one scene from a movie for at least a moment.

"The ninjas failed and failure is not an option. If they ever show their faces here, you know what to do."
"Yes. Tell them to wash with a loofah sponge."

nah man, a brick in someone's shower with absolutely no reason behind it whatsoever is
infinitely more hilarious

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