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I try to make my criticism helfull AND FUNNY if i can.
It as a cool story bro.

Oh, hey there again. For some reason I thought you had left comments on sounds cool way back when I first started. Guess I'd have to check on which one that actually was. But I do remember it gave me the impression of you as a tough but fair critic. It's crazy to me that my first, and obviously most flawed, story would get a fav from you. But both your criticism and praise is always welcome. Thanks so much for the fav on sounds cool

Thank you for your interest in my story, So Many Wonders!

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Iʼd appreciate it if you could leave a comment on the story itself.

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it is well written, i enjoyed reading it, it is deserved.