This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work. And not just those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author excactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...
First stop for you should be INTRO THREAD so you can introduce yourselves.
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I think I'll like this group I really like to hear what people/ponies think of my stories and are always in for some advice.
Pb1861. Just writing stories and hoping to learn a lot
Hallo, Brothas. My names Confusion and I write a story that's an emotional rollercoaster. It's based around my some earth pony that just won't die, and has a pretty in-depth past with a bit of character development. It's not doing too bad, but i'm not really getting feedback.
At all, really.
I'd like for at least a couple people to tell me the parts that I did well in as the chapters go up and the story gets revealed, so help me out if you feel like it HOMESLICE.
Eh... fair warning, it's not exactly family friendly. Pretty gory, so viewers beware, you're in for a scare!
If youre into adventure, HIE, crazy scientists, cute ponies and plutonium-238, then check out my silly story.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/408599/assistance
Gimme your honest opinion. I have a few dislikes, but no constructive criticism so far...
But do at least read the first 2 chapters ^.^
*sigh* Okay, why not?
Huh...
Yo, the name's BeastPone V2, wassup?
Lo-Fi, and Lewd connoisseur, and all around trashman
Intro threads or any threads for that matter are in forums but I'd like to keep this interesting tradition new people of this group (including me) are keeping up so I'd like to play along too. My name is Crimson Blade79, Void God, part time fanfic writer, gamer, movie watcher, man of many faces, man of many names, contribute to just about every fandom or at least the major ones, and a pretty nice and intelligent guy
Hey My name is Badwolf231 and I am a wolf of many tricks. but one of them is sadly not getting noticed so I would like just one comment on my story.
Hi all, just joined.
I try to be critical without being offensive, but I have a zero-tolerance policy for hurtful or hateful trolling. I write about some topics that many aren't really interested in, so I'm hoping said topics can gain interest from the fandom through my stories.
Thanks and I'll try to look through the stories submitted to this group and give occasional feedback.
Hello, everyone.
My name is Jade Dawn. I'm an aspiring author/screenwriter, fanfic writer, and brony. Among a few other things outside of MLP. I'm a big fan of HiE, sci-fi, adventure, and stories that stretch the boundaries of imagination.
I especially value comments, as it shows me that people actually look at my work and helps me gauge their responses to my stories. Also, I just generally like discussing things around the fandom on this site.
Your opinions, comments, and/or upvotes are appreciated.
With regards,
Jade Dawn
Hello. I'm 6&7, and I write words. What sort of words, you may ask? Horse words. Also Dr. Who words, sometimes. Mostly long, overflowing words. Sometimes, I write funny words, and sometimes I write words that are meant to be humor-funny but end up being weird-funny. It mostly works, probably, but I can't be certain on grounds that I need more feedback.
Hi.
I'm here.
I write things.
I make people cringe.
I also enjoy bashing skulls.
Hey! Im Night Pony. Im really bad at writing, but i love comments
hey,,, every guys here, I'm the new kid on the block, as you can clearly see. I got a story too but i got no advertising, so go check it out if you so desire, I mean heck, I dunno.
Give me some feedback, am I too ambiguous or too reliant on purple explanations?
please and thank you
please and thank you are really magic words
always remember that
Hi! I'm Princess Estrella. I'm new to writing fanfics but I've gotten much better at it since I first started.
Hello all. I write a story called the Silent Saviors and I would really appreciate any comments that you all could give. I have really only had one commenter who provided good criticism of the story.
Anything would be appreciated.
Thank you.
Hey, guys. I just had my story Dino Saurian Rex, and it's about Queen Chrysalis and her Changelings that turned out to be aliens attacking Earth and Equestria, and six teenagers including a young paleontologist and the Mane 6 uses friendship and dinosaur morphing powers to stop the invasion. But my story has 35 dislikes and 33 likes, but all I wish is for people to actually give it a chance! I'm still new to the whole writing fanfiction stuff last January, and would love if you told me what you thought of it in the comments, instead of disliking it. (Reminder: never reply in a negative way because you can't force someone not to proofread my story!)
Alright big boys the names WeightyUncle (long story) and I've finally plucked up the courage to actually publish my first fic! (Hopefully more coming soon.) Any and all criticism would be welcome, cheers guys!
Hey everyone! I'm QuantumKitten. Decided to get involved in writing short stories etc and looking for some feedback. Please let me know what you think of them!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409223/the-feathered-song