"When the buckled girder lets down the grinding span, the blame of loss, or murder, is laid upon the man." - Julia Ecklar & Leslie Fish
A Vaporeon from another universe takes a vacation in Equestria. Whatever that is. Even their universe doesn't fully understand them.
What she intends to do is simple. Attend the Equestrian Games, check out the rest of country, maybe screw the timeline six ways from sunday (and seven ways ON sunday), and also maybe cause enough chaos to annoy even Discord.
Note: This story was written for my friend CaptainUmiya. This does not in any way relate to any of my other stories.
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Vaporeon
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I loved working on this together and i really hope people who read it enjoy it. I reread the first chapter on here.
Why is the Vaporeon in the picture purple? Aren’t they suppose to be blue? Is it a shiny?
Huh, well, I guess she doesn't have much experience with the saiyan form since she can't control and prevent the pressure she exerts in that form.
Also, will anything happen or is this just the OC showing off to the mlp cast?
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Hi Creator of Umiya, To answer your questions Umiya does have a good amount of control over her saiyan form but due to how strong she becomes when transforming she gives off a decent chunk of pressure that only grows stronger when inside which is why normally when she is inside she chooses not to use that form. And as for why she is purple This is my OC and I really like purple and wanted her to look nice. Not much else besides purple is just my favorite color think of her as a completely unique vaporeon.
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Also as far as something happening there will be something happening but I don't want to spoil anything.
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD LEARN SOME PACING!!!!! Paragraphs should be more than 1-3 lines for god sake, the longest paragraph is only 4 lines, and for god sake plug some god forsaken plot holes, its holier than Swiss cheese. - RANDOMFASTREADER
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It actually is fairly close to the 'mon's shiny colors.
The way you have discord describe her makes me think she has too much power but other than that it’s a decent read so far.
I love the memes in this like from Hellsing Ultimate Abridged. Also, can't wait for more.
Btw Next chapter is still being worked on its just slow dealing with partial writers block thanks for being patient. Fyi this is a message from both me and the author as I am basically the co writer.