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I have an idea for a fanfiction and I would like to discuss it. But I'm also not looking for whether it's been done before. I just want to discuss this idea I have in my head. Should I create my own thread for this idea or just join an already existing one? I just want to casually talk about it.

The author deleted the story all together it looks like. Just checked his page, and it's not even listed there.

Well Hi people and ponys of the writers group I am here now so yay for me. I am a YouTuber if you didn't know and I make animations and gameplays and remix mashup music on my channel. I like to edit videos and make animations and write that's why I joined this amazing website to write an amazing story. And I'm so happy to be here! :D

There was this thread titled ‘Why Trixie is the most Arrogant and Unbearable Character’ by TheElementsOfHarmony2475. It’s not here anymore. Did you guys delete it? Or did the user himself do that? If you did, then thank you. It turned into a real flame war.

I just got rickrolled

Can someone help me correct this story
It won't get accepted so how can I make it acceptable

greetings, I asked a friend to help turn my idea for a story into reality but they are to busy with their own stories and directed me to this group. I'm not sure if anything will come of it but I'd thought I would give it a try. to any willing to help turn this dream into reality because I am a bad writer, below is what I came up with for a story its not much I know this but I get moments of inspiration and then it fades and if you do end up trying to turn this into a full story please message me that you are doing so and letting me know where to find it. I call it "offspring of dark magic and the moon" but feel free to change it.

"""Long ago When King sombra could feel love he and princess Luna found comfort and love during a time of great sorrow and despair, even when their family’s objected and forbid them from being together.
One night sombra told Luna he was going on a long journey to find the power and strength to protect her and their love and that night fearing they may never see each other ever again made sweet passionate love all through the night. (insert sex scenes)
~Time skip 3 years~
Sombra now has mastered dark magic and has started a crusade against the crystal empire.
Meanwhile in Canterlot princess Luna and worries about her unborn child for it had been 3 years since being pregnant and even though she knew it was a magical impregnation Luna never thought it would last this long. Luna also grew increasingly more concerned about the warlord she has heard about from her sister Celestia. Ever since Celestia heard about her sister unborn child and who the father was she did not have the heart to tell Luna who the warlord was, because she thought such information would crush her poor sister heart.

~time gap 6 months~

Celestia called a meeting with king sombra, who at this point has gained control and rule over the crystal empire. Sombra arrives and demands to know why he was summoned here, to which Celestia replied “I have called you here to see if you will return cadence and shining armor to us?” sombra replies “Why should I give them to you? By right of conquest I own them as the spoils of war, they are mine to do as I please. Now I have a lot to do today so if that’s all I will be leaving now.”
Enraged and panicking now overly concerned that she may have just failed and condemned the prisoners of war to a fate worse than death Celestia yells at sombra in a panicked and angered voice “you cannot own the lives of ponies, you will let them return to me unharmed” sombra replies “Oh, and what if I refuse to do so? Are you going to declare war on me?” Celestia sunk back on her seat knowing declaring all out war with another kingdom over two ponies would make her look like a selfish tyrant. So in a moment of desperation and anger she shouts “what about a trade?!” to this sombra raises an eyebrow and says “what could you possibly have that I want?” Celestia responds “Your soon to be son. (sombra's eye grow wide) the trade is simple your son for cadence and shining armor. What say you king sombra!!?” sombra grows very angry at his kin being threatened and shouts “you dare use my son as a bargaining chip feel now my dark wrath you heartless bitch!” and thus starts a battle between king sombra and Princess Celestia. (insert gory battle sense) meanwhile Luna gives birth a male alicorn with a horn like sombra’s and a main like Luna but without the stars and fur translucent and pale like the moon its self. Luna comes y the battle and see her sister battling her lover, who she sees a great darkness throughout his heart. Starting to believe their child would herald the dark days anew she shouts “If this is the true nature in your heart and heritage then I will not allow your son to usher in the dark ages!” as Luna runs off, sombra’s eye widen and he gasps realizing what she meant, charges after her leaving a very wounded Celestia behind. Sombra arrives to see his son about to be struck down by the very mare who gave birth to him and sombra shouts an eldritch spell of sacrifice and protection. In doing so sombra destroys himself to protect his heir."""

It sounds like a great idea, I'd be interested. I'm actually trying the same thing. :scootangel:

24-60 hours give or take.

After a couple stories the admins might file you under the 'safe' heading (which will allow auto publishing) knowing that you do not publish incorrectly or inappropriate stuff.

*not to be confused with adult content, only that the stories show you understand what you are doing and how to use the site.

umm i have a question, how long does it take for your story to be published? i dont know if i'm doing it right

I wanna write a story about mlp and Skyrim but I wanna know if people would actually like the idea or not. Thoughts anyone? Also a proofreader/editor would be nice as well. Thank you for the time

Hey I have a question, I just wrote my fanfic for the first time and I just want to know how long does it take for it to be approved once submitted. Also I don't exactly know how to let someone proofread my work (is proofreading only possible once published or does it have something to do with the password that I could provide for the early access of the story). Thanks

Hey there, I need your guys help. I’m trying to find a fanfic, but I can’t find it. I don’t remember what it was called, but I remember what the story was about. It’s about Twilight making a machine to allow the Mane 6 to see different universes(or dimensions) of themselves. Rainbow Dash volunteers to see different versions of herself and each universe they see shows Rainbow Dash shipped with each member of the Mane 6(they even see the Cupcakes universe). If anyone knows the story I’m talking about and knows the title, let me know.

This is the story of a man named "Stanley". Stanley worked for a company in a big building where he was Employee #427.

Employee #427's job was simple: he sat at his desk in Room 427 and he pushed buttons on a keyboard.

Orders came to him through a monitor on his desk telling him what buttons to push, how long to push them, and in what order.

This is what Employee #427 did every day of every month of every year, and although others may have considered it soul rending,

Stanley relished every moment that the orders came in, as though he had been made exactly for this job.

And Stanley was happy.

And then one day, something very peculiar happened.

Something that would forever change Stanley;

something he would never quite forget.

He had been at his desk for nearly an hour when he had realized not one single order had arrived on the monitor for him to follow.

No one had shown up to give him instructions, call a meeting, or even say 'hi'. Never in all his years at the company had this happened, this complete isolation.

Something was very clearly wrong. Shocked, frozen solid, Stanley found himself unable to move for the longest time.

But as he came to his wits and regained his senses, he got up from his desk and stepped out of his office.

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hello there. im new and i wondering if someone would be kind enough to proof read my stories for free?
i'm very bad at spelling and stuff anf i don't even know how to LET you read it. thank you very much if you can.. please message me.

Hey how do I post my story I think i did everything correctly but, the story isn't being posted can anyone help please PM me or just tell me here

Hey so is it okay if I ask for help finding a very specific story here?

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