Writer of The Day My Life Ended. Always working on my next story. Spotty with updates.
This story is a sequel to The Day My Life Continued
It’s been years since the events of DMLC. Morgan and Thorax have gone on many adventures in this time. Here, they help the ponies of Equestria through Season 5. Though some surprises come along the way (as always, Morgan’s not even surprised anymore).
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You may want to mark The Day My Life Continued as Complete...just a suggestion.
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Just did. Thank you for the reminder! I was in a rush this morning and forgot.
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No problem, glad to be of assistance!
Dun dun dun!
I’ve been gone a long, long time. Summer classes are killer.
I’m enjoying this story, and I am not in the least surprised that Morgan picked up another child. She just can’t say no to those eyes. And Thorax still can’t say no to Morgan.
I’m interested to see what happens with the Tantabus, and to see how Morgan handles the Tirek situation. I’m actually wondering if the Tantabus might show up a little early if you’re teasing it now.
In any case, still loving your work.
You keep writing good wordstuffs, and I’ll keep reading.
Best Wishes,
Knight.
This story suddenly has a lot of interesting different storylines I'm curious about.
How is Lilac going to make it through 3 months alone? How is the changeling integration going to go? How is Dark Justice going to make it in this madhouse he finds himself in now? (Both the literal house and Ponyville in general.) And what's gonna happen with our friend Tirek, considering he he went through a good portion of Equestria (if not, all the big cities at least) which would include Manehattan? If he hurts Lilac, there will be hell to pay. Also will Celestias plan involve the fifth alicorn?
In short: you got me hooked. (Not that you didn't since the first book...)
However I'd like to point out that technically Rumble existed already at this point in the show. He had his debut back in Hurricane Fluttershy.
So does Featherweight, with his debut in Ponyville Confidential and Pipsqueak in Luna Eclipsed. My point is that while not very prominent in the show, there are young male ponies in Ponyville besides Snips and Snails contrary to what Morgan said.
Also in this chapter we got some rather long parts straight from the episode ... I skipped those while reading. Especially that taxi scene felt to me like it dragged on since I wanted to see Thorax in his quest not read something where I already knew where it was going, since apparently Thorax being there didn't change anything.
That being said I did like the drama heavy moments as well as the sweet moments. Keep it up.
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I'm going to ignore that bits you blocked out, purely because I am a creature of spite.
As for the colts, yes I was aware others existed. However I always thought Pipsqueak was from a younger class than the CMC, so he's out with Dark Justice. Also I think at this point Rumple is or is being sent to Flight School.
I too hated writing the scenes from the show itself. For my MLP fics I like writing stuff that happens outside. However the closer to the finale I get, the more episode content will be tied in.
This was well worth 100 hours of fallout into just for this character to exist. Somehow she's taken a life of her own which we don't know what to do about it. Waffle has become a living force of literature, and destruction that can't be stopped. I'm so goddamn proud of my horrific creation.
You know, when I first saw this part I thought it was a Devil May Cry crossover! Please respond to this comment.
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Okay but only because your comment was cool
Awww man... no comments for chapter after chapter...
Anyway, I just want you to know I'm still reading and still enjoying the story despite just lurking most of the time.
We are getting closer and closer to the finale of season 5 and I'm pretty excited to see how you handle it / how Morgan and Darcy handle it.
Me. I'm still reading.
I didn't know anything about how the empire was saved... that was years ago, right? Good thing you put in a summary.
As for Tirek I wonder how he'd react to reality travel magic. Canonically he didn't show much finesse with the magic he got so it stands to reason that he'll just use it as a resource without realizing its potential kinda like he did with Discords magic. Unless that magic works on a subconscious level and "gets him away" when he is about to lose like a planeswalker spark. That could be bad on so many levels unlikely as it may seem. I think Raspberry is right to be nervous.
Thorax screwed up big time. Disrupting the Plan and breaking trust and making half a year of work moot. In my eyes Morgan had every right to be a little angry. Still hope they'll make up though.
Fun fact: Princess Celestia was the only princess you mentioned exactly once and you misspelled her name. I'm going out on a hunch here and say that she isn't your "best princess".
While it's a good chapter and I enjoyed reading it it really had not much new or surprising in it. It was the season 4 finale with Morgans difficult but expected sacrifice added in. I did enjoy the confrontation between her and Discord however. I just wish we had gotten a little bit of aftermath of that particular pair and Morgan in general. It felt to me like she wasn't as much in the headspace to forgive Discord as easily as the ponies do and I had hoped we'd get something more after all the setup and hurt of that particular scene. Also where was Killjoy in all of this?
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Killjoy was at her house getting drunk.
And yeah, more of that is gonna be explored in season 5. Morgan's feelings about Discord are gonna be explored a lot there. But for this, Morgan put her feelings aside to better protect everybody. Not so much "forgive and forget" but more "forgive so we can save the day, but hold the anger inside until later".
Couldn't ya see the bloody bombs?
If she was bad demomare, she wouldn't sit there discussing with them, now would she?