• Published 8th Dec 2023
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Harmony's Echo - Raikiry



"In the enchanting realm of Equestria, Anon, now a transformed Unicorn endowed with Princess Luna's magical powers, embarks on an unexpected adventure. Guided by the mysterious Luna, he navigates a tapestry of magical encounters and friendship.

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Chapter 6: Gizmo

Chapter 6: Gizmo

In the serene embrace of the dream realm, Anon found himself amidst an ethereal landscape that shimmered under a starlit sky. Before him, Princess Luna awaited with a gentle, encouraging smile, her eyes a mirror to the tranquil night.

As Anon stepped forward, a sense of solemnity filled the air. Luna, the Princess of the Moon, radiated an aura of ancient wisdom and patience. She nodded gracefully at Anon, signaling for him to sit before her. This moment was pivotal — the beginning of his journey into the arcane mysteries of Equestria's magic.

"Welcome, Anon," Luna's voice was soft yet resonant, echoing slightly in the dreamscape. "This night marks the first stride in thy magical education. We shalt commence with the fundamental art of levitation – a skill that doth require not just focus, but a harmonious connection with the world around thee."

Anon, feeling a mix of anticipation and anxiety, nodded silently. He was eager to learn, yet the weight of the task ahead was not lost on him. He watched intently as Luna's horn illuminated softly, casting a gentle glow that brought a nearby crystal to life.

"Behold levitation," Luna continued, her magic lifting the crystal effortlessly into the air. It hovered gracefully, as if suspended by the very moonbeams that bathed the dreamscape. "Levitation is more than mere manipulation of objects; it's about understanding and feeling the energy that binds us all."

Anon observed, captivated by the display. The crystal moved in harmony with Luna's words, a dance of light and magic that was both beautiful and inspiring. He realized then that magic in Equestria was not just a tool, but an expression of one's bond with nature and the cosmos.

"Now, Anon," Luna’s gaze turned towards him, both encouraging and challenging. "Let us see thee try. Remember, it is not about force, but about harmony and understanding. Trust in thyself and the magic within."

Anon took a deep breath, focusing on the lessons Luna had imparted. He looked at the crystal, then to his own horn, feeling a burgeoning connection. It was time to test the waters of his newfound abilities, to take the first step on a path that was both wondrous and unknown.

Anon turned his attention to the crystal, his horn glowing faintly as he concentrated. He focused all his efforts on trying to levitate the object, but to no avail. Despite his intense concentration, the crystal remained stubbornly still, anchored to the ground.

Princess Luna watched patiently, her eyes following Anon's every attempt. As time passed, her expression shifted to one of mild confusion. It was unusual for a unicorn, even a beginner, to struggle so much with a basic levitation spell.

Anon, feeling the weight of Luna's gaze, turned back to her with a sheepish smile. His inability to perform the spell was embarrassingly evident. Luna's eyebrow arched inquisitively, silently urging him to explain his predicament.

Summoning his wits, Anon quickly concocted a story. "Princess Luna, I... I was an orphan," he began, his voice tinged with feigned sadness. "I never had anyone to teach me magic. I've always been on my own, trying to figure it out by myself."

Luna paused, her gaze lingering on Anon as she processed his words. There was a depth of understanding in her eyes, a recognition of the loneliness and struggle that came with being orphaned. Yet, something in Anon's story seemed to unsettle her, as if a piece of the puzzle was amiss.

Sensing Anon's genuine struggle, Princess Luna shifted her approach. She decided to explain the concept of magic in a simpler, more accessible manner. Anon listened intently, his eyes fixed on Luna as she began to unravel the mysteries of Equestrian magic.

"Magic," Luna began, "is not just a force to be wielded. It is a living, breathing essence that connects all things in Equestria. To master levitation, one must first understand this connection."

To illustrate her point, Luna demonstrated a variety of magical abilities. She teleported a short distance, reappearing with a soft pop. She conjured a shimmering magic shield, its surface reflecting the dreamy starlight. Then, with a flourish, she performed a spell that briefly amplified her abilities, though she cautioned Anon that such magic was risky and required great control.

Returning to the levitation spell, Luna made the crystal orbit around Anon, creating a mesmerizing dance of light and movement. Anon watched, mesmerized by the display, a smile spreading across his face as he began to grasp the deeper essence of magic.

As the crystal continued its graceful flight, Luna shared a personal revelation with Anon. "Thou art my first ever student, Anon. I sense a magic within thee, familiar yet unexplainable. Mayhap it was destiny that brought thee to me."

She gazed at him with a newfound determination. "I shall endeavor to teach thee to the best of my abilities. Together, we shall uncover the mysteries that lie within thee."

Anon felt a surge of gratitude and a sense of purpose. Under Luna's guidance, he was not just learning magic; he was discovering a part of himself he never knew existed. The journey ahead seemed daunting, but with Luna as his mentor, Anon felt ready to face the challenges that lay ahead.

Several hours had slipped by in the dream realm, with Anon persistently trying to master the levitation spell. Luna observed him closely, her brow furrowing with concern as his efforts bore no fruit. Deciding to intervene, she teleported beside Anon, who was still deeply engrossed in his attempts.

Luna studied Anon thoughtfully, trying to discern a way to aid his understanding of magic. It was then that her gaze landed on his cutie mark – a music note intertwined with a microphone and headphones. The unique symbol piqued her curiosity, offering a potential clue to Anon's magical challenges.

"What does thy cutie mark represent, Anon?" Luna inquired gently, breaking his concentration.

Anon paused, momentarily taken aback. He had almost forgotten about the significance of cutie marks in this world. Glancing back at the emblem on his flank, he found himself at a loss for words. How could he explain the mark's origin without revealing his true background?

"It, uh, represents my... love for music and storytelling," Anon stammered, trying to sound convincing. "Back home, I was always drawn to the art of sound and narrative. It's a passion of mine."

Luna nodded thoughtfully, her eyes reflecting a mix of intrigue and empathy. "Then perhaps we should seek a connection between thy passion and thy magic. Oftentimes, our deepest affinities can unlock hidden potentials."

Anon felt a glimmer of hope. Maybe his love for music and storytelling could indeed be the key to unlocking his magical abilities. Luna's suggestion opened a new path for exploration, one that might finally allow him to tap into the magic of Equestria.

Anon watched as Luna settled gracefully in front of him, her smile as soothing as the moonlight that bathed the dream realm. "Dost thou remember the tale of Doctor Strange thou shared upon thy first visit here?" Luna asked, her eyes twinkling with fondness. "I found myself quite captivated by the story of that remarkable wizard."

Anon chuckled softly, recalling how he had cleverly adapted the story to fit the Equestrian world, careful to avoid any mention of humans. His version of Doctor Strange had been transformed into a mystical pony wizard, a character that resonated well with Luna.

"Ah, yes, that story," Anon replied with an innocent laugh. "I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to tell."

As he spoke, Anon couldn't help but notice the genuine warmth in Luna's smile. There was something about her demeanor that felt incredibly comforting, almost as if her presence could dispel any shadow of doubt or worry.

Sensing an opportunity to shift gears, Luna suggested, "Why not regale me with another tale? It could serve as a delightful respite from our lessons."

Anon paused, taken aback by the request. He felt a sudden responsibility to choose a story that would be just as engaging and suitable for Equestria. He racked his brain, searching for a tale that could captivate yet fit within the boundaries of this magical world.

After a moment of thoughtful silence, Anon spoke, "Well, there are many stories I could tell. Let me think of one that might be fitting for a night like this..."

Luna nodded encouragingly, her eyes patient and understanding. Anon felt the weight of expectation but also a growing excitement. Sharing stories from his world, albeit in a transformed manner, was a unique way to connect with Equestria. It was a bridge between his past and his present, and perhaps, a subtle key to unlocking his magical potential.

Intrigued by Luna's moon emblem, Anon was struck by a creative spark. He faced the Princess, who awaited his tale with a serene and curious gaze.

"I've thought of a story," Anon said, a hint of mystery in his voice. "It's about a guardian, a knight empowered by the moon. Here, in Equestria, we could call him the Lunar Knight."

Luna's ears perked up with interest. "Lunar Knight? A fascinating choice. I am eager to hear this tale."

Anon began his story, drawing inspiration from Marvel's Moon Knight but carefully molding it to fit the magical world of Equestria. He spun a tale of an Equestrian hero, chosen by the mystical forces of the moon, who protected the land during the night. This Lunar Knight was a figure of legend, battling against dark forces that threatened the peaceful night skies.

As the narrative unfolded, Anon described thrilling encounters and mystical adventures, all under the watchful eye of the moon. He skillfully wove elements of Equestrian magic and lore into the tale, making it resonate deeply with Luna's own connection to the night.

When the story reached its climax, with the Lunar Knight triumphing over a powerful darkness through the moon's blessing, Luna looked deeply moved. "Thy story is truly enthralling, Anon," she complimented, her voice echoing with genuine admiration. "The Lunar Knight's journey echoes the mystical and protective nature of the night. A tale most befitting."

Feeling a sense of achievement, Anon realized his story had not only been a delightful diversion but had also helped to forge a stronger bond with Luna. His adaptation of a familiar tale into the fabric of Equestria demonstrated the universal power of storytelling and the connection it can foster between diverse souls.


Encouraged by the story's success, Luna offered Anon a piece of advice, her smile still lingering. "Reflect upon thy passion for music and storytelling, and try to meld it with thy magic," she suggested gently.

Anon turned his attention back to the crystal. He stepped closer, closing his eyes to concentrate. In his mind's eye, he envisioned the melodies and narratives from his home, the stories that had always resonated with his spirit. As he immersed himself in these thoughts, a faint glow began to envelop the crystal.

Opening his eyes, Anon was greeted by the sight of a soft blue aura surrounding the crystal, gently lifting it into the air. His heart leaped with excitement. He turned towards Luna, his face alight with a triumphant expression, seeking her approval.

Luna, however, remained focused on the crystal, pointing towards it. "Stay focused, Anon," she cautioned softly.

But the moment had passed. Anon's attention had already shifted, and the crystal dropped back to the ground as the magical aura faded. Despite this, a sense of joy overwhelmed him. For the first time in Equestria, he had managed to control a small fragment of magic.

His excitement was palpable as he jumped with joy, an infectious enthusiasm filling the dream realm. "I did it! I actually did it!" he exclaimed, his voice brimming with elation.

Luna watched her student with a fond smile, her eyes reflecting pride and satisfaction. "Indeed, thou hast," she acknowledged. "Thy connection to thy passions has opened a pathway to magic. Remember this moment, Anon. It is a significant step in thy journey."

Anon's achievement was more than just a triumph of magical control; it was a personal victory, a blending of his love for music and storytelling with the mystical energies of Equestria. It was a moment of realization that his unique background could be the key to unlocking his magical potential.

As their practice session neared its end, Luna sensed the approaching time for her nightly duty of lowering the moon. Yet, there was a brief moment to spare. She turned to Anon with a relaxed demeanor, inviting another interlude. "Art thou in possession of another tale, Anon? I find myself greatly enjoying thy stories."

Anon, still riding the high from his magical success, sat down and pondered for a moment. He sifted through his memories for a story that would captivate and resonate with Luna. His eyes finally lit up as he found the perfect narrative.

With a warm smile, he turned to Luna and began, "There's a tale from my... from a land far away, about a mighty god named Thor. He's known as the God of Thunder and wielder of a powerful hammer."

Luna leaned in, her interest clearly piqued by the mention of another powerful being. "A God of Thunder, thou sayest? Pray, continue."

Anon wove the story of Thor, adapting it to fit the Equestrian world. He spoke of Thor's strength, his connection to the elements, and his heroic deeds. He described Thor's hammer, a magical artifact of immense power, and how Thor used it to protect his realm and maintain the balance of nature.

The story was filled with epic battles, lessons of humility and strength, and the importance of responsibility and honor. Anon's words painted a vivid picture of Thor's adventures, making the character come alive in the imagination of his audience.

As the tale unfolded, Luna listened with rapt attention, her expression a mix of awe and fascination. She was particularly intrigued by the themes of duty and the responsibility that came with great power, themes that resonated with her own role as a guardian of the night.

When the story concluded, Luna expressed her appreciation. "Thou hast a gift for bringing these characters to life, Anon. The tale of Thor is both inspiring and thought-provoking. It reminds us of the weight of duty and the importance of strength in character."

Anon felt a sense of satisfaction wash over him. Sharing these stories was not just a means of passing time; it was a way to connect with Luna on a deeper level. It was a reminder that even in this magical world, the themes of heroism and responsibility were universal.

As the story of Thor reached its conclusion, Anon noticed a change in Luna’s expression. Her gaze drifted towards the night sky, now filled with a contemplative, somewhat melancholic look. Anon, sensing the shift in mood, regarded her with concern and curiosity.

Luna, her voice laced with introspection, broke the silence. "Loki's betrayal of Thor... it reminds me of my own past. In some ways, Loki and I share similarities in our stories."

Anon realized the connection Luna was drawing. The tale of Loki, with its themes of betrayal, redemption, and familial strife, mirrored Luna's own history as Nightmare Moon and her subsequent return to grace.

Seeking to offer comfort, Anon spoke softly, "Princess, everyone has moments in their past they wish they could change. But what matters most is the path we choose to follow now."

Luna looked back at Anon, a slight smile touching her lips. "Thou speaketh truth, Anon. Our past actions shape us, but they do not have to define us eternally. We all have the power to choose a new path, to seek the light after times of darkness."

A brief moment of silent understanding passed between them, a connection forged by shared experiences and redemption. It was then that Luna glanced up at the sky once more, noting the time.

"The moment has come for me to lower the moon, making way for my sister to raise the sun," Luna announced, her tone shifting to one of regal duty. "It is a responsibility I hold dear, a symbol of balance and renewal."

Anon watched as Luna prepared to take her leave, his mind reflecting on the depth of their conversation and the stories shared. He realized that these tales were not just entertainment; they were reflections of life's deeper truths, resonating across different worlds and experiences.

As Luna departed to perform her nightly duty, Anon was left contemplating the parallels between their stories, the powerful themes of redemption, and the unifying threads that bind all beings, regardless of their realm.

Anon's eyes fluttered open, the first rays of midday sunlight streaming through his window, pulling him back to reality from his vivid dream of magical lessons with Princess Luna. He glanced to his right, noting the position of the sun in the sky, and realized it was time to start his day.

With a stretch and a yawn, Anon pushed himself out of bed and ambled towards the bathroom. Standing before the mirror, he took a moment to observe his reflection. His celestial blue mane seemed to capture the essence of the moonlit night, a subtle reminder of his unique experiences in Equestria.

A sigh escaped his lips as his gaze fell upon the toothbrush and toothpaste lined up neatly on the counter. A playful idea sparked in his mind, and a mischievous smile spread across his face. He decided to indulge in a bit of fun, inspired by his recent magical endeavors.

Positioning himself like a character out of a comically dubbed Japanese movie, Anon dramatically addressed the toothbrush. "You have met your match, Toothbrush-san!" he declared with mock seriousness. "I have been training in secret with Luna Sensei, and now I shall demonstrate my newfound powers!"

With a focused gaze, Anon attempted to use his magic on the toothbrush and toothpaste. To his delight, he saw them wobble slightly, then gradually begin to levitate. The brush and paste floated a few inches above the countertop, clumsily at first, but steadying as Anon concentrated.

A triumphant grin lit up Anon's face as he witnessed the small yet significant victory. "Ha! I did it!" he exclaimed, a laugh escaping his lips. This moment, though seemingly trivial, was a testament to the progress he had made in his magical training. It was a small step, but for Anon, it felt like a giant leap.

Filled with a renewed sense of confidence and excitement, Anon proceeded with his morning routine, his spirits lifted by the successful, albeit modest, display of magic. It was a reminder that every day in Equestria brought new challenges and opportunities for growth.

With the day ahead of him and no obligations, Anon stood by the window, pondering how to spend his free time. He recalled Applejack mentioning something about 'Applebuck Season' and her insistence that he take a break. As he looked out, he noticed the town was bustling with activity, everypony busily preparing for some kind of festive celebration. Curiosity piqued, Anon grabbed his saddlebag and stepped outside to investigate.

The streets were alive with excitement as ponies decorated with banners and streamers, each adorned with an apple emblem in the center. Anon recognized the symbol as indicative of the Apple family, tying it to the Applebuck Season Applejack had mentioned.

While contemplating the festivities, Anon's attention was drawn to a white unicorn with an electric blue mane, distinguishable by her headphones. It struck him as peculiar – actual headphones in Equestria. Intrigued, he approached her and gently tapped her side to get her attention.

The unicorn turned, still bobbing her head to the music, her eyes hidden behind shades of purple. Anon asked where she got her headphones, but she didn't respond verbally. Instead, she just smiled and continued to nod along to her music.

As Anon tried to engage with the headphone-wearing unicorn, a voice chimed in from behind him. "It's no use trying to get her attention when she's lost in her 'foul music,'" said the voice in a refined, melodious tone.

Turning around, Anon saw a sophisticated earth pony approaching. She had a sleek gray coat and an elegantly styled mane that was black with a subtle pink streak running through it. Her poised demeanor and the treble clef cutie mark spoke volumes of her affinity for music.

The pony walked up to Anon with a friendly yet refined smile. "I apologize for Vinyl's distraction. She tends to lose herself in her music," she explained, her tone carrying a playful critique of her friend's habits.

Anon chuckled, "That's quite alright. I was just curious about the celebration happening around town."

"Oh, that!" the earth pony replied with a smile. "Today's celebration is actually a special one. Everypony is gathering to congratulate Applejack. She recently saved Ponyville from an unexpected stampede of cows. Mayor Mare thought it fitting to throw a party in her honor as a thank you for her bravery."

Intrigued, Anon nodded in understanding. "That's quite heroic. It must be a big event then."

The earth pony extended a hoof in introduction. "Indeed, it is. Oh, where are my manners? I'm Octavia Melody. I play the cello, leaning more towards classical music."

"Nice to meet you, Octavia. I'm Anon. I'm still trying to get a feel for all the local customs," Anon replied, shaking her hoof.

Octavia's expression warmed further. "Well, Anon, today's celebration is a wonderful example of how Ponyville comes together. It's not just a party; it's a show of unity and gratitude. You're most welcome to join in the festivities."

Anon's curiosity was piqued. "Thank you, I think I will. It sounds like a great way to understand the community spirit here."

As Anon looked around, taking in the festive atmosphere, Octavia's eyes were drawn to his cutie mark. "I can't help but notice your cutie mark," she remarked with a hint of curiosity. "It's quite distinctive. What does it represent?"

Anon was momentarily reminded of the significance of his cutie mark in Equestria, something he often overlooked. He glanced at the symbol on his flank, a music note combined with a microphone and headphones. "This cutie mark," he began, "represents my passion for music and storytelling. I've always been drawn to the art of sound and weaving tales."

Octavia's expression brightened at his explanation. "Music and storytelling? That's quite intriguing! Do you play any instruments?" she inquired, clearly interested in the idea of a fellow musician.

Anon paused, considering how to answer without revealing too much about his past. "I have some experience with music," he replied cautiously. "Playing an instrument has always been a part of my life, though I haven't had much opportunity to explore it here in Equestria."

Her interest now fully piqued, Octavia suggested enthusiastically, "Music is a language that transcends boundaries, especially in Equestria. Maybe you could share your musical talents with us sometime. It would be wonderful for the community."

The idea sparked a mixture of excitement and apprehension in Anon. The thought of sharing his music in this new world was something he hadn't considered. "That's an interesting idea," he responded with a thoughtful smile. "It might be a great way to connect with the ponies here."

Octavia nodded in agreement. "Absolutely. Music has the power to unite and inspire. I think you'll find your musical expression can bring joy here, just as it did for you."

After their conversation, Octavia and Vinyl excused themself, leaving Anon to reflect on her words.

Anon was about to inquire further about Vinyl's headphones when he realized both Octavia and Vinyl had already moved on. Shrugging off the missed opportunity, he decided he could always ask about it later.

As he meandered through the bustling streets, Anon spotted Twilight Sparkle approaching with a precarious stack of papers in her magic grasp. Eager to greet her, he walked up to her, unintentionally startling her in the process. The papers in Twilight's magical hold wobbled dangerously, nearly spilling to the ground.

Anon chuckled at the near mishap, but Twilight was less amused, giving him a mild glare. "Anon! You nearly scared me half to flight!" she exclaimed, stabilizing her stack of papers.

Apologizing, Anon said, "Sorry about that, Twilight. Didn't mean to startle you. What's all this?" He gestured toward the papers she was meticulously examining.

Twilight's expression softened as she replied, "These are notes for my presentation about Applejack's heroism earlier. I'm just making sure there are no grammatical errors or misspellings. It has to be perfect to honor her properly."

Hearing Twilight's explanation triggered a memory in Anon. He recalled this specific event from the 'Applebuck Season' episode where Applejack stubbornly refused help. He whispered to himself, reminiscing about the episode's details, which caught Twilight's attention.

"What was that, Anon?" Twilight asked, her curiosity piqued.

"Oh, nothing important," Anon quickly covered, not wanting to reveal his knowledge of the future events. "Listen, I'm free for the day. Is there anything I can help with? It looks like you've got your hooves full."

Twilight seemed to consider his offer for a moment. "Actually, yes. If you could help me organize these papers and maybe assist with setting up the presentation area, that would be really helpful."

"Sure thing, Twilight. Happy to help," Anon replied with a smile, glad to be involved and to have a distraction from his thoughts about the episode.

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Together, they set to work, Anon assisting Twilight with her preparations for the celebration. It was a simple task, but it gave him a sense of being part of the community, of contributing to something larger than himself.

Anon stood beside Twilight, holding her sizable stack of papers as she prepared to deliver her speech. The sheer volume of her notes made him second-guess his offer to help. He couldn't help but think about making a quick exit, but it was too late – Twilight had already begun.

"Welcome, everypony! Today we are here to honor a pony we can always count on to help in matters great and small," Twilight announced confidently to the gathered crowd.

She nodded at Anon, signaling for the next page. Slightly annoyed by the reminder of Twilight's notorious thoroughness from the show, he dutifully flipped the page for her.

"A pony whose contributions to—" Twilight was midway through her sentence when she was suddenly interrupted.

Rainbow Dash's enthusiastic interruption drew various reactions from the crowd, ranging from amusement to admiration. Twilight, however, was visibly annoyed at being cut off mid-speech. She shot a glance at Anon, who was doing his best to suppress a smile, knowing this scene all too well from the show.

But Anon's attention quickly shifted to something—or rather, someone—in the crowd. A pony was making her way through the gathered ponies, dragging a sack filled with what appeared to be an assortment of junk. Anon murmured to himself, "That can't be Applejack..." His curiosity piqued, he wondered what was going on.


At that moment, Twilight, who was beside him, got interrupted by Pinkie Pie's usual antics. Seizing the distraction, Anon carefully set down the stack of papers and stepped away from the stage. He kept his gaze fixed on the mysterious pony, moving through the crowd with determination.

As he navigated the throng of ponies, he occasionally bumped into some of them. "Sorry, excuse me," he apologized, maintaining his focus on the mare with the bag. He was curious about her identity and the contents of the bag that seemed so important.

Finally, Anon reached the pony, a mare who stopped and turned to face him, one eyebrow raised inquisitively. Anon, now standing before her, suddenly realized why he had been so intent on following her.


As Anon approached the mare with the heavy bag, she turned to face him, her grey eyes meeting his with a guarded expression. Her brown coat and grey mane gave her a rugged appearance, and her voice, scratchy and tomboyish, carried a distinct edge of rudeness.

"What the buck do you want?" she asked, her eyebrow arched in a mix of curiosity and annoyance.

Anon, slightly taken aback by her bluntness and the use of 'buck' in place of a more familiar expletive, composed himself before responding. "Sorry to bother you," he said calmly. "I just noticed you carrying that big bag and was curious about what's inside."

She glanced briefly at her bag, then back at Anon with a dismissive look. "It's none of your business," she replied sharply.

Anon, trying to keep the conversation friendly, pressed on a bit more. "I didn't mean to pry. I'm just new around here and trying to get to know more about Ponyville and its residents."

The mare let out a huff, her expression softening ever so slightly. "Well, if you must know, I'm just hauling some old parts and gadgets. But really, it's nothing interesting."

Anon nodded, respecting her boundaries. "Alright, I understand. I'm Anon, by the way."

She gave him a brief, noncommittal nod. "Gizmo," she offered in return, before turning to leave.

As she walked away, Anon stood there for a moment, processing the encounter. He was left wondering about her story and the contents of her mysterious bag.


Curiosity getting the better of him, Anon made a decision to discreetly follow Gizmo. He couldn't shake the thought that she might be the inventor behind Vinyl Scratch's unique headphones. As he trailed behind her, he noticed her cutie mark, a clear indicator of her affinity for creating gadgets.

Anon maintained a respectful distance, but Gizmo was perceptive. She soon became aware of his presence and stopped abruptly, turning to confront him with a look of irritation. "Is there something else you need?" she asked, her voice tinged with annoyance.

Caught off guard, Anon flashed a sheepish smile and cleared his throat, trying to appear nonchalant. "Actually, yes," he said, trying to sound casual. "I was wondering if you're the one who invented Vinyl Scratch's headphones. They're quite unique."

Gizmo, her expression still guarded, simply nodded in affirmation. She didn't seem interested in elaborating or engaging in further conversation about her work.

Anon, sensing that he might have overstepped his bounds, decided to back off. "That's really cool. Sorry for following you, I was just curious," he apologized, hoping to ease the tension.

Gizmo gave him a brief, assessing look before turning to continue on her way. "Just try not to make a habit of it," she said over her shoulder, leaving Anon to ponder the brief interaction.

As she disappeared into the crowd, Anon realized that his curiosity about the residents of Ponyville might sometimes lead him into awkward situations. He made a mental note to approach such encounters with more tact in the future.


After his encounter with Gizmo, Anon observed the crowd beginning to disperse, each pony going about their day. He noticed Twilight standing a short distance away, lost in thought. Sensing something amiss, he approached her with a concerned expression. "Is everything alright, Twilight?" he inquired.

Twilight snapped out of her reverie, brushing aside her concerns with a forced smile. "Oh, it's nothing, Anon. Just some thoughts I need to sort out. Everything's fine, I hope," she replied, though her tone suggested she was still preoccupied with whatever was on her mind.

She then looked up at Anon, her expression more resolute. "If you need me for anything, I'll be in the library doing some studying," she said, then walked past him, her pace brisk as she headed towards her sanctuary of books and research.

Anon nodded in understanding, watching her depart. He stood there for a moment, contemplating his next move. The day was still young, and with the town's activities winding down, he pondered what to do with the rest of his time.

The possibilities in Ponyville were numerous. He could explore the town further, perhaps stumble upon new faces or places. Alternatively, he could take this opportunity to relax and enjoy some quiet time, a rarity in the often bustling town.

With these thoughts in mind, Anon decided to take a leisurely stroll through Ponyville. It was a chance to clear his head, reflect on the day's events, and maybe discover something new about this charming and ever-surprising place he was starting to call home.

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Anon, seated comfortably in Sugarcube Corner, observed the daily hustle and bustle of the bakery. Mr. and Mrs. Cake moved about efficiently, attending to their customers and managing the store. Anon realized he hadn't formally introduced himself to the Cakes yet, considering it might be a good opportunity to get to know them better.

His attention, however, was momentarily diverted by the playful banter of a little colt and filly playing inside the store. "Okay, we're gonna play a game called tongue twister," announced the colt confidently. "Whoever wins doesn't have to do homework for a week!" The filly accepted the challenge with glee, and they began their game, reciting classic tongue twisters like 'Betty Botter bought some butter' and 'Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers.'

Anon watched them, a smile spreading across his face at their innocent fun. It was moments like these that brought a unique charm to life in Ponyville.

His reverie was interrupted when two stallions entered the shop, engaged in a lively discussion about playing darts and hitting bullseyes. Anon overheard their conversation, and for some reason, it sparked something inside him. It was an inexplicable feeling, a random spark of inspiration or insight, but he couldn't quite pinpoint its source.

Closing his eyes, Anon let himself be immersed in the rhythm of the store – the laughter of the colt and filly, the chattering of customers, the soft background music, and the sound of the Cakes working. It was like a symphony of everyday life, each element contributing to a harmonious melody.

As he sat there, lost in the sounds around him, Anon felt a sense of creativity stirring within him. Perhaps it was the lively atmosphere of Sugarcube Corner, or maybe it was the diverse experiences of the day fueling his imagination. Whatever it was, Anon felt a surge of inspiration, a desire to create or engage in something expressive and fulfilling.


In the cozy atmosphere of Sugarcube Corner, Anon felt a surge of inspiration. Closing his eyes, he began to sing the lyrics of "Trendsetter" by Connor Price and Haviah Mighty, his voice blending with the lively sounds around him:

"Yeah, Trendsetter, whoa,
League of my own, it don't get better, no,
Read what I wrote, I'm a best seller, yeah,
Reach for my goals, hit it dead center,
Hit it dead center..."

As he sang, his voice flowed effortlessly, capturing the upbeat and confident essence of the song. The other patrons in the bakery began to take notice, their conversations pausing as they turned their attention to the source of the melody.

"Bullseye, hit it the most, there's no misses,
Something like fish in a barrel, it's no different,
Blindfold on me, I still got the most vision,
Trendsetter, told 'em before, but they don't listen..."

Unaware of the crowd forming around him, Anon continued, the words coming naturally:

"Batter better bring a better bat because I'm bigger, better,
Solo singles selling several shows out every single second,
Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers,
Connor came and crushed the competition..."

As the song progressed, Anon was completely immersed in his performance, his rendition capturing the room's attention. The little colt and filly stopped their game, and even Mr. and Mrs. Cake paused in their work, all drawn to the impromptu performance.

The song concluded with Anon hitting the final verse perfectly. As the last words faded, he opened his eyes and was startled to find himself surrounded by a small audience. A moment of stunned silence was followed by spontaneous applause from the crowd. Anon, taken aback by the unexpected attention, could only offer a sheepish, surprised smile.

The patrons of Sugarcube Corner, their faces showing a mix of enjoyment and admiration, applauded his impromptu performance. Anon, recovering from his initial surprise, felt a surge of joy and connection. His performance, though unintended, had brought a moment of shared happiness to the heart of Ponyville.

As Anon stood amidst the applause, still slightly flushed from his unexpected performance, Octavia and Vinyl Scratch made their way to the front. Octavia, with a look of genuine admiration, complimented him, "I had no idea you were so talented with your singing, Anon."

Vinyl, typically less vocal, remained silent but nodded in agreement, her gesture echoing her friend's sentiments. Anon, feeling his cheeks warm with a blush, struggled to find the right words. "Thanks," he managed to say. "I was just following the vibe of the room. Couldn't help myself."

Octavia's smile widened, and she was about to speak when Vinyl, with her characteristic flair, levitated a card in front of Anon. He took it, slightly confused, and saw it was an invitation to 'Club Pony'. He looked up at Vinyl, his expression questioning.

Vinyl, not one for many words, pointed at a specific word on the card - 'tonight' - then pointed at Anon, and again at the club's name on the card. The message was clear, but Anon still looked perplexed.

Turning to Octavia for clarification, he found her rolling her eyes playfully at Vinyl's charades. "Vinyl wants you to come to the club tonight," Octavia explained. "She thinks you'd be a great addition to the night's entertainment."

Anon, still holding the card, looked between Vinyl and Octavia. The idea of performing at a club was both exciting and nerve-wracking. "I... um, I'll think about it," he stammered, the idea of taking his impromptu performance to a larger stage both thrilling and daunting.

Vinyl gave him an encouraging nod, her usual cool demeanor showing a hint of excitement at the prospect of Anon's participation.

With a mixture of anticipation and uncertainty, Anon pocketed the invitation. The day had taken an unexpected turn, and now the possibility of performing at Club Pony added an exciting, yet challenging, dimension to his life in Ponyville.

Comments ( 10 )

LET'S GOOHHHH!!!

Comment posted by CommonDash deleted January 10th
Comment posted by AvoidingFever17 deleted January 10th

Yooooooooo !
MOAR !

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Thank you for your detailed and honest feedback on my story. I genuinely appreciate the time and effort you took to share your thoughts with me.

I want to express that my main purpose in writing this story is to have fun and explore my creative side. I'm not a professional writer, and this journey is as much about self-expression as it is about learning and improving. Reading your feedback, I won't hide that it stung a bit to realize the significant errors in my work. However, I see this as an important part of my growth as a writer.

I understand that parts of my story didn't meet your expectations, and for that, I am sincerely sorry. My intention was never to let down my readers. Writing is a complex and ongoing learning process, and while I strive to get better, I also recognize that I might still falter along the way, especially since writing doesn't come naturally to me.

Despite these challenges, I am committed to doing my best to improve. I will take your feedback seriously and apply it to future chapters. Improvement may be slow, and I hope you'll see positive changes as the story unfolds. I'm striving to get the hang of writing this story and to make it as enjoyable as possible for my readers and myself.

Thank you once again for your understanding and support. It means a lot to me, especially as I navigate through this learning process. I hope you will continue to find interest in the story as it evolves and improves.

Warm regards,

[Raikiry] :twilightblush:

Banger story keep on truckin

Please say theat well be more chapters it is funny stay on the side nope you get pulled into every thing without trying

Quick question author san,that rainbow dash tag she's the only who the MC love with?

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good question, the answer is no. their will be more character trying to figure out their feeling towards the main character of the story. not just the main six.

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