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Penalt


Dreams are where limits die.

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Oct
21st
2022

State of the Pen · 1:46am Oct 21st, 2022

It's been 10 days since my brother died and 6 since we laid him to rest at the foot of a willow tree near a shady stream. I find myself both functional and numb. I can act, react, and do things, but anything beyond the basics is like trying to push fog with your hands. Something happens but not much. I find myself staring at a computer screen and feeling... nothing.

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No worries. What really impressed me in your story was the use of language. Anytime someone can stretch vocabulary and keep to a particular writing style it impresses the heck out if me.

Hey thanks for the praise for ISBFM! Looking back I had a lot of fun writing the story but I didn't think it was worthy of that kind of title. Glad you enjoyed it though. :pinkiesmile:

It's been a while since we last talked, but I might have a new idea if you're not too busy.

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