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This group is made for people who just want feedback on their work. And not just those silly likes or dislikes. I'm talking about solid comments with words in them that tell the author excactly how you felt about their story. Come on, now...

First stop for you should be INTRO THREAD so you can introduce yourselves.

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Introduction thread doesn't appear to exist currently so I'll do it here. New author and not so new reader. The ideas in my head began to overflow so I started writing to let them out. My primary goal is to make quality content for readers and give my ideas freedom in words. Other than that I live in the southern part of the US and enjoy the countryside with friends.

hello, a few weeks ago I got a review and decided to do heavy editing, and now I'm wondering if still any good so could someone please go look at the chapter prolog and give me some feedback.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/379640/tales-of-paradise

thanks in advance­čśä

Hi everyone I write Secret Lives I would love to hear you thoughts on it. I hope you like it.

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No no no they're fine

Hello. I write with the pen name of ScifiPony. I am a published SF writer and a photographer of no particular note. My passion is about writing about gender roles and how it affect people in society. As a feminist, I am particularly enamored with this generation of My Little Pony and the portrayal of a feminist utopia. My interest is in how Equestria came to be and the early lives of some main characters, especially Starlight Glimmer, Twilight Sparkle, and Princess Celestia. My current novella, To Bring Light to Eternal Darkness was selected for a Equestria Daily Story post and is about Celestia before the wings, when she learned to raise the sun, and how she got the first glimmerings of an idea that a place like Equestria might be something to fight for. Please read it and comment!


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Hello, my name is ThePanzerLover, but you can call me Panzer, I like tanks, a lot. (Panzer in German is Tank) I also love history in general, hence why my first multi chapter story is about a 16th century Knight, plucked from his world and put into Equestria.

I would really appreciate some real feedback. So far all I've gotten is those "Interesting", "Ooooh I like" type comments, its nice to hear but doesn't really help with my writing.

Guten Tag,I am KaiserWilly2 and i want some opinions/feedback on my first story,so the sequel can be better.(Please don't kill me because this is my first story)

So helo everyone.
My name is Crystalbreeze and I'm happy to see a group like this. Not because the likes, or the dislikes. The things that I need are some comments and maybe some likes under my story called "Cute little thing". If you are reading this comment now, than please put these two things under it. Thank you very much! :pinkiesmile:

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DID WOODENTOASTER DIE???????

Hi everypony
I'm ImmortalKupcake, and my oc pony is a work in progress. Her name is Color Storm and she's a unicorn. I'm an artist and want to be an author/illustrator/Disney employee so I can go for free. But no matter what, I'll always be a pegasister!

So, uh, yeah, hello!
Give me comments, please. On any of my stories. Please, I beg you.
*puppy eyes* Please? :pinkiesad2:

Hello everypony. I hope you enjoy my fanfic and feel free to comment.

Hello!
I am a pegasister who loves to draw, and loves to hear feedback on her fanfics! So please if you have any questions, lemme know! I also would love to do some covers for people (all traditional, sorry). I love Vylet Pony's work, it's wonderful! I also miss Wooden Toaster...RIP

Hi, I'm Crecious.
I'm more of an artist, but I've dabbled in writing a bit, even though I'm not super at it I believe I have good ideas and I try to have fun and hope others enjoy it too!

Hi, I'm Lordvessel. I currently only have one story with a decent following though I'm always looking to increase that. My most anticipated thing after ever chapter I post is what people think about it, and I'm always eager to engage with people in the comments.

Hey every one! I'm Vapor Wave.
I'm here for feed back on my work, the first chapter is still being written but I would love to see people enjoying my story that I put my heart and soul into

Hello, I'm Garfield23.....I'm not sure what to say. I want feedback on a lot of my work. I'm trying to improve but without feedback...it's not easy to know what I'm doing right and wrong in terms of story. I'm going to look through the folders and see what stories I can read to offer feedback to. If I could name one story of mine I really want feedback on it's my Prince of Silence story since I've been working on it for so long and I want it to do well.

I'd love to have a bit of feedback on my Spike Rule 63 story Cold Scales
I'm rusty so I would love to remember how to improve.

Hey readers! I'm not exactly new to Fimifciton, but this is the first story I'm trying that has actual effort put in. It's a Human in Equestria, so if you don't like the genre, I'd recommend just try the first chapter, or ignore it. I'm really looking for feedback on the first four chapters, just to see if I'm going in the right direction. There's only so much a like can tell you about what the reader thinks :rainbowlaugh:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/355623/the-element-of-hope

Thank you very much!

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