The Path of Six Life

Six Human Best Friend's always wonder if they could escape from the suffering from their world and Wishes to be somewhere else. One Faithful Day they were Transported into Equestria and confused on what's happening they need to find out why are they in a World Full of Anthropological Ponies. Will they Find Friends Along the Way or Make Enemies that will be a Threat to them?

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Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World · 2nd Jun 2016 · 3,145 words
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Chapter 2: The new Arrivals · 5th Jul 2016 · 2,186 words
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Chapter 3: Boys meet Girls · 17th Dec 2016 · 2,200 words
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Chapter 4: Sugar and Shy · 17th Jan 2017 · 4,618 words
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Chapter 5:Meet the Group · 23rd Jan 2017 · 3,441 words
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Chapter 6: Stranded with · 3rd Feb 2017 · 3,730 words
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Twilight Chaos Sparkle

Twilight Chaos Sparkle #1 · Jun 2nd, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

MOAR!!

Light Spark

Light Spark #2 · Jun 2nd, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

Nice job.

swiftwriter14

swiftwriter14 #3 · Jun 2nd, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

Yeash i like write some more , it has potential mmm i *british accent* i like it luv

Alot Master

Alot Master #4 · Jun 2nd, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

This looks really good. Please make more.

Johndye

Johndye #5 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

Not really catching, but I'll wait for a couple more eps to be sure

Alot Master

Alot Master #6 · Jul 5th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: The new Arrivals ·

this looks really good, plz make more.

MrEditor

MrEditor #7 · Aug 16th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

I like it, love it, lol it!

MrEditor

MrEditor #8 · Aug 16th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The new Arrivals ·

Pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make more chapters ppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doood

Doood #9 · Dec 18th, 2016 · · · Chapter 3: Boys meet Girls ·

Bravo

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #10 · Dec 18th, 2016 · · · Chapter 3: Boys meet Girls ·

Why isn't there an anthro tag?

Psi-nova

Psi-nova #11 · Jan 5th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3: Boys meet Girls ·

Anthropomorphic != Anthropological but cute idea. Keep it up.

Neo Shadow

Neo Shadow #12 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3: Boys meet Girls ·

Wonders what the heart of this book has to offer.

Neo Shadow

Neo Shadow #13 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: A New Life in a New World ·

This story speaks my language entirely. I'm sold

Doood

Doood #14 · Jan 17th, 2017 · · · Chapter 4: Sugar and Shy ·

First comment.

H3lios

H3lios #15 · Jan 17th, 2017 · · · Chapter 4: Sugar and Shy ·

The story is good but the dialog is kind of hard to read in some places. For example:

When she looked back down, Dash glanced from AJ to the ponies in front of her. Suddenly a thought crossed her,
“Oh App-le-Jack. I'm gone what, ten minutes and you've gathered a crowd?”
Andrew frowned, “Two people? Hello?”
Dennis shushed his cohort, and started bouncing, “Shush cohort! I want to see where this is going!”
Applejack blinked once and said silently, “Dash. I want you t’ rethink about what you're going to do.”
Dash laughed, “Oh come on! You can't tell me you're not a stud! Totally a S-T-U-D.”
Everything grew silent. Deathly so. All eyes went to Applejack who was shrouded muzzle down in a shadow that grew as she turned to Dash.

I have no idea what's going on here.

I'm not putting down your story, mind you, I'm just pointing out where I think it needs some work.

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