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This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work. And not just those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author excactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...
First stop for you should be INTRO THREAD so you can introduce yourselves.
Hey every one! I'm Vapor Wave.
I'm here for feed back on my work, the first chapter is still being written but I would love to see people enjoying my story that I put my heart and soul into
hello all
Hello, I'm Garfield23.....I'm not sure what to say. I want feedback on a lot of my work. I'm trying to improve but without feedback...it's not easy to know what I'm doing right and wrong in terms of story. I'm going to look through the folders and see what stories I can read to offer feedback to. If I could name one story of mine I really want feedback on it's my Prince of Silence story since I've been working on it for so long and I want it to do well.
I'd love to have a bit of feedback on my Spike Rule 63 story Cold Scales
I'm rusty so I would love to remember how to improve.
Hey readers! I'm not exactly new to Fimifciton, but this is the first story I'm trying that has actual effort put in. It's a Human in Equestria, so if you don't like the genre, I'd recommend just try the first chapter, or ignore it. I'm really looking for feedback on the first four chapters, just to see if I'm going in the right direction. There's only so much a like can tell you about what the reader thinks
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/355623/the-element-of-hope
Thank you very much!
Hi I'm new to the site and the fandom. i was hoping that someone could comment on my story. i want to know how well it holds up since it's the first one i'm making specifically the fight scene in chapter 1. i'd like to know how it holds up
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/379640/tales-of-paradise
thanks in advance.😄
CHAPTER UPDATE: New chapter released for Hunter's Path. For those who haven't read it, it's just begun and shouldn't be hard to catch up.
hi everypony. I wrote Daughter of the night. I was wandering what everypony thought about it. its my first story. it had negative likes and I have no idea why. Please read it and let me know what you think. Thanks
Here can you comment on mine: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381347/1/a-heart-felt-moment/a-heart-felt-moment
Hi I would like to get some feedback on my story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370068/blood-and-honour.
Hey everyone.
Its be greatly appreciated for any feedback on my story. Ive had precious feedback at all and itd be amazing if i could see what people are thinking of it. thanks
Hello. This is an into post. I'm just a person who writes for fun, and wants to here what people think of my work (just please be civil
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Hello. I am Luke, and writing is my passion.
I love to write, and I spend most of my day trying to brainstorm ways to make my work better. My best story is "The Guardian From Afar", and I made a recent sequel called "The Guardian From Afar 2: Hateful Vengeance." I want to know how I can make these stories better, and I am willing to listen to any advice people have to offer.
I need someone to skim through my newest addition of shit stores called The Assassination of Princess Celestia. I just need your overall opinion, I already know that my grammar isn’t great but I got that covered by joining the editors group. All I need is for someone to check and see if the premise is interesting and eye-catching, and if you’d like to see more
Hello everyone. I’m a new writer, and a new member. And i would like some feedback about my first story. If their any flaws or things that simply bothers you when you read it, please tell me, it will be very appreciate it
Hello, Bonjour, Hola, Konnichiwa, Hey.
I've been on this site for around half a year now, and I'm doing decent, but I do have one story (my only complete one, too) that I would like some feedback on.
Simply A Figment
It's slightly sad (in my opinion, anyways.), so if that's not your cup of tea, then you might not want to read it... :I
Hello.
I am a new writer who feels new to the FiMFanfiction community despite having been in and out of the Brony Fandom as a whole for four years or so. I'm writing this Greeting Comment without assurance anyone will see it, as sadly, I know there are so many people wanting to be noticed for their writing and their efforts to this community as a whole.
In case anyone should see this, I would like to foremost declare that I have a very BIG idea that I've worked on for the four years I've been in the Brony Fandom. I often brag about it, but because I have not done the best job of networking with people efficiently to build a group of friends who are interested in helping me make my idea a reality, I'm having to start from square one again and to re-prepose the idea to more people, as well as promote the writing I've already made for it, which stands at three chapters.
The idea is thusly:
Imagine there is a place, where every piece of fiction (fan-fiction), relating to "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic", goes to, after they end.
A place where every story, no matter how the story is told, exists beyond the ending of that story, and then co-exists with every other story within the Brony Fandom.
It would then be the job of the characters within those stories, primarily the differing versions of the Mane Six, to interact with the characters of every other fan-fiction, to form a livable, working society, that is primarily composed of ponies with the same names, identities, and near-memories as one another. Namely, these ponies would be living together with other "copies" of themselves.
This place, for it's grand magnitude, would be called, "The After" because it is the Afterlife of Fiction, and cannot be summed up in any other universal term.
So When new "Arrivals", (ponies who've just had their story end) show up into The After, it would be the duty of ponies already within The After to take care of these ponies/creatures the same way "Doctors" do, in order to explain to them what is going on, which must result in them basically telling those new Arrivals that their whole life was fictional, created by people like us who love the show, "My Little Pony" so much. Then, to add a twist, not only are these ponies meeting counter-versions of themselves, but also, we also exist within The After. This creates a literary element of what it means for creations to meet their own creators, and what tension this causes between them.
Now this hasn't been the first time I've talked about this idea. As of now, I am contacting eight other FiMFiction groups to shoot the same idea by them. Also, as this is the "I Just Want A Comment" group, I would very much appreciate if anyone would be willing to read the Fan-Fic I have already posted, entitled, as you might guess, "The After" by Pvt_Muffins (I intend to change my name soon though).
General comments to the idea would also be very much appreciated, thank you, and I wish the best and am incredibly happy to be here.
hello everypony,
I would love to have some feedback on my story Chapter 6 is a WIP and just a little preview of whats going to happen
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147741/a-dark-secret
well hope you enjoy reading it, and oh yeah don't mind grammar and spelling errors. English is not my main speaking so it's hard to do for me to type stuff
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCGVxxiLN59IpWs_v-9z8FOQ Tell me what you think maybe subscribe I need all the help I can, don't worry we have ponys and cookies, and ponies holding cookies
Now that my story has gotten approved, here it is: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/335318/bit-trip-equestria