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Raikiry


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Six Human Best Friend's always wonder if they could escape from the suffering from their world and Wishes to be somewhere else. One Faithful Day they were Transported into Equestria and confused on what's happening they need to find out why are they in a World Full of Anthropological Ponies. Will they Find Friends Along the Way or Make Enemies that will be a Threat to them?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 24 )

Yeash i like write some more , it has potential mmm i *british accent* i like it luv

This looks really good. Please make more.

Not really catching, but I'll wait for a couple more eps to be sure

this looks really good, plz make more.

Pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make more chapters ppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

Anthropomorphic != Anthropological but cute idea. Keep it up.

Wonders what the heart of this book has to offer.

This story speaks my language entirely. I'm sold

The story is good but the dialog is kind of hard to read in some places. For example:

When she looked back down, Dash glanced from AJ to the ponies in front of her. Suddenly a thought crossed her,

“Oh App-le-Jack. I'm gone what, ten minutes and you've gathered a crowd?”

Andrew frowned, “Two people? Hello?”

Dennis shushed his cohort, and started bouncing, “Shush cohort! I want to see where this is going!”

Applejack blinked once and said silently, “Dash. I want you t’ rethink about what you're going to do.”

Dash laughed, “Oh come on! You can't tell me you're not a stud! Totally a S-T-U-D.”

Everything grew silent. Deathly so. All eyes went to Applejack who was shrouded muzzle down in a shadow that grew as she turned to Dash.

I have no idea what's going on here.

I'm not putting down your story, mind you, I'm just pointing out where I think it needs some work.

I wonder what will happen next

Man i feel bad for discord his gave his life to save celestia's

Will this story get a update soon?

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