a timid and kind-hearted human known as Anon finds themselves transported to the magical land of Equestria by a celestial mishap orchestrated by Princess Luna. Luna, with a nervously apologetic smile, bestows upon Anon the gift of unlimited magic.
Determined to live a quiet life free of drama in Ponyville, Anon discovers their unique talent as Equestria's first podcast singer, with Luna's magic amplifying their voice. However, this newfound passion comes with a twist-Anon must keep their podcasting identity a secret.
As Anon settles into Ponyville, they navigate the challenges of forming friendships, a developing romance, and the complex dynamics of Equestrian society. Luna's magic not only aids Anon's journey but also becomes a catalyst for major events in Equestria.
A pivotal plot point arises when Anon stumbles upon enchanted headphones in the Everfree Forest, capable of transmitting their podcasts to anypony who wears them. This discovery prompts a quest to introduce the headphones to Equestria, leading Anon and their friends on an adventure filled with challenges, magical creatures, and hidden realms.
As the enchanted headphones gain popularity, Anon becomes a symbol of change in the way ponies experience storytelling. The story explores themes of friendship, discovery, and the transformative power of harmonious storytelling, all set against the backdrop of a magical revolution in Equestria.
With every podcast episode, Anon unwittingly weaves a spell of harmony, impacting the lives of those around them. The journey is a blend of slice-of-life moments, epic events inspired by MLP traditions, and the ongoing challenges of keeping their secret in a world touched by Luna's magic.
I'm liking it so far. Can't wait to see more of the story ^^
is that an AI Generated thumbnail?
it looks too rad to not have a source
What does Y/N mean?
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It literally means (Your/Name). You put your name there where (Y/N) is in the sentence.
Nah nah nah m8, we don't use the term y/n here boi. Only anon or anonymous
Also, nice ai art. What ai did you use? :D
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Ah. OK
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My mind immediately went to Y.V from Nuclear Throne. I guess that Y.N would be Yung Neptune by that logic.
Apologies about the main character being Y/N. Old habit of mind from Wattsapp. I'll change it Soon as Possible from Y/N to Anonymous.
every time i saw Y/N i couldn't help but think yin. and honestly its not a bad name.
also you are trying too hard to make everything all mystical. you make the main character seem to be a musical muse before even ending up in a magical world. and you are making references to the future, his path through equestria, as if he has precognitive abilities.
its over all really long winded. and seems to try and fit as many big words into it as it can hold. there is nothing wrong with using smaller words to describe something.
i usually wouldnt bother to follow stories like this but i like the premise so i hope to see it do better in the future
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Who did the cover art?
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It was an Ai
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Thank you for the comment but tbh I'm just having fun writing the fiction so I'm going to be tho my best to do thing in a way.
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Tbh besides "Anon", 2nd POV through using you/yours or even 1st POV are other options if you wanna try! Although many 2nd POV fics in this site has Anon instead of a nondescript reader insert, other fandoms don't really do the anon thing—it's likely a carryover to the early days of the MLP fandom originating from 4chan, where anons are a thing.
I’m very much enjoying this story! Hope to see it finished and not left hanging or cancelled
Interesting AI thumbnail
The whole premise is entertaining, but to be truthful, needlessly lengthy. From time to time I like me some mystical mumbo-jumbo with big descriptive words creating a picture of mystery etc. etc, but it reads like an essay in some parts. By it, I mean, it is written like purple prose. Not mentioning penchant for repeating previous paragraphs but in "slightly" different words. Lastly, You use the same descriptors time and time again.
But if you are just writing for the fun of it then, eh, good enough. Thank you for sharing it with us. Overall I liked it and would wait for more.
I LOVE IT!!!😭😭😭
This chapter was easier to read. Good job :D
I LOVE IT👍👍👍👏👏👏😭😭
Nice. Quality gets better and better TFTC :D
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That’s what I thought.
Still looks good
No song hour😭
I like how things are going in this story and i really like it.
I also have a suggestion for a song you can possibly use later on in the story. The song is Somewhere Only We Know by an English alternative rock band known as Keane.
Keep up the good work Raikiry.
LET'S GOHH!!! TwilightxAnon
And my day has been made
Might wanna change Earth Pony to Unicorn. 'Cause yknow the next chapter literally has him as one.
LET'S GOOHHHH!!!
great chapter
Damn, you found the perfect song for this chapter !
Yooooooooo !
MOAR !
This is pretty good, though it wasn't really what I thought it was going to be, to my disappointment. The summary seemed to imply Anon would be attempting to be a background pony despite events conspiring to make him otherwise, but... that kind of goes out the window really quickly here, with him being so forcefully crammed into the Nightmare Moon confrontation like that. Very inelegant.
If I had some real criticism to impart, I would like to point out that you seem to have an unfortunate habit of over laboring a point. You'll make a statement, and then repeat it several times in succession - such as in the first chapter when you repeatedly referred to the "upcoming adventure" to the point of it just being twee, or hearkening back to him falling down a slope when it literally just happened. I think the best example of it is here:
These paragraphs are literally one after the other. We get it, it's an important scene he's been thrust in. You don't need to keep telling us that. At a certain point it starts feeling like blatant padding, and it makes my eyes roll right off the screen. That's literary junk food, and I can only stand so much of it.
Also, and this is just me, but I get that it's a song fic, but I don't think you have to have a song in every chapter. Anon conjuring a guitar could've been an interesting scene, but literally no one reacts to it or the song he sings. It might as well not have happened. Imagining this random ass pony breaking into a song post-battle that for all intents and purposes everyone ignores is really awkward and just makes me cringe.
That poor fucker. Even he's embarrassed by it in the scene.
Those gripes aside, I'll continue reading. You've piqued my interest enough to keep going.
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Thank you for your detailed and honest feedback on my story. I genuinely appreciate the time and effort you took to share your thoughts with me.
I want to express that my main purpose in writing this story is to have fun and explore my creative side. I'm not a professional writer, and this journey is as much about self-expression as it is about learning and improving. Reading your feedback, I won't hide that it stung a bit to realize the significant errors in my work. However, I see this as an important part of my growth as a writer.
I understand that parts of my story didn't meet your expectations, and for that, I am sincerely sorry. My intention was never to let down my readers. Writing is a complex and ongoing learning process, and while I strive to get better, I also recognize that I might still falter along the way, especially since writing doesn't come naturally to me.
Despite these challenges, I am committed to doing my best to improve. I will take your feedback seriously and apply it to future chapters. Improvement may be slow, and I hope you'll see positive changes as the story unfolds. I'm striving to get the hang of writing this story and to make it as enjoyable as possible for my readers and myself.
Thank you once again for your understanding and support. It means a lot to me, especially as I navigate through this learning process. I hope you will continue to find interest in the story as it evolves and improves.
Warm regards,
[Raikiry]
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Oh my god, when I saw the cover of this story, I thought, “That looks cool, I want to see that,” and then I looked closer and said, “I shouldn’t have not done that.”
Seriously, I know this wasn’t drawn by a human being, but the three-legged, two-horned twin sisters gave me the creeps.
Okay, this has nothing to do with the story itself. It reads as if someone turned on the radio, where, through slight interference, the announcer, a man of about 50-60 years old, reads the story in a slightly hoarse voice, measuredly and slowly. Like voiceovers from old Disney cartoons and so on. (and that's cool)
At least it seems so to me, and I was also prompted to make such a comparison between headphones and a microphone in the picture of the story.
In general, does the story retain a sense of fabulousness, curiosity, adventure and mystery?
Of course, this is all an impression based solely on the first chapter.
Banger story keep on truckin
Please say theat well be more chapters it is funny stay on the side nope you get pulled into every thing without trying
Quick question author san,that rainbow dash tag she's the only who the MC love with?
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good question, the answer is no. their will be more character trying to figure out their feeling towards the main character of the story. not just the main six.