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6-D Pegasus


Me or my OC?

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Celestia talks to Luna after she sends Twilight a living pony as a Hearth's Warming gift. Things only go downhill from there.

Written for MagnetBolt for Jinglemas 2023!

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Nothing is better than a combination of quirky Princess Luna and wholesome Luna, with a dash of desperate Twilight, topped with a slight bit of character-centric worldbuilding. Lovely job, Sixdy!

Celestia smacked face with a hoof. "Oh for the love of me..."

Totally reminds me of this.


It's not like I'm going to be living in some massive castle right next to Ponyville when I've already got this nice and cozy library smack in the middle of town.

Tirek:
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This was a very funny story. Luna definitely needs to work on her gift-giving skills :rainbowlaugh:

great story

Little could prepare Twilight for Luna's next gift: an arranged marriage with Prince Blueblood.

Aww, what a sweet ending! Smart thinking by Luna there, that's a fantastic gift for early-season, pre-alicorn Twilight. The comedic moments earlier in the chapter were pretty funny, too! Poor Custard Swirl was probably a bit confused when she received Luna's royal-canterlot-voice orders :rainbowlaugh:

And the little backstory of Celestia's hearths warming gift to Luna when they were younger was quite touching.

I would've thought a copy of the Ponype Scriptures would be appropriate for Twilight, back before half my library was confiscated.

Intricate, in character, and appropriately wholesome :twilightsmile:
A delightful read!

Twilight's letters were top notch comedy. I enjoyed this wholesome, easy to digest read very much!

I didn't know you posted on here :)

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What would those be?
I ask because on of my older story ideas was some of the more narrative portions of God's Word to <insert name of Pony dimension here>.

What an absolutely brilliant ride between laugh out loud comedy and a massive case of feelings. 10/10, ya made me laugh and sniffle in a single chapter.

This was so cute oh my God

I fuckin love Luna. Congrats on getting featured, 6-D!!!!!!!!

A few grammatical errors, btu a wonderful story.
I love it.

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"You *said* non-sentient!"

"I also said a *gift*, not a punishment."

"True."

"Luna, I've literally explained all of this to you already!"
Luna crossed her hooves, looking away with a pout. "When?"
"Just two months ago!"
"... morning?"
Celestia blinked. "I... think so?"
"...yeah, I was probably half asleep. You know very well that I'm not a morning pony."
Celestia groaned in annoyance, burying her head in her hooves. "Lunaaaaaaaaaaaa."

Totally relatable.

"You know what, if a sack of gems won't cut it, maybe a sack of bits wil-"

At least it's getting better...

"There were no other ponies with a shade of blue even close to yours, and I would catch you countless times as a filly just staring at your own fur.
Luna blushed and looked away sheepishly. "It was... the closest I could get to resembling the true night."

Maybe that's why she has her mane and tail like the night sky.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.


Good to see everything worked out in the end.
And maybe give the poor maid a raise...

I can see Luna giving Twilight a servant as a heartwarming gift.

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The vid: :rainbowlaugh: And so relatable!
Another video that appeared relating to Twilight as a drunk Twilight coming onto Anon was absolutely hilarious!

Delightfully awkward Luna, comedically nervous Twilight, and a heartfelt message all at once? Yeah, this one's definitely a fic worth remembering.

When Luna said fine no living ponies I was expecting the next letter to mention a book of necromancy and a pile of random pony bones

Okay, this was sweet, and cute, and funny all in one package. Bravo, well done!

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:twilightsmile: trying to balance the silliness and heart was a challenge but I'm glad it worked out in the end!

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A ponified version of the Ponape Scriptures. It's not what you had in mind. Less piety, more tentacles.
Handy reference guide to books you should not read out loud.

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Ah, I see.
Thank you for the information!

What an amazing story! Honestly this could be an actual episode if it was animated. Very nice job!

This story was hilarious, I love it.

And to Celestia, the Gift of Schadenfreude.

the glory of the snow flower was a very smart idea on your part.

Beautiful story! 100/10 and two faves for you :twilightsmile:

It's a cute story, could've been an episode in the show. I enjoyed reading it a lot ...

but pls fix those three instances of 'a millennia'.
It was annoying 15 years ago, in a story from 2023 it feels like trolling.

The warm fuzzies at the end, absolutely wonderful work 6-D.

You nailed it right on the head all the reasons I love Luna so much!

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