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Knight of Crows

"Why would I need the army when I can literally throw the entire armory at you?" Anyone with powers like Noctis or Archer and Gilgamesh.


Humanity has essentially destroyed itself and I was the lucky one who didn't really change at all, negatively anyway. Everyone was transformed to have animal features and even became feral, animalistic in nature and intelligence. Hopefully the new world won't be so bad, WHEN it comes about anyway.

Clop side story is out https://www.fimfiction.net/story/420103/can-we-not-mature-chapters

Also decided to gender bend some characters.

First few chapters are pretty fast paced, will fix this eventually.

I may use content from other sources hence the crossover tag, I hope that won't be a problem, I also hope you get any references I make.

Chapters (28)
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What are these other sources?

This story feel rush to the point of light speed.

Starlight Nova: What are these other sources?

Sources will likely be mentioned in the chapters, I already mentioned Orphen, Dark souls, and Seven Deadly Sins.

Still figuring this site out, been on it since before season 4 and only recently made an account. I know this story feels rushed, but I would like to think of it as seeing how badly I will mess this up (unintentionally of course) or how well I'll do.

Thank you, let's hope I don't mess this up

just found the quote button

This is actually pretty cool. I look forward to the nexts chapters.

Slow the fuck down man you’re approaching light speed

I'll probably be going back and making alterations to the first few chapters once I get myself situated.

A wise man once said: "May the darkness grant you peace.", this fits the situation perfectly.

i know who you're talking about, and I'm guessing you like it so far despite it being fast paced to mine and so far everyone else's standards?

This is a great story actually. I track great stories. Good work.

You're probably welcome. (Get the joke?)

sounds familiar, what's it from?

The joke is: saying you're welcome is assuming that they're welcome. Saying
You're probably welcome removes any risks associated with assuming. As the saying goes'
To assume makes an ass of u and me. Get it?

Good. I tend to be far to literal when I don't need to be. If you haven't named the sword, call it Lunar Blaze. A testament to is infinite debt to Celly & Luna.

I think I'll do that, or I might name another sword similar to dawnfang and duskfang from Oblivion. The hollow sword is meant to allow darkness from inside the blade to suit the user's needs, they could be used to change the weapon in any number of ways such as turning it into a horse cleaver, a blunt weapon, maybe change the guard, or turn it into a twinblade. The sword is obviously not viable unless the darkness is both protecting it and changing it. It's sacrificing durability for versatility.

If the name won't work, perhaps he recives a halberd (or another weapon) that is enchanted with dark magic.

Looking forward to more! Liked and followed.

Here's an idea: Perhaps he could be able to see the darkness within people, in the form of their nightmare forms beside them while he's using void magic. Basically he would see Nightmare Moon standing beside Luna, mimicking her movements, while Daybreaker (Or Solar Flare or Nightmare Star) would be standing next to Celestia, also mimicking her movements. (You can fill in the gaps with the others.)

Already had something like that planned, and more.

Hey, that was pretty cool. Look forward to the rest of the story.

Who do you think I should give Tenseiga to?

Uh.... For me, I'd think maybe Cellestia or Luna, as if they turn into their Nightmare forms, the sword changes accordingly. Also, giving the sword to them would mean they could study it a bit, and use the knowledge (Like iron is stronger than gold) To make better weapons/armor. So, I think the good choice would be either Celestia or Luna.

how does the sword change? it heals people by cutting them, if you mean the purpose then i can see the change, but otherwise i can't

Basically, their Nightmare forms' 'extra' dark energy corrupts the sword as well. If it doesn't kill them, it would cause the healing to feel a lot worse. For an example, A papercut would fell like that part exploding, and being glued back together using acidic super-glue. (Probably not that bad) So, the sword could could easily be used for torture (Only by the wielder being in their Nightmare form) or as a way to weaken the enemy, making it far harder to aim, due to the disorienting amount of pain making your vision swim.

It's hilarious when the Mane 6 thinks she can kick every ones ass, regardless of the fact he decked a dozen guards and three of their friends. (The elements of harmony are actually just really powerful weapons that are displayed to be artifacts used to fight evil.)

i wanted to try and bring in the same incompetence they had from the show, also keep in mihd Griever did all this without any weapons and very little magic which just adds to their fuck ups. i love how no one's said anything about DT almost being erased from existence over an insult

edit: it was 4 of her friends as pinkie got hit by a ragdolled rarity

yeah, without the elements they're basically cannon fodder.

Yeah, I know right. They are total ass at any kind of combat.

which is actually sad when you have the impossible to predict one, the black belt, the ascended one (i would say goddess, but we both know that is bullshit), the heavy lifter, and the animal friend, rarity is true cannon fodder

What's sad is that the elements of harmony isn't harmony. Six female ponies use artifacts of bright colors representing positive traits that are being treated as weapons. Harmony my ass.

that and harmony is supposed to be balance, the inbetween of order and chaos, where are the opposites, where are the true elements/ embodiments of light and dark, order and chaos, good and evil, then the hollow, the being lacking light and dark?

chaos is change, disorder

order is consistency, obedience


The bullshit is too consistent to be writers' ignorence. Think about it. If something is completely positive, something's wrong. There has to be something missing. Something a certain teacher may have hidden.

Next chapter is abou 1/3 of the way through, and may go back to the first 2 chapters to get them better paced.

We stayed like this until he heard movement from behind him.

Misty gets up "Ugh, my head. what is happening? Ryan?"

wouldn't that be funny if it turns out he don't need Sunbutt the Sun Tyrant's help after all?

like "Oh my gosh, Misty, you remember stuff."

other than my hatred of the sun tyrant (i actually can stand Daybreaker) we seem to actually have the same headcanon. most forget that Nightmare Moon was actually born not only of Luna's jealousy and sorrow but of her fervent wish for a friend. more specifically a friend who enjoys the night sky. sadly, Luna never realized that ponies slept at night not as a sign of disrespect but as a sign of trust. they were able to sleep through the night cause they trusted Luna and her mighty Lunar Guard to protect them from the nocturnal monsters Discord unleashed on Equestria.

everyone seems to forget one important factor. no matter their skills and/or martial arts training, these girls are not soldiers. they were never prepared/trained for this kind of thing. i actually use them as an example of how even the most insignificant of beings can make a difference. you have a baker :pinkiesmile:, a dressmaker :raritystarry:, a farmer :applejackunsure:, a weathermare :rainbowhuh:, a veterinarian :fluttershysad:, and a glorified librarian :twilightoops:. noone could expect anything from them yet when the chips were down and all the best the world could offer were proven insufficient these random strangers (not counting Pinkie and her knowledge of everypony) stepped up to the plate with little hesitation knowing they would die. it is as Saitama once said "If all the heroes run and hide, who will stay and fight?"

Yee, Flutters need to live in a more populated are and stop hiding from others before casting judgment. Or step up to the plate and show how it should be done.

Yes I did, I will not say from where but, " Shut p and take my Like'n'Fav".

there were 3 choices, and only 1 shall be used

giant dad 1

POK. 0

elemancy. 0

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