This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work. And not just those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author excactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...
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Hey everyone I'm Polish3d and I just wanted to say hi to you all. I would love someone to let me know how my stories read, if was my first attempt at ever writing a fanfic. I just want to know what y'all think
Hey, This is Coyote. I’ve never been moved to write fanfics until MLP, and have been doing so for about a year now. I only recently started experimenting with groups.
I just dropped two stories in, each one being a what-if of the other in my two main timelines. Contemplation & discussion is always appreciated!
Hey there, i wrote this Sciset oneshot months ago, i just thought about some feedback before i start writing my new oneshot. Thank you for your time!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/417820/
Hello I am a 10 year old kid who has no life and watches a show for 5 year olds and writes fan fiction about it cause it is acutally gud. In all seriousness my stoies aren't that good, but I never get comments, I get people being stupid in the comments. Someone said "This is a new flauvor of what the ****" SO yaeah. Good morning/night/evening/afternoon to whoever is reading this!
Greetings, all. I am Coyote. I adore discussions in comments sections, especially dealing with character arcs and philosophical implications and fnord.
I’m a bit new to this group thing, and am kind of scattershotting my way through the system. So if I misstep, please let me know. It was almost certainly out of ignorance.
(I’m not certain how many stories it’s cool to post at a time, so for now I’m just posting the most seminal one I have.
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Hi, I just wanted to introduce myself. I’m Crossover Queen! Nice to meet y’all, and I hope y’all have a great day. Or night, whichever it is where you are!
Hello, my name is Pip, I'm relatively new to FIMfiction and trying to get people to see the story I'm working on https://www.fimfiction.net/story/418908/shadows-gather
Hey y'all! Just want some honest crit on this, as well as my other story "Mirror, Mirror" Which is incomplete.
Thanks y'all!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/424204/what-was-in-that-cupcake
Hey hey, I've been away from writing for awhile and I'm trying to get back in. Got a story up and would love to get some feedback on it. Its a short read so shouldn't take up too much time.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/422471/inner-demons
Thank you!
Hello. I'm AP, I've written a story that's gotten a little bit popular. I'm trying to get some more feedback on it.
If y'all got time, take a look. 27k words, so it might be a little while.
- MLP: FiM
- Sad
- Slice of Life
- Tragedy
A friend is lost and the others must cope.This feels weird... Hello, name's jrock117 and I'm here to get some feedback on some of my work, preferably my most recent story Starlight's Shattered Glass. I really want to improve and I feel hearing other people's thoughts on the matter would be a great start. Link here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/407022/starlights-shattered-glass
Thanks to anyone who takes even a glance at it, it's appreciated.
Hello. My name is Equestrian Defender, and I mostly write crossovers or stories about MLP/Equestria Girls characters getting superpowers. My most recent story is a Spider-man crossover. Link below.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/420567/equestria-girls-spider-man-book-1-amazing
I'd really like either comments or criticism on my story and any other stories that come later. Hope to hear from you guys. Later.
I'm the Blue EM2. I would like feedback on a few of my stories, my most recent one particularly.
Hello, my name is CrimsonCow
I am looking for criticism on my writing, especially on my pacing. I don't like it when people dislike something without even reading it.
Uhm.. did I introduce myself before? I forgot if I did make a thread
I'm CoreyJack1123 and a writer who is looking to is striving to become better. I'm not getting many comments, so I don't know what I should d to get better. So that why I'm here.
I suppose I will continue trend of introducing ourselves here. My friends call me Boss, I write pony stories in the hope of improving my writing and vocabulary as a whole. It's not easy, considering I don't get as many comments as I used to. I had one story do really well, the rest not so much, so I'm hoping to improve there.
I'm Keystone. I've spent half a year on my most recent fic, developing a constructed language and some rich lore for the deer who live in the Everfree (as noted in the IDW comics), and I'd love some constructive criticism on it. Thanks!
Hi! I'm Glitz Sparklehoof. I'm a young writer and would love any tips and advice on my stories anyone an give. Thanks!!
Name's Wicked88, nice to fuckin' metcha