This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work.
And not those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author exactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...
The Ghost of Coltistrano is a fun, cape and cowl adventure diving into themes of heroism in a conflict spanning three entries, including Restless Peace and Phantom Eulogy. If you've been looking for something to scratch your pulp hero itch, this is the place.
There are stories children are told of a figure in black, emerging from the darkness to strike at those who threaten the goodness of the world. This creature is the Ghost, but for young Silver Spade, it's his last hope for vengeance beyond the grave.
446113 Hi, I'm pretty new to Fimfiction and I've already got two stories: A Family Split and A Nightmare Night to remember. Feel free to check them out and comment, I would appreciate it
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Hi everypony! I just kinda writing my first fanfic - a fusion of every concept that I thought would be cool/fun to write and read about. What if there's a war in Equestria? And the enemy is Flurry Heart? And she teamed up with Pony of Shadows? And Twilight teamed up with Cozy Glow to stop them? And there are endless things in the story that can be brought in at any point? Endless background side-story-stuff? References to fan-theories, comics and other stuff that no one remember? And every aspect of the story is interacts with every other, creating a story that can have only 2 fates - to become a god gamn bomb, or become an unreadeble junk? Well, that's what "And you can really surprise" is ;p
Hello everyone! I've been in this fandom since the good ol' days of 2010 on YouTube. I didn't find out about this website until much later, but I wish I found it earlier from all the wonderful stories I've come across! But, to get to the point, I'd really love it if someone would comment, more on this story. Someone tell me details, someone tell me my faults and such. Also, tell me your opinion. Thanks you!
Idk how to link my story with like the image in stuff kinda like a writer before me has already >~< so I put the link. Another reason I'm saying this is because of the recent thing of "is this another similar website that asks for my personal information?"
But if you don't trust it you can look on my account for my most recent one. The others are, beginner material...
I'm new to the group, less new to the site. I've posted stories since November 2021 with some minor success. I would really love more constructive comments, though, to help me polish my writing. I'm looking forward to any service I can provide in return.
Hello I'm new to the group and joined Fimfiction since 11/19/2020. I'm an otaku, MLP FIM and mostly an Equestria Girls Fan. I want to create stories that both me and my readers will enjoy so feel free to leave your comments or opinions
Hello all, its very nice to meet you. I'm new to the group. Just a sane voice actor who gets on by this insane world while making a story series about ponies and what not. Hope you are all doing well this weekend.
Hi, I just wanna hear what people have to say about my work. My work isn't anything serious to me, just something I do for fun, but I just need to hear people's thoughts on the stories.
Hi, I'm Lighting Ace, an old fim fic fan and new in this forum, so sorry if I mess up how things work. Just wanted to make one small little story of a re-imagination of a Christmas Carol, right away I confess english is not my first language and my editor is indispose so I apologies for any grammar mistakes.
After being trapped underground from a calamity no one knows much about, most of the ponies have lost their hope and wanderlust. My story is about a mare who finds herself starstruck with the stories of the past and leaves the safety of her home and into the volatile underground and even worse surface hoping to find some answers. Though more than she knows is awaiting her in the metros.
Amidst the somber and sorrows a desperate scavenger stumbles upon a pre-war bunker and finds herself in the midst of something much larger than herself or even the metro.
Hey there!
The Ghost of Coltistrano is a fun, cape and cowl adventure diving into themes of heroism in a conflict spanning three entries, including Restless Peace and Phantom Eulogy. If you've been looking for something to scratch your pulp hero itch, this is the place.
Stop by and enjoy!
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Adventure
- Thriller
There are stories children are told of a figure in black, emerging from the darkness to strike at those who threaten the goodness of the world. This creature is the Ghost, but for young Silver Spade, it's his last hope for vengeance beyond the grave.446113
Hi, I'm pretty new to Fimfiction and I've already got two stories: A Family Split and A Nightmare Night to remember. Feel free to check them out and comment, I would appreciate it
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When it comes to choosing the treatment, it’s important to consider your skin type. If you have sensitive skin, look for a gentle peel such as an alpha hydroxyl acid or beta hydroxyl acid peel. On the other hand, if you’re looking for something more robust and effective with minimal irritation, try a trichloroacetic acid or Jessner Peel. If you want to target particular wrinkles or pigment lesions, then there are peels available such as pyruvic and salicylic acids, which can help improve these areas — just make sure to get professional guidance first! Remember that everyone’s skin is different so make sure to do some research and consult with your dermatologist before starting any kind of peel treatment. https://aestheticsbydrg.com/
Hi everypony! I just kinda writing my first fanfic - a fusion of every concept that I thought would be cool/fun to write and read about. What if there's a war in Equestria? And the enemy is Flurry Heart? And she teamed up with Pony of Shadows? And Twilight teamed up with Cozy Glow to stop them? And there are endless things in the story that can be brought in at any point? Endless background side-story-stuff? References to fan-theories, comics and other stuff that no one remember? And every aspect of the story is interacts with every other, creating a story that can have only 2 fates - to become a god gamn bomb, or become an unreadeble junk? Well, that's what "And you can really surprise" is ;p
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/522776/and-you-can-really-surprise
i am here to once again remind you that nobody ever looks in the group comments so go start a thread instead.Hello everyone! I've been in this fandom since the good ol' days of 2010 on YouTube. I didn't find out about this website until much later, but I wish I found it earlier from all the wonderful stories I've come across! But, to get to the point, I'd really love it if someone would comment, more on this story. Someone tell me details, someone tell me my faults and such. Also, tell me your opinion. Thanks you!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/470472/fluttershys-story
Idk how to link my story with like the image in stuff kinda like a writer before me has already >~< so I put the link. Another reason I'm saying this is because of the recent thing of "is this another similar website that asks for my personal information?"
But if you don't trust it you can look on my account for my most recent one. The others are, beginner material...
Hi everyone!
I'm new to the group, less new to the site. I've posted stories since November 2021 with some minor success. I would really love more constructive comments, though, to help me polish my writing. I'm looking forward to any service I can provide in return.
*dies and drops an obscure crossover*
come check it out, chrysalis best bug-pon- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
(Bastion x MLP) The Bastion sends the remaining four survivors of the Calamity to an unlikely place, with an even more unlikely ally.Hello I'm new to the group and joined Fimfiction since 11/19/2020. I'm an otaku, MLP FIM and mostly an Equestria Girls Fan. I want to create stories that both me and my readers will enjoy so feel free to leave your comments or opinions
Hello there! I’m new here and want some feedback and love on my story, Sunny Plays Old Equestrian Games. Would you check it out?
- MLP: FiM
- MLP Gen 5
- Dark
Sunny finds some interesting games on the internet and decides to play them.Hello all, its very nice to meet you. I'm new to the group. Just a sane voice actor who gets on by this insane world while making a story series about ponies and what not. Hope you are all doing well this weekend.
*reads group thread for the first time in over 3 months* oh hey new peeps.
Hi, I just wanna hear what people have to say about my work. My work isn't anything serious to me, just something I do for fun, but I just need to hear people's thoughts on the stories.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/485223/a-heart-warming-eve-carol
Hi, I'm Lighting Ace, an old fim fic fan and new in this forum, so sorry if I mess up how things work. Just wanted to make one small little story of a re-imagination of a Christmas Carol, right away I confess english is not my first language and my editor is indispose so I apologies for any grammar mistakes.
Hope you like the story
I've just started publishing my first story since my return from a two year hiatus, I'd love for some feedback on it!
After being trapped underground from a calamity no one knows much about, most of the ponies have lost their hope and wanderlust. My story is about a mare who finds herself starstruck with the stories of the past and leaves the safety of her home and into the volatile underground and even worse surface hoping to find some answers. Though more than she knows is awaiting her in the metros.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
Amidst the somber and sorrows a desperate scavenger stumbles upon a pre-war bunker and finds herself in the midst of something much larger than herself or even the metro.442662
instructions unclear, took over another group instead
I wish for one more on my story to make it an even number
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You're more likely to get a response if you make a post in the main forum. :)