"When the buckled girder lets down the grinding span, the blame of loss, or murder, is laid upon the man." - Julia Ecklar & Leslie Fish
While exploring a city of a different dimension, Princess Luna discovers a little girl using her namesake. Though she appreciates those who love the night dearly, the child's villainous personality has Luna taking a dislike to her.
After stripping the first grader of her advanced technology, Luna sits down to have a talk with her. In doing so, she finds some interesting things about both "Luna Girl" and one of her adversaries.
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That was a WONDERFUL story!
Man, I remember being forced to watch PJ Masks at the doctor's office (it was either that or the Cooking Channel. Not sure which was worse), because there was always kids in while I was in as well.
So this was much more fun at least than that.
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I don't know if that's a compliment or not lol
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It's a compliment.
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Woohoo!
Sooooo...because I have a pair of nieces, I've ended up watching PJ Masks, and...well, due to specific episodes, I sometimes feel like Luna Girl could become a regular ally of the PJs so...this was nice to read.
This was...actually a surprisingly well written story. I have never watched PJMasks, nor do I have any real desire to, but I do love the way you wrote the relationship between Luna Girl/Brianna and Luna. The emotions are just...incredible. It honestly makes me hope that, one day, you can visit this relationship again in the future. Bravo!
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Thank you so much! It's not often I get truly motivated to write and put out a story, but I do my best with every one I do get out!
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That's honestly really good to hear. What fascinates me about this story is it is fully self contained, but it is open ended enough that if you really wanted to you could revisit it in the future (Luna could always find a way to return to that world, after all). I love the idea of alternate universes, and it seems like Luna just might have screwed up the PJMasks timeline by having Luna Girl *not* be a villain. It could result in some pretty interesting story ideas in the future.
Once again, great job, and it's nice to hear that you were so motivated to do this!
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that happened to me too, only in my province's house with a bunch of kids.
Well, this story has been featured. And I am really happy to see that considering how much I enjoyed it (I have re-read it several times now, lol. Still enjoy it).
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It was FEATURED!? Mother of Luna why wasn't I around to see it when it was up there?! AAAAGH!
Also, it is amazing to hear that you have been rereading this story. Knowing a story is good enough to be reread is one of the best things to an author.
This was really good. I watch it too so I feel like PJ Masks could go in so many directions.
I have watched PJ Masks to about season 3 (And I was not forced to watch it with small kids, my sister and I just had a thing for watching kids shows cause the shows geared at our ages sucked with snarky attitudes and disrespecting parents/"parents are dumb and know nothing" tropes and such). As a fan of the "Luna Girl needs to be a good guy" train, this was an awesome read! I also wonder why no one's parents ever get discussed. I don't remember Dark Owl, but that was also a good interaction written
Great job on this! I want a sequel 
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Will you please make a sequel?