I Just Want A Comment 2,723 members · 10,368 stories

This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work. And not just those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author excactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...

First stop for you should be INTRO THREAD so you can introduce yourselves.

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Sup. SuperSaiyanD here. You can call me SSD or D for short. I'm a lover of good MLP crossovers, and have had one in the works for years now that I've finally published. I hope to please with my work, and am open to feedback and suggestions. Thanks and have a nice day. 👍

Hey guys, name is Captain Morgan and I've been writing since October on my first story, (WWC) World War Changeling which is about a group of human survivors, living in a world where Chrysalis and a few Changelings who didn't betray her who take over America. The survivors run into Twilight, Celestia, Luna and company and join together to overthrow Chrysalis, once and for all. Right now my story has one like and for some reason, 6 dislikes, but all I wish is for people to actually give it a chance! I'm still new to the whole writing fanfiction stuff, and would love if you told me what you thought of it in the comments, instead of disliking it. Thank you for your time.

Hi everypony.
I'm Scarlet Thorn. I'm a Pegasus from Ponyville, who is trying to warn you all of a terrifying threat!
I can't tell you about it directly, but thanks to some help from Discord I can share my story with beings from another universe.
Please! Equestria needs your help!
Read about my friends and I's lives.
I have to go, the portal is closing!

Hello
i need comments and feedback so i can improve my story

This comment section is a mess of beggars.

Hello
My name is nicojaller, one of my biggest passion in life is writing, especially fanfictions, and it occured that I really MLP, I post the stories I make there. My stories often features humans, I know that a lot of people don't like them, so I try to make them as interesting as possible. I write when I have time, but the time I like the most when I post them is getting comments, to know on what improve or what I have done well.

It's with joy and optimism that I join this group ! ^^

Hi everyone
Just checking in for a chance to gain some feedback and constructive criticism on my story. Over 75k words now but generally little feedback.
Would love any one to give it a read
thanks

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Vylet Pony's work is quite splendid. Just thought I'd add.

Hi, where's the intro thread?

Little jab against the front page aside (fix dat link bro), I'm working on a Displaced fic. I wish for solid, constructive criticism of how to write certain things (how a enemy nation sees new weapons being used against them, gore, and general story advice).

Hello, I'm just a attempting writer who writes about villains and reformed villains, mostly about the Dazzlings and Sunset.

Hey, I’m WooshieWoosh. I’m kinda the worst, but I think my stories are at least half decent(hopefully). Anyway, I guess that’s it.

Hello Again! New story just went up called Gigantomachy. If you like Warhammer 40k, especially Imperial Knights, well try this one! WARNING: DARK AND GOREY. Please comment, this fic was to test myself to see if I could write gore and action.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387244/gigantomachy

Hi, I'm Mirror Star.
I like to writer during my free time and I write Rated M stories the most. I'm looking for people to comment on my stories since I like hearing what people think about them.

Introduction thread doesn't appear to exist currently so I'll do it here. New author and not so new reader. The ideas in my head began to overflow so I started writing to let them out. My primary goal is to make quality content for readers and give my ideas freedom in words. Other than that I live in the southern part of the US and enjoy the countryside with friends.

hello, a few weeks ago I got a review and decided to do heavy editing, and now I'm wondering if still any good so could someone please go look at the chapter prolog and give me some feedback.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/379640/tales-of-paradise

thanks in advance😄

Hi everyone I write Secret Lives I would love to hear you thoughts on it. I hope you like it.

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Hello. I write with the pen name of ScifiPony. I am a published SF writer and a photographer of no particular note. My passion is about writing about gender roles and how it affect people in society. As a feminist, I am particularly enamored with this generation of My Little Pony and the portrayal of a feminist utopia. My interest is in how Equestria came to be and the early lives of some main characters, especially Starlight Glimmer, Twilight Sparkle, and Princess Celestia. My current novella, To Bring Light to Eternal Darkness was selected for a Equestria Daily Story post and is about Celestia before the wings, when she learned to raise the sun, and how she got the first glimmerings of an idea that a place like Equestria might be something to fight for. Please read it and comment!


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Hello, my name is ThePanzerLover, but you can call me Panzer, I like tanks, a lot. (Panzer in German is Tank) I also love history in general, hence why my first multi chapter story is about a 16th century Knight, plucked from his world and put into Equestria.

I would really appreciate some real feedback. So far all I've gotten is those "Interesting", "Ooooh I like" type comments, its nice to hear but doesn't really help with my writing.

Guten Tag,I am KaiserWilly2 and i want some opinions/feedback on my first story,so the sequel can be better.(Please don't kill me because this is my first story)

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