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MaggiesHeartLove


Best known for My Little Pony Legend crossover series. I am a Christian, graphic designer and aspiring story writer.

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Even in darkness....the magic of Friendship will shine the light!

Six months after Korra met the Ponies and defeated Amon, her life is so far perfect; she's a fully realized Avatar, she has a great boyfriend, amazing friends, and she's fallen in love with Equestria and it's magic. However, her perfect life is soon cut short. While on a trip to the south pole for the annual Glacier Spirits Festival, Korra and the Ponies discover that the spirit world is dangerously unbalanced. Determined to prove her worth as the Avatar and bring back balance to the sprit world Korra decides to train with her wise yet mysterious uncle, Chief Unalaq who has the power to control spirits. But dark spirits might be the least of their troubles. More evil forces are on the rise, dark forces which could destroy not only Korra's world...but Equestria as well.
With the power of the Elements of Harmony, and the guidance of the mysterious Leilani, the girls are on a race against time to save both of their homes. Battles will be fought, loyalties will be tested, and some friendships will fall at the seems.

In this thrilling magical sequel to the heartwarming legend, one young girl and six brave ponies must work together to bring back the balance and learn that while it takes a strong person to admit mistakes, it takes an even stronger person to make things right. And it especially helps when you have true friends by your side all the way through.

Chapters (16)
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Comments ( 38 )

Awesome. I loved your first story. It was so awesome! And I know I'm gonna like this just as much. Perhaps Discord can make some appearances. He'd be a real hoot with Bumi.

On the fanfic.net version you need to change the story property to Crossover and select MLP.

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I'd like to see him in the story as well. This season is about about spirits, and Discord is a spirit. I wonder if he has any connection to Vaatu, since they're both spirits of Chaos.

Wonderful job. I can't wait to see how the rest of it goes. Book 2 was by far my fave of Legend of Korra.

Honestly, I dont know why your stories dont have more views. It's a crime, I tell you. Please update soon, cause im loving this. Cant wait for the eventual korra/ponies vs unamatto fight.

I thought James and the Giant Peach.

Hey, how are you allowed to put songs from other franchises in your stories? When I do it, they wouldn't accept mine.

Comment posted by MaggiesHeartLove deleted Mar 23rd, 2016

Liek ef u cry evrytme :raritycry:

Well your mentioned hard work was clearly evident in this chapter even if its not your fav :twilightsmile:

Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie unleashed fire blasts

Hm? Wasn`t Flutters element Air?

I never liked how Mako treated Korra in the show, I was even more upset when I learned that other reviewers were saying that Korra was at fault, I mean yeah, she did screw up, but I still argue that Mako deserved just as much, if not more, heat. It's one of the reason's I stopped watching the show after season 2 ended. I am glad that you corrected this mistake.

Once again, love the story, hate the songs. You've gotten better with the grammar here, but still needs spit and polish.

5719856 Thing is though that the situation is far more gray than "Korra's to blame" or "Mako's to blame." On one hand, you have Korra who's trying to save her family and tribe with the help of the United Nations army even after the President's told her not to. It may not be a highly ethical decision but it would get results. However, on the other hand, you have Mako who has a stable job as a police officer, something he'd never dream of being back in his youth as a homeless kind, and was directly asked by the President to tell him if Korra's getting "rash." If he's later found out as an accomplice, he'd be fired by Bei-fong before he knows it. Outing his girlfriend wasn't a very nice thing to do but in his position at that moment, I can't fully blame him.

It was honestly one of my favorite parts of the show where I couldn't call either side fully in the wrong or the right. It's like with Doctor Who or Torchwood where the protagonists often have to make tough decisions and neither one is a very happy one.

lol man how many different movies are/can you fit into this story :pinkiehappy:

Another story down and this one did not disappoint! This one even introduced a game-changer that I'm excited too see explored (I was also surprised that you brought Flash in and made him useful to the plot!).

All in all, a great sequel, and I can't wait to read the next one!

love this story

keep the stories going

“Now that the northern lights are back, I don't think we'll be seeing anymore angry spirits anytime too soon.” Rarity said while she brushed her messy mane, she was sitting in the driver's seat with Korra while Mako rode behind his girlfriend.

I think Rarity was suppost to say Southern Lights.

Fluttershy crossed her hooves in disapproval, “That's just wrong.”

Every time Fluttershy disapproves someting, a bunny cry's.


Also do you write plays in your down time? I swear each Time I read during a one of the 'song' moments It feels like I'm reading Highschool play.

:moustache:

And so the next chapter in the story begins...

Oh god, that running gag with the flowerpot! Hilarious!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8105991 not that bad, really. But things do get a bit dark.

Really? A fucking frozen reference.:flutterrage:

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I wrote this back in 2013. Frozen was still a huge thing at the time, and I was struck hard with the fever just like everyone else and I couldn't help myself.... Forgive me, I was young.

Are you going to make vatoo destroy her avatar spirit like he did in the series.

If Korra and the mane six now share the avatar spirit(which is Raava the spirit of light and peace) does that mean that if anyone of them die then are reborn like the avatar.

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Let’s just say, a new legacy is born. :raritywink:

I love that you use Bible verses in each chapter, it’s very sweet

“The president gave me a direct order." Mako stated, "What was I supposed to do? Twilight back me up here.”

I'm pretty sure it's, "look, the president of the United Republic asked me a direct question."

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I feel like Discord is the good type of chaos, while Vaatu is more evil chaos.

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