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Knight of Crows

Luck? I don't need it, I just need everyone else's to plummet while I'm around.


Humanity has essentially destroyed itself and I was the lucky one who didn't really change at all, negatively anyway. Everyone was transformed to have animal features and even became feral, animalistic in nature and intelligence. Hopefully the new world won't be so bad, WHEN it comes about anyway.

Clop side story is out https://www.fimfiction.net/story/420103/can-we-not-mature-chapters

Also decided to gender bend some characters.

First few chapters are pretty fast paced, will fix this eventually.

I may use content from other sources hence the crossover tag, I hope that won't be a problem, I also hope you get any references I make.

Story being rewritten, it's your choice if you read the original. Rewrite chapters will be published on this story though.

Featured... I don't know how to respond given the timing of this...

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What are these other sources?

This story feel rush to the point of light speed.

Starlight Nova: What are these other sources?

Sources will likely be mentioned in the chapters, I already mentioned Orphen, Dark souls, and Seven Deadly Sins.

Still figuring this site out, been on it since before season 4 and only recently made an account. I know this story feels rushed, but I would like to think of it as seeing how badly I will mess this up (unintentionally of course) or how well I'll do.

Thank you, let's hope I don't mess this up

just found the quote button

Slow the fuck down man you’re approaching light speed

I'll probably be going back and making alterations to the first few chapters once I get myself situated.

A wise man once said: "May the darkness grant you peace.", this fits the situation perfectly.

i know who you're talking about, and I'm guessing you like it so far despite it being fast paced to mine and so far everyone else's standards?

sounds familiar, what's it from?

I think I'll do that, or I might name another sword similar to dawnfang and duskfang from Oblivion. The hollow sword is meant to allow darkness from inside the blade to suit the user's needs, they could be used to change the weapon in any number of ways such as turning it into a horse cleaver, a blunt weapon, maybe change the guard, or turn it into a twinblade. The sword is obviously not viable unless the darkness is both protecting it and changing it. It's sacrificing durability for versatility.

Looking forward to more! Liked and followed.

Already had something like that planned, and more.

Who do you think I should give Tenseiga to?

how does the sword change? it heals people by cutting them, if you mean the purpose then i can see the change, but otherwise i can't

i wanted to try and bring in the same incompetence they had from the show, also keep in mihd Griever did all this without any weapons and very little magic which just adds to their fuck ups. i love how no one's said anything about DT almost being erased from existence over an insult

edit: it was 4 of her friends as pinkie got hit by a ragdolled rarity

which is actually sad when you have the impossible to predict one, the black belt, the ascended one (i would say goddess, but we both know that is bullshit), the heavy lifter, and the animal friend, rarity is true cannon fodder

that and harmony is supposed to be balance, the inbetween of order and chaos, where are the opposites, where are the true elements/ embodiments of light and dark, order and chaos, good and evil, then the hollow, the being lacking light and dark?

chaos is change, disorder

order is consistency, obedience


Next chapter is abou 1/3 of the way through, and may go back to the first 2 chapters to get them better paced.

We stayed like this until he heard movement from behind him.

Misty gets up "Ugh, my head. what is happening? Ryan?"

wouldn't that be funny if it turns out he don't need Sunbutt the Sun Tyrant's help after all?

like "Oh my gosh, Misty, you remember stuff."

other than my hatred of the sun tyrant (i actually can stand Daybreaker) we seem to actually have the same headcanon. most forget that Nightmare Moon was actually born not only of Luna's jealousy and sorrow but of her fervent wish for a friend. more specifically a friend who enjoys the night sky. sadly, Luna never realized that ponies slept at night not as a sign of disrespect but as a sign of trust. they were able to sleep through the night cause they trusted Luna and her mighty Lunar Guard to protect them from the nocturnal monsters Discord unleashed on Equestria.

everyone seems to forget one important factor. no matter their skills and/or martial arts training, these girls are not soldiers. they were never prepared/trained for this kind of thing. i actually use them as an example of how even the most insignificant of beings can make a difference. you have a baker :pinkiesmile:, a dressmaker :raritystarry:, a farmer :applejackunsure:, a weathermare :rainbowhuh:, a veterinarian :fluttershysad:, and a glorified librarian :twilightoops:. noone could expect anything from them yet when the chips were down and all the best the world could offer were proven insufficient these random strangers (not counting Pinkie and her knowledge of everypony) stepped up to the plate with little hesitation knowing they would die. it is as Saitama once said "If all the heroes run and hide, who will stay and fight?"

Yee, Flutters need to live in a more populated are and stop hiding from others before casting judgment. Or step up to the plate and show how it should be done.

Yes I did, I will not say from where but, " Shut p and take my Like'n'Fav".

there were 3 choices, and only 1 shall be used

giant dad 1

POK. 0

elemancy. 0

3 votes giant dad

the undying legend is leading

honestly expected more votes in general

Of course giant dad will be probably the majority it’s because if you mess with his boy he will ether smash you with his giant fist or throw a chunk of the earth at you

giving it 2 more days before calling winner

giant dad 4: welcome to dark souls, I will be your tutorial

POK 0: a prince will always be beneath the king

elemancy 0: I don't need a weapon, i am the weapon

Gala won't happen until 1 or 2 chapters after the next one

fuck that, hit Blueballs with Chastiefol, the metaphorical swiss army knife from The Seven Deadly Sins wielded by King.

take a moment to imagine that though.

Greiver: "Pick a form, any form!"

Blueballs: "Why would you ask such a ridiculous question?"

Greiver: "Colossal sunflower it is!"

Chastiefol: sprouts from the ground and charges laser.

Blueballs: "I'm screwed aren't I?"

Greiver (with a maniacal grin): "YEP!"

Chastiefol: makes Blueballs an ashy boi.

but in all seriousness, i'll have to go with the majority vote. If it has all the votes, then it must be good.

Also, Where's my Excalibur Umbra? One more thing, any plans on making the legendary holy sword? and if so, what rendition? I mean, we have the one from SAO, the shards from Highschool DxD, and various other sources

chastiefol with losvayne would be terrifying, but I was originally planning to use losvayne with Armiger, and as for Excalibur, why settle for 1 (I'll likely make the umbra and Fate UBW versions and as a joke Soul Eater)

I can almost hear Alucard laughing

As for Giant dad, welcome to Dark Souls, where all your hopes and dreams die less than you do

My spelling hasn’t been the best recently

I am usually a supporter to the theory that Blueblood is only a act he uses to defends himself and his family from the nobles and people that would abuse his trust. But in this case, he has to be removed before he does something that puts the Equestrain nation in danger.

Blueblood, we have both said a lot of things you are going to regret.


The elements did a complete one-eighty and it was hilarious.

yeah, i could have done that part better, then again, they have done near if not complete 180s in the show so it's not too OOC

next chapter in production, gala/ murder won't happen until the chapter after this

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