It's the day before Nightmare Night, and Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle are setting up a party in the crystal treehouse formed from the Tree of Harmony to surprise the Young Six. One thing they definitely didn't expect was being the target of Nightmare's newfound power. Especially since she'd been banished and connected to no creature. The dark magic shifts them into three different things, that aren't ponies, or at least not completely. What's best to do, keep it a secret, or hope it's all a nightmare?
Chapters (9)
Why isn't there a Nightmare Moon tag?
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There's a five-character tag limit. It's been reached. Which is dumb because the CMC tag works for all three, instead of using four tags for just three characters.
That was a pretty interesting reaction from each of them and it's nice to see Edith again
This is a pretty interesting start of a story a little late for Halloween but whatever sounds pretty cool so it looks like Nightmare Moon is back again planning on Revenge on Celestia but it looks like she got the new Target it was the Cutie Mark Crusaders and she took advantage of possessing the three kids apparently something change of Scootaloo and Apple Bloom but what about Sweetie Belle but it looks like apple bloom got affected pretty badly but they don't have time to think about it because the kids from the school of friendship is here which it was the young six and they look like they were having so much fun but Apple Bloom is starting to change again whatever is happening to her body really is affecting her well let's see how this will go next time this is not bad of your first story so far
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It's not Nightmare Moon, it's the evil magic which was corrupting her. So it isn't Nightmare Moon or Nightmare Rarity, just Nightmare.
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Not for Halloween but thanks!
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Oh ok and no problem
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I can see why it might be looked at as Halloween, but I just couldn't think of any former villain better than one who had reasons to stop at nothing now. No redemption, no losses, has magic, isn't a statue, and has probably been assumed to no longer exist, so Nightmare just fit perfectly.
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I see what you mean but it looks like the Cutie Mark Crusader needs help from the young six and any of the friends to help out
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Maybe...
I added Dinky, Pipsqueak, and Starlight because they'll be more important later.
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Were they the original idea before you added the tag
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Starlight yes, I thought about involving Dinky but didn't know how, and then I knew how once I thought about involving Pipsqueak.
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It wasn't because of the character limit.
This looks like a fragment. This is how I would write it:
But asides that, can't wait for next chapter
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Thanks! I'll fix that so it says said!
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Np 👍
Whoa zombie Pony in school wow now that's an interesting topic for an educational
You know that kind of reminds me of that show iZombie
Well then that was a pretty intense situation so it looks like a Cutie Mark Crusaders decided to split apart for now until they figure out what's going on with them but Applebloom and Sweetie Belle got them self in the situation that a that rock crocodile attack them but somehow Sweetie Belle somehow use her ability whatever she is but she was also afraid that she will hurt anybody meanwhile Scootaloo and the young six was still continuing of The Nightmare Night and she even ask Ocellus about being a changeling which figured that she will see something but then they discover a couple of blood and Scootaloo got super worried the next morning her worries was gone when she saw them and apparently Apple Bloom is a zombie Pony which that's an interesting situation but what makes things worse now Cheerilee is now talking about zombies which apparently the plant will determine what's the kids are going to do now I guess we'll find out next time
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Never watched it, I've seen snippets when others are watching it though.
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There is a small spoiler in there, not covered by the spoiler tag, which hints at what's going to happen.
Hint: Saddle bags.
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One thing in that is false, regarding Sweetie, I think you might have missed something right after the attack.
Find that.
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Music is nice, never watched the show so I don't have any context.
Thanks for the chapter! ^v^ it's very good! Is Sweetie containing Nightmare? I never got to read the comic, so I never got all the context on how that works.
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You don't need the comics, don't worry.
Maybe, you'll see...
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Basically it's about zombies in the movie Scooby-Doo I kind of referenced it because now there's zombie ponies in your story
Well then this was a terror time but it was getting really interesting so everybody was still testing out the flower that Mrs Cheerilee got and Apple Bloom is getting really worried now but luckily Sweetie Belle touch the flower and the flower did not react and the teacher decided to continue the class but after that it looks like Twilight is inviting three young ponies pipsqueak and Apple Bloom and it looks like dinky wants to come along too but unfortunately the journey was an eventful because they were attacked by zombie ponies and Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle heard what was going on and they going to help them despite they're going to blow their cover and the other two young ponies were surprised to see Applebloom got teared apart but she's still alive and found out that she is a zombie Pony and Sweetie Belle use her magic but she's really been scared about that and apparently whatever the nightmare is doing to her is getting much stronger I wonder they're going to find out what to do I guess we'll find out next time
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Sweetie did not use her magic.
I have replaced the tags of Pipsqueak and Dinky with the tag other, the reason being that it wouldn't make sense for how much they will be featured compared to other characters. This doesn't mean that they won't be important, just that I have _________as important as them.
Okay I understand you're a little upset Rarity but right now your younger sister needs your help right now
Okay the situation is getting tougher by every minute and a lot of question needs to be answered as well although I felt like Rarity was a little bit too harsh on Sweetie Belle I get it she didn't tell her about the condition she was in but still Sweetie Belle needs help right now especially they have no idea what kind of magic that smoke affected them and speaking of smoke the nightmare was basically attacking them threatening to kill them but Sweetie Belle unleash her power but almost destroying the place luckily she gained control but she was still afraid that she will hurt anybody so Starlight still have no idea what kind of magic it is and why did the flower failed on sweetie I guess we'll find out next time
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Side note:
Sweetie isn't afraid she will accidently hurt anyone anymore.
It's an interesting story. And I was just writing something about the young 6!
Will someone transform into a wolf pony? Xd
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I don't think anyone is going to be a wolfpony, but imagine the next step up on a basic scale.
That is a really big huge mouthful Pinkie Pie lol
So a lot of strange thing is happening apparently Scootaloo is still thinking about how different she is from the changelings but she said she's gotten better flying so that's cool but Sweetie Belle is still kind of been in and out lately and she really wanted to tell her older sister Rarity the truth but she couldn't and she really really wanted to tell her so badly because it's been really bugging her but something is trying to stop her for some odd reason and I think it's nightmare who's stopping her and she's controlling her but it looks like Starlight and Luna are going to get to work about this whole situation hopefully they find the truth about it
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So it looks like Sweetie Belle finally told Rarity what was going on and she really felt guilty about this whole situation and not knowing what was wrong with Sweetie Belle and they both apologize to each other which that's pretty sweet and I'm glad they work this thing out but it looks like the young six were also talking about how the Cutie Mark Crusaders were acting peculiar so they decided to ask them about it and apparently the three girls are starting to change a lot now they had to explain to these kids about what's going on
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Thanks for catching that!
I mean they would have helped them out
So apparently Sweetie Belle got hit the most out of the three
Yeah what is that clicking sound
Okay then looks like things are going to get crazy very soon and it's a good thing the kids actually will help out the Cutie Mark Crusaders since they can't do it by themselves and they even explain them about what happened during the event of Nightmare Night and they even told Luna and starlight about the situation as well so the kids decide to go to sweetie Bell's home but unfortunately there was like a clicking sound and what is that anyway
Yeah seriously Scootaloo
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Yep, she was the one right in the center of the spell.
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So the clicking sound is slowly being explained throughout the rest of the story. The next chapter gives a little bit more information. Chapter nine gives just a bit of information as to where it's coming from, but not exactly. Earlier in a blog post I'm sure no one read, I said,
relating to the following chapter, which starts with explaining the clicking as (extra spoiler) psychological fear through the repeating clicks.
It's intended to be confusing, and important although quickly forgotten.