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After countless hours of research, Aaron has done it. He has made a way into Equestria. Now he can meet his favorite pony of all time Twilight Sparkle. Nothing can stop him! Wait a second, who are you, ponies?
This is what happens when you take too long to get things done. You end up in the wrong show.
A Gen 4 brony lost in the Gen 5 world. What could happen?
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interesting story
You know, it's interesting to see one of these stories were the human actually willingly sends themself to Equestria. Most of the time they just kinda... stumble in? Either way interesting start.
Talk about bad timing, huh
This is just me being nitpicky, but in the title, it should be "You're", not "Your". Sorry, I'm a grammar nerd.
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Thank you. I over looked that.
Whoops wrong time!
great chapter
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Thanks guys
You're welcome
Spotted a few mistakes:
Should be medieval, not middle evil.
Should be Twilight Sparkle, in the singular.
Other then that, this is pretty solid so far. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for that. Some times the auto-correct misses a few.
Nice chapter!
great chapter
Wonderful!!
Wonder who Aaron will end up with, just sunny, or the others as well??
And I'd love to see you do a story with sprout from gen 5 as the main focus.
Aaron seems to act a bit like a stalker to me and not sure if I’m reading it right that he likes Twilight? If so… I’m glad Hitch is being the stallion Sunny needs for protection at least since he is sherif after all. Sprout what you up to?
Poor Pipp…
I do like the idea that Sunny is going to pretend to be Twilight, which I hope that lasts for a long time! Since that’s a neat concept to fool the human man thinking he is in G4 Equestria, which I speculate that maybe Sunny will get away with the truth about 1000 years had changed a lot since the world was very different a thousand years ago in our time, like even a hundred years ago, it was really different world of itself!
I’ll definitely track it to see how it goes. I do recommend base on the comments just don’t rush uploading the next chapter till you are sure there Isn’t any mistakes. Have fun!
Mother's bottom...
I think you meant “walks away” 🤔
Neat chapter seeing the human lose his mind about earth pony magic and the lie about Sunny lost memories which is a neat idea that fool him
which Twilight/Sunny is right she would rather make new ones which the man should had at least respect her decision… but he is a wild fan who wants to meet his idol which I forgot… what is his goal? To just thank her or something 
I kind of wonder if you’ll have Discord comic arc in this story since he lives under Canterlot and the comic arc for him is really good plus he might enjoy adding into the lies for chaos
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Drat. Thought I got them all this time.
And about Aaron. Its like when plankton threaten Mr crabs when he came out of the dollar.
Don't worry about Discord under Canterlot. I got a screwy idea in mind for him.
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Plankton? Ok, that’s funny. Can’t wait to see what Discord will be like if you do him btw have you read the G5 comics?
This isn't a good idea
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This is going to backfire sooo bad
Well this is going to be interesting
Welp, if any of them do turn out to be descended from Applejack, we know they didn't inherit her honesty.
Ergh, the "liar revealed" trope. And did they have to stoop to this level? Well, hope this passes quickly, and/or you do something interesting with it.
I guess no Sparky?
Oh, very interesting chapter here. Aaron seems to be pushing for adventure by reading books 📚 btw it seems like Canterlot somehow lost its mountain 🏔️ in the comics which was never explained so I wonder if you plan to leave the place like that since it was a reason why the M5 couldn’t find it till Izzy found the doors.
Awesome to see Misty and Opaline. Odd they could had waited for the M5 + Aaron to leave to take the Crystal House but I guess she was more worried what they’ll find in Canterlot which sounds like a much bigger deal of power for her. Though… I have wonder if Twilight is still around? Like I love how Discord was handled in the comics he was definitely better then old Luke Skywalker
Oh yea, Aaron is right there’s a very likely chance that a story might have a lead. But they might need to check other cities libraries to maybe get a better idea where to look?
Can’t wait for more. Does sound like Aaron might go on his own… unless Misty journeys with him?
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I am going to be honest with you. I forgot about Sparky and sir snipsalot. I think I can work Sparky into the story but the crab is going to be a different story.
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That’s alright, you could always do the story without him if you want. If you want to have him this would pretty much take place before Opaline decides to go after Sparky but this story probably needs an Alternate tag if you want to change things up a bit? Not sure if that is needed or not…
I wonder what Aaron’s reaction would be with Sparky
since I guess he didn’t see the episode of when Spike got his wings so I bet he would be shocked to see a baby dragon with wings.
So it looks like a little white is starting to spiral out of control. Hopefully Mist will at least be able to find her sandwich.
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didn't
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Thank you.
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Why not just......
Look for a map? We can figure out the direction there
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Good point however this will be discuss later in the story on why that won't work.
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I see it working
I know the layout of Equestria. If Maretime bay is East, then the direction to go is West.
Ponyville isn't a bad place to go for, because Canterlot will be in view.
Either on "ground" or on the mountain.
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Just add the mane 5 tag.
#Mane 5, #OC, #Misty, #Opaline
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Will the same feels as what the comic had when we first saw Canterlot be there?
Shock, sadness, devastation
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All will be explained later.
seriously Misty??🤨
I'm sorry, but it has to be done:
Btw that’s a nice idea about the reason why no pony was able to find Canterlot. Though I’m confused from the G5 comics why it’s like down in ground level to begin with… have you checked out the G5 comics?
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Kind of, but I have an idea of how to explain that once the chapter comes out.
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I might've misspoke of which direction Canterlot is. I struggle with West and East in correct order
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Let me correct myself
Take this.
https://images.app.goo.gl/2iNmqbLt755sFZor7
I believe Maretime Bay is East at where Fillydelphia or Baltimare is. And makes sense because those 2 places are at an ocean, which Maretime Bay is as well. And there is 1 tiny land mark that is very similiar on BOTH maps at EAST. So Maretime Bay being EAST, Canterlot is WEST, more of NorthWest.
West is the direction to go, If they stumble into Ponyville, then Canterlot should be in sight. Follow the right train track and there.
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You are on the right track, but you are missing the point. If the directions on a compass are the same, but the sun is moving in reverse, how is this possible if nothing happened to the sun?