This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work.
And not those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author exactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...
My first attempt on a somewhat long story. I don’t mind the dislikes, I wasn’t expecting it to be on Monochromatic’s level or anything, but I at least want to know what’s wrong with it, if anyone had time to check it out. It’s called “A few sips couldn’t hurt.”
I figured this group would be a good place to get some input on the quality of my fic, Echoes of Past Mistakes. If anyone wants to take a look, it's my most recent story.
New member! I would love some feedback on my horror story! But it's alright if you don't have time to read it. I'll still continue to add more chapters :) It's A Inky Encounter
When an ancient magical calamity brings Saddle Arabians to Canterlot, it is up to Prince Blueblood to face the web of intrigue, amidst the clash of cultures, and his own shortcomings. Can he rise to the challenge or be undone by his own pride?
New writer here! I was just wondering if i could get some feedback on The Elohim's Lament to see if I'm going in the right direction. It only has four chapters and I'm kind of conflicted on these chapters.
Hi I'm discord Jedi knight... I wish I knew this group existed when I first joined 😄. I like feed back it helps to improve my writing, wether is negative or positive I want some true criticism on my work. The real thing I really want is criticism on my story telling...
I know I have spelling issues and I am always working on improving but I am looking for any thing on my work.
Especially my latest fan fic. My big project blood of a chimera. Here's a link and I will add it to the stories section as well.
Hello, it's been a while since I've been active in this site. Long story short I made a blog post about my resume and revamping my only story here from years ago. I'm haft way done on republish it again but first, I needed to gather audience again. Since Facebook pages is no longer post reach free it's been difficult until now.
I don't usually like to do this but I've spent a bit of hours working on this video teaser on youtube before my republish as I made another blog post. Its not much and it should, better keep it vague.
Hey guys, I'm new to this site and to writing stories in general. I would love some feedback on my first work, to know if I'm going in the right direction. The story is called A friendship magic conundrum. Thanks!
I want someone to read my story of mare loving and tell me what they think about the different scenes.
My first attempt on a somewhat long story. I don’t mind the dislikes, I wasn’t expecting it to be on Monochromatic’s level or anything, but I at least want to know what’s wrong with it, if anyone had time to check it out. It’s called “A few sips couldn’t hurt.”
I figured this group would be a good place to get some input on the quality of my fic, Echoes of Past Mistakes. If anyone wants to take a look, it's my most recent story.
New member! I would love some feedback on my horror story! But it's alright if you don't have time to read it. I'll still continue to add more chapters :) It's A Inky Encounter
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Yeah I got a Chanel now, but o do write plenty of fan fics on this site, feel free to check them haha, and hello.
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Huh. I stumbled upon some of your youtube stuff. Fancy meeting you here too.
Hopefully this is formatted right, haven’t posted here before
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425018/descent
Hi!
I would appreciate some feedback on my 1st meagre attempt at writing.
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Slice of Life
When an ancient magical calamity brings Saddle Arabians to Canterlot, it is up to Prince Blueblood to face the web of intrigue, amidst the clash of cultures, and his own shortcomings. Can he rise to the challenge or be undone by his own pride?Does my story qualify as NSFW? it is already in there but I can remove it if it is.
Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!
- MLP: FiM
- Slice of Life
- Thriller
- Tragedy
Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!Thank you for reading friends!
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feel free to make a new forum post!
New member here. Would love some feedback on my story
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Ok
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ideally, yeah, put it in the NSFW folder.
New writer here! I was just wondering if i could get some feedback on The Elohim's Lament to see if I'm going in the right direction. It only has four chapters and I'm kind of conflicted on these chapters.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548953/the-elohims-lament
Here's the link for it
If a story has [some] clop and is mature rated, is it essential to put it in the NSFW folder or is it ok to put it in the main?
Hello, I would like some feedback on my story Shifted Crusaders. I have not received feedback on it for a while and just published a new chapter.
Hi I'm discord Jedi knight... I wish I knew this group existed when I first joined 😄. I like feed back it helps to improve my writing, wether is negative or positive I want some true criticism on my work. The real thing I really want is criticism on my story telling...
I know I have spelling issues and I am always working on improving but I am looking for any thing on my work.
Especially my latest fan fic. My big project blood of a chimera. Here's a link and I will add it to the stories section as well.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/534534/blood-of-the-chimera
- MLP: FiM
- Drama
- Sad
- Slice of Life
A Pony from Mitaly moves to Ponyville and changes everything.Hello, it's been a while since I've been active in this site. Long story short I made a blog post about my resume and revamping my only story here from years ago. I'm haft way done on republish it again but first, I needed to gather audience again. Since Facebook pages is no longer post reach free it's been difficult until now.
I don't usually like to do this but I've spent a bit of hours working on this video teaser on youtube before my republish as I made another blog post. Its not much and it should, better keep it vague.
Anyway, this here it is hope you like it.
Hey guys, I'm new to this site and to writing stories in general. I would love some feedback on my first work, to know if I'm going in the right direction.
The story is called A friendship magic conundrum.
Thanks!