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Boopy Doopy


My writing slowly improves, I believe. I hope to be an even better writer tomorrow. Feel free to join my Discord.

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Lake Cleaver wasn't expecting to find a portal to another world, one known as Equus, hidden in his closet. Neither were his friends, Tory Rhett and Roxanne Collins, for that matter. Nor were any of them expecting to be changed into horse shaped equines known to the locals as ponies. As far as they all knew, physics that completely destroyed everything anyone knew about how the universe operated weren't possible. And yet, the portal appeared.

And then it disappeared when they stepped through to the other side of the universe, leaving them stranded in a strange new world of horses.

Now the three of them are looking for a way back to Earth, and they won't be doing it alone. Manehattan's biggest Humans in Equestria club member, Sapphire Glow, is there to help them find a way back home. If they even can get back home. Somehow, none of them think it'll be as easy as stepping through a portal.

Updates whenever.
Cover art by Merisa.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 26 )

Not a bad start.
For me I like wean thay are stuck with no way back right away but in like 2 to 3 years which thay want to stay becus of love or time difference

At least one of these characters changed sexes, right?

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For the first time ever, no! Had to change it up! Can't do the same thing every time, can I?

At the moment I'm just popping in to say how it's so weird to see a story, both in the new uploads section, and in the updated section, and being side-by-side in both sections at the same time.

Will this story be ten (or eleven) chapters, or will you be going to subsequent Smashing Pumpkins albums for chapter names?

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There will be more Smashing Pumpkins chapters names after Gish is finished.

Oh boy
Someone call phoenix!
I feel like we need another TS-5 incident

“I studied under Princess Twilight Sparkle herself at her school for gifted unicorns!” she said. “I was even one of the top ponies in my class! Sure, I might have gotten into a little trouble with her a few times, but I’m still an expert! As good as they come!”

Huh
note: timeline is a few years into the future

Do pony criminals have the right to remain silent?

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We may soon find out!

Doesn't Lake have video evidence of the portal in his phone? Why didn't he bring it up? Did he forget about it?

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It wasn't described in the story cause I forgot but Lake's camera being aimed at the portal doesn't do much good in a world of magic if he didn't point the camera at himself first, while he was a human. It can still be written up as "they teleported inside" in this case, unless he pointed the camera at himself beforehand or the portal was still there.

Why do I feel like Roxanne is actually a love bug?

Don't tell me the portal opened in Canada.

well, at least they know it’s Earth for sure.

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what if it's Russia?

Is the island that they're talking about that's apart of Norway and away from mainland Europe, Svalbard?

Hmmm, wondering why no-one thought to ask Lilac for an old (bath)robe/gown to see what happens once earthside ...

Why do I have the feeling they didn't mark the portal point (waypoint) ??

Hello Boopy Doopy, I just wanted to say that so far this is a great and interresting story. i did notice a minor thing though. When describing the island you wrote The "snow reflected off the clouds, brightening the scene with a grayish, almost faint orange glow."
I cant help but fel that snow is supposed to be sun. If not feel free to ignore me. Just want wish you a happy day and i hope you continue to write.

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Yes, that is meant to be the snow reflecting off the clouds.

We're finally to Siamese Dream.

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Will we get to Mellon Collie and the Infinite Sadness? Adore? Machina/The Machines of God? Who knows!

Called it !!

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