We follow a girl who live in a small town, fulfilling her dreams of playing football at the highest level until… Her path took a strange turn as she magically appeared at the magical lands of Equestria.
Sex tag - sex reference in Interlude 2
Profanity tag - there will be moments in the story where vulgar language will be used.
Violence tag - unseen violence in chapter 19.
Gore tag - slight gore in chapter 19.
Seems solid, Can't wait for more
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Liverpool vs Everton🔥
Noice
So I don't know if this is out of nowhere but what happened to her brother?
Imma be honest with you, I've got zero knowledge about football or soccer whatever you wanna call it. One thing I do know however is that this chapter was written really well so you better believe I'm gonna keep sticking around
Pretty cool to have a choose your own adventure deal, but if both choices don't end up in kinda similar ways the whole story could start to loose some of its coherencey.
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Thank you!!!
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Don't worry, I'll be careful!
Neat little peak into the future. Or is it the past? I'm assuming the green mare is the heroine but it's been a while since I read so I could be wrong.
Kiddo? I belive is what you meant.
Anywho looks like I definitely miss-remembered who the protag was. I agree with my previous comment, it still seems solid.
The sudden jump from describing a war torn world to soccer (or football) is kinda confusing but it could work to the stories benefit.
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Kidda=Kiddo, just a different way we say it over in Liverpool. Also, the prologue will make sense as soon as you read chapter 11!
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I think a different place and perhaps also time.
I approve your story. Hopefully there will be a conclusion to her victory.
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Thanks! What victory do you mean?
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I meant her winning in football.
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Amelia hasn't won anything yet, BUT! She will get there and hopefully join the team she wants.
I gotta say…I am REALLY invested in this story so far! I haven’t played any sort of sport in a long time, but your vivid descriptions of every game take me back in the best ways. I really love Amelia as the protagonist. She comes off as very relatable in her desire to be the best and overcome the stereotypes associated with being a pegasus and a goalkeeper. She honestly kinda reminds me of me to be honest. I can’t help but have that same sort of drive for the stuff I do, and her feelings really do come across to the reader. I really do want her to succeed, and I’m rooting for her. Your passion for this premise really shines through with the investing descriptions and tone. Plus, the lore potential with Discord’s story and the mysterious force that brought Amelia to Equestria is very interesting to think about. I also want to compliment some of the interactive “choose your ending” type chapters you put. That’s actually very creative, and a great way of exploring multiple avenues, though if you plan to do more of these, I would suggest having more story differences in each outcome. All of the choices so far appear to end the same way, when the point of having these sort of interactive chapters is to showcase different outcomes to every choice. It’s just something I suggest you do if you plan to have more of these.
Overall, this is a really cool story with a ton of potential. Once I started reading, I could not stop. I keep wanting to know what happens next and I can’t wait until you update this further. Keep up the great work!
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Aw thanks, it's little things like these that keep me going despite it being hard to be consistent.
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That's probably what Amelia would have said yeah
Nice chapter! I Liked!
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Cheers bud!
Got a message, I liked your story😉
Well, there's your FIRST problem. The Reds are red... But the Toffees are green and white!
Dope cover art
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There’s a reason for the colours of shirts and the names of the clubs, it's not random.
Ah, your'e from Britan I see.
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Up the brits🤌
Wouldn't it be known not none
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Haha, thanks for correcting me.
Hold it, hold it. often you refer to therm as having feet, but you call this hoofball? I'm confuzzled.
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So the same logic applies!… I think… I don't know, just go with it!
It's another term ponies call it, please bear with me here😭. Also, COUNTER ARGUMENT! It's like Americans calling the NFL Football. At what point do the players kick the ball in the NFL?
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He's got you there. Penanka

I've been reading this story and I think it's good keep up the good work
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😭😭😭
It should be noted that all P{onies -that including Unicorns, Kirins Pegasi (standard and lunar), and Earth Pones- have some things in common, which would typically set them right above humanity, at the top of the food chain. Like sharper senses, a boidy that can take a beating, a faster healing rate (recall that a broken wing had Rainbow Dash in the hospital for less than a week), magic, of course, a Special Talent for each one, and a -potentially- VERY long lifespan. Remermber that Granny Smith, for example, was right there when Ponyville was founded.
If you had to change species, you could do far orse.
Exercise, maybe?
Leashes.
Canon, on both counts.
I don't think that's the right word, here.
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Thwarted is just another way to say frustrated along with other meanings of course.
Ayy, Jet definitely has this in common with her.
Cute idea for a story involving a worldwide sport that many can learn to play.
May your creativity continue to run wild for all to enjoy!
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Many thanks, friend. Football has been a passion of mine for a very long time and I thought, what better way to express my passion than through a story full of ponies?
T: Acthually, (actually) Amelia is a Latin name, which can be translated as induthtriouth, thtriving ("industrious", "striving") and "work"
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Hmm, the more you know I guess
Apple Bloom is two words.
Nice work, keep goin
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Will do!
As a writer, I've realized that character creation isn't exactly my strong suit and time consuming as I want to get the character just right. That got me thinking—why not involve my readers in the process? If you've got a character you've created or want to whip one up on the fly, I'd love to hear about it. Whether it's through comments or a private message, send your ideas my way, and let’s see how we can fit your OC into the world of "All Day, Everyday."
I've already used a few characters suggested by readers, and you'll get to meet them in the upcoming chapters. Your involvement could really spice up the story and bring some fresh perspectives.
Thanks for tuning in and being a part of this journey. I can’t wait to see what characters you come up with. Have a great one and happy creating!