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update Royalty? Psh, Yeah, Right!

323734 Definitely, i'm actually planning to join after i finish reading a few of these stories. I also want to make one for my own.

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Thank you. that is the kindest thing anyone have said about the story. I kind of put in it in the category of "trash I coughed up" because of the poor reception.

I have been working for a while on finishing my other story Princess Rainbow that has a similar theme but in an alternative universe. I have written a much improved version of chapter one and is writing to finish the long (well I would have said awaited) chapter 2. The reason why I haven't been more productive is because I haven't believed much in myself, so it is really nice to hear people say stuff like this, you should leave a comment on the story page, perhaps even give it a thumbs up if you actually like it. You did see that I marked it as "complete" I haven't planned to write more.

Anyway I love the idea of Rainbow as an alicorn and have many other ideas around the same theme. One is where she meets her father "Don Chevalier" on the train to Canterlot along with Twilight. Don Chevaliers special talent is being a mare's stallion, he was written an erotic book called “The many adventures of Don Chevaliers” about his exploits, that Twilight knows very well despite her not wanting to admit it and was the reason why Rainbow forswore never to read books. Celestia was his biggest and final conquest and Rainbow is once again more then she seems. The story is all about an answer to the question of how much her father can embarrass her on a two hour trip and if she can manage to prevent him from revealing secrets that she never wanted to share with anypony.

Anyway if you like stories about Rainbow as an alicorn you should diffidently join the group I founded called Alicorn Rainbow

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Well i found it very amusing. I also loved how rainbow dash ended up becoming a Princess and not only that but Princess Celestia's daughter non the less. Yet her personality never changed. But the perspective has been from another viewers eye. Not just a viewer but a mad man or pony if i must say. Your grammar was amazing and this story through out it all made me smile and wonder what would happen next.

I'm a little surpriced that you decided to favour this story. Do you mind telling me why?