• Member Since 18th Feb, 2019
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Flash_Game


Surprisingly I’ve been a brony for just over a year, yet here I am

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First things first, I don't own My Little Pony, assassin's Creed, Fallout, or the elder scrolls, or any other IP's I might reference.

This is the first fanfic I've ever written, as a matter of fact, it's my first story in any way, so criticise to your heart's content, tell me how to improve.

This is the map of Ponyville I'll use in the story


After a freak midair accident, a lone brony finds himself in Equestria with a pip-boy and new found knowledge about parkour. But he wasn't the only one to go through. How will they deal with the shock, and most importantly, how will they deal with the change of their new powers.




Edit: had to add the little red tag of suicide just in case because of a reference in chap. 15. I just want to be careful

Chapters (19)
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Comments ( 20 )

This is interesting, waiting for more parts.

Interesting story, keep it up

Can’t wait for more!

I have to ask.... How far is Luis in the series, like season wise? Does he know about Cosy Glow in Season 8? Also for the mirror portal that goes to the EQG world? I can also see this story progress great, but you need a editor/proofreader. You do got potential though.

9525152
Yeah he knows, both season 8 and about the mirror. As for me having potential, I don’t know, I’m just doing this as a hobby to get my mind of things, to relax a little

9525362
Just keep doing what your doing for this story.

MOUR, AND YOUR BLOOD WILL BE GIVEN TO THE MIGHTY NINE TAILS FOR HATING ON THE BEST SHOW EVER NARUTO!

ps, i love this story and it was a good read hope to see more.

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Well, you’re in luck my friend as I’m wrapping up chap. 15 which might have close to 7000 freaking words!!

Comment posted by jen_lee_hattie deleted April 11th

Ah, Cliffhanger, my greatest enemy. We meet again, but I have already defeated you!

Definitely liking the longer chapter format.

9600593
Thank you very much!!

The only problem is that with the longer chapters life gets in the way, but I can manage :moustache:

I mean, Twilight is best pony, so I quite enjoy this. :twilightsmile:

Not entirely sure about the whole ‘mom’ part, but I’ll roll with it for now.

Human friendships can be so hard.

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About the 'mom' part, I was trying to do something a bit different from what I've seen, and with Luis already having family issues, it kinda seemed like the right thing to do

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