A little pegasus filly shows up in Ponyville. Who is she? Other than the cutest little thing who's ever existed, of course!
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Awww too cute can't wait 4 more thank u
This is adorable! I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. āļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļø
A light story. Might get interesting. The others tend to have more complicated and difficult issues. Hope we won't see any red, "drama" or "sad" tags.
Hm...thousand year days? Could this be the same continuity as beyond me? Wonder if she'll meet Asher, then...
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You know,Mind Over Matterexists.Iāve struggled with acid reflux and Barrettās esophagus for years, so Iām totally sympathetic to this kid.
That was cute great job šššššš
I really like the idea you used to make this, and how is written as well. I hope it continues, and that we get more context about Emily.
:)
It seems the parents' names are different from last chapter, was that on purpose?
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That's just me being dumb and bad at editing
Cool, another story by Boopy,
You're writing is getting better and better. I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going to take us with this one.
Monk
"I could kiss this guy right now, but I should probably not, I doubt these guys are Italian." -Dadecious
[ visible disgust ]
Dude is making a lot of incorrect assumptions. When the truth outs, itās gonna clobber him.
Misunderstanding go wrr
āKansas. Itās the worst state except for all the other states! And I only donāt like it because itās boring as heck.ā
Iām out
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lmao
I'm sure it has it's charms
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I do wonder what her actual story is though, at this point even we don't know if some of his assumptions are correct.
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I actually donāt have a particular fondness for Kansas. My source of anger was the disrespect towards the country as a whole. Especially coming from a fellow āAmericanā.
So Kansas, the state, not the band. Does it smell like cow farts?
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Monk
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Country is a dumpster fire on the verge of collapse.
The country has never been worse off in its history. Socially, economically, and politically.
And thats all I'll say or respond about that. This isn't a politics thread.
Monk
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Keep in mind that it's the characters, a little girls opinion (possibly one who's had some bad experiences), not necessarily the authors.
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I agree with all of that. You can still love your country and criticize it too. And a lack of love for country is whatās making all these problems so much worse.
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But isnāt this story a self insert?
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? I don't know?
Some of these are, explicitly, but the author of this particular one has made no such statement.
From Kansas, and she didn't land in Oz? The portal must have shifted.
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As someone who drives about 20k miles a year for vacation, Kansas is awful, but only because it's boring as heck and there's nothing to do and the towns smell like cow farts and manure. But driving through Missouri and Colorado and Indiana sucks worse because there is an unreasonable amount of road work an road damage and I hate it with my entire being, whereas Kansas actively keeps it's roads maintained. It's "the worst state except all the other ones", and future chapters are going to have her say that she travels around the country to see her friends a lot. I already have the next three chapters completely written and it's highlighted. It's not any sort of political statement.
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No one thought that it was.
Good story BTW
Monk
"Anon had never known a bat pony to shy away from carnage. They were cuter than kittens, and much more bloodthirsty." -HeideKnight
I can already tell that this is gonna be a great fic.
The three at the same time XD
She said she was 12? I don't know whether I should be impressed at a high school kid who could take care of herself like that or aghast that her parents forced her out of the house like that.
Yea another ch thank u
This is adorable and I love it. Looking forward to more. :)
*Bright's notes glow teal for a moment*
There. Let's see what he makes of seeing Emily and Kansas in his own writing.
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You should see Orlando, FL. The roadwork literally never ends, and sometimes, the roads being worked on didn't have anything wrong with them to begin with. When they finish screwing around with one part of the road, they decide to tear out another area that they literally just freggin' paved a few weeks prior, then they repave it again and find some other part of the road to "fix".
The city expanded into the small town I lived in, bringing with it the roadwork and taxes associated. I don't live there anymore.
I enjoyed the concept but the story is going nowhere very slowly. Dropping out.
Good luck.
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I can only say there is a larger picture and set ending for Emily's journey, but thank you for giving it a try anyway.
Medidical stuff, Pony transformation, Sexual abuse claim, and the protaganist trying to debunk such claim.
Is that you, greeny?
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bruh it hasn't even reached 10k words yet
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Exactly.
Might be a typo?
Caught few grammar mistakes/typos.
well i think it is a awesome story so far can't wait 4 more thank u
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Seems to be a popular template for foal-transformation stories. This is the fourth or fifth one I've seen, and the foal-transformation bit is not a common prompt.
It keeps getting me how Bright Side turned Emily to Ama Lee. Ema Lee would make more sense.
It is so funny to see others react to her reactions to being a pony. They think the way she is action is from abase, but really it is just being happy to be turned pony.
Caught a few time Bright Side referred to Emily as Emily vice Ama Lee
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Emily is proper when he's not thinking about her, but when he's speaking or actively thinking, then it's Ama Lee
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My confusion then and apologies. I had read those sections as if Bright Side was thinking them.
nice chapter, i just don't understand why would physical disfunktion's carry over to a basically new body
Im surprised bright side didn't notice her phrasing when she said