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Zeprto678


Hi, I love to write fanfiction and read fanfiction. My Avatar is a pony that I adopted from 💫 Abyss 💫 on Amino.

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Like the description said, "a universe where the Elements of Harmony never existed if the tree didn't exist either" is where a former human ended up in. Not only that, but they were turned into their sheep OC, Jasper. There, he makes friends with lots of ponies while also having to deal with events that have or haven't happened in the show.

Some of the OCs in my story belongs to those who have their own MLP AU ask blogs on Tumblr. After all, they're the counterparts of those people's OCs.

The "Crossover" tag is there because this story is technically a crossover between multiple MLP AUs since it has counterparts of the characters from those AUs in the story.

The cover title art was drawn on Toyhouse by InvaderAlien.

The Psychopath proofreads this story.

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 18 )

The cover image is a drawing of Jasper.

Why is Jasper's wool purple? All of the sheep that I've seen on the show have all had realistic wool colors.

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I asked them to draw Jasper with those colors. To make him more unique than the Crystal Sheep on the show.

Comment posted by Princesolarecilpse deleted Jul 30th, 2023

Honesty hehe It's good writing no flaws I can pick out also love that the proofreader's username is literally Psychopath love seeing that at the end no problems intended but it the contrast from the chapter then seeing the name is like whoa . anyway keep up the good work both of you

to note is it even worth calling MC a hybrid anymore maybe it's just me but when a "species" establishes itself and its "niche" it has a claim to being something new. Given the MC seems to have helped multiple AU's maybe his species deserves a name most animals on earth that are at the top would fail to do that once humans are included let alone multiple times and he did it alone #GiveJasperARace

So did Jasper ever get the Elements of Harmony back or is that still a work in progress?

He smiled. “I ‘convinced’ her to send it back to you once we’re back at the palace,” answered Draco.

Alright Draco, what’s going to stop her from doing something nefarious to the Elements of Harmony in the meantime?

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He did get them back. Draco made sure of it. It's just that I forgot to add it in that Princess Celestia returned them to Jasper.

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😁 Let's just say, she'll have a very hard time trying to open the box.

Instead of making a whole explanation in the synopsis maybe you should actually make a synopsis

The idea of solight being partly spilt into solar and twilight is a idea because jasper and the other were going to figure out that solight whole time that they were a fusion between solar and twilight

Comment posted by Zeprto678 deleted Sep 9th, 2023

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I just realized that you meant the description that all chapters come with, but yeah, I think I can do that.

A wonderful chapter about so many characters we know! It was absolutely lovely to read!
I also really like the developing relationship between Banana and Healthy Light, and I’m looking forward to what else you’ve got in mind! ^^

Comment posted by JDeck306 deleted Sep 18th, 2023

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Draco and luna would he mad At celestia if she did that

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