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- Alexander

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Welcome to Struggling Authors. Here, if you feel as though your stories are not being recognized for all that they are, if you want to receive constructive criticism and input, if you are an editor and proofreader and are looking for things to preview, or if you just want to hang around and read some pretty great stuff, then join us here at Struggling Authors. Everyone and everything is welcome here.

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I hope you enjoy the stay.
- Alexander


Set after Wonderbolts Academy but before Magical Mystery Cure. Rainbow Dash still remembers the Mare Do Well incident that taught her an important lesson: Real heroes don't brag. However, her sense of loyalty compels her to be the hero for ponies in need again, and with a trip to Cloudsdale just around the corner for her, Rainbow sees an opportunity for a fresh start in heroics as the very symbol of heroism who had taught her grace and humility. She couldn't have picked a better time, however, as a new enemy arrives in Cloudsdale that will pose a threat bigger then she could have imagined!

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Hi everybody. I'm MLPEG Lover and I have a story that could use all the feedback it can get. MLP - Equestria Girls: The Magic of Friendship

Greetings, I am Fireflight Startrottor and writer of Fallout Equestria: Blood of The Hero and I am a new writer and it shows in my train wreck of a story. I am here to see what people have to say about my story, but due to how mixed it is, I don’t know what folder to put it in, so if anyone can tell me, that will be greatly appreciated, anyways, once again, my name is Fireflight Startrottor and it is a pleasure to be here

Fireflight Startrottor :heart:

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Hey there!

The Ghost of Coltistrano is a fun, cape and cowl adventure diving into themes of heroism in a conflict spanning three entries, including Restless Peace and Phantom Eulogy. If you've been looking for something to scratch your pulp hero itch, this is the place.

Stop by and enjoy!

TThe Ghost of Coltistrano
There are stories children are told of a figure in black, emerging from the darkness to strike at those who threaten the goodness of the world. This creature is the Ghost, but for young Silver Spade, it's his last hope for vengeance beyond the grave.
EthanClark · 90k words  ·  42  2 · 2.3k views

I'm here because I was told I would be able to hang around and read some pretty great stuff

Is promoting allowed in the threads?

Hey everyone I am Aether Spark and I have a great story based on the hit game Dark Deception.

Dark Deception: Friendship is magic

I'm in need of more views and comments, the story may seem dead but it is actually on Hiatus until Dark Deception releases it's 5th chapter.

Till then, here's the link, tell me what you think down in the comments.

So, I'm writing my first Chrysalis story, and I can't seem to get beyond 500 words or so for my first chapter, as I don't want to publish two chapters at once.

It's about the cast being a literal cast of characters, but C is tired of Changelings being given the short end of the stick, so she and her family are trying to escape the embodiment of Hasbro and bring along as many creatures as possible.

Hey, so I have this next gen fic that I started and am working on in my free time, so far I've gotten a couple likes and a couple comments on, like, one chapter that say that it's going good so far without any real insight on what was good about it and things that I could improve. I'm looking for constructive criticism, and especially on more than one chapter if that's alright. Any advice and insight would be much appreciated :D —Frosted Sketch( AKA Sketchy, AKA The Hopes'nDreamsVerse )

Here's the link if anyone is interested in assisting:

Have a new story if anyone's interested.

EBrønd Hesteånd
Fluttershy discovers a creepy horror within the Everfree, and promptly decides to adopt it...
Jinxed · 8.5k words  ·  54  1 · 1.5k views

I've just started publishing my first story since my return from a two year hiatus, I'd love for some feedback on it! :twilightsmile:

After being trapped underground from a calamity no one knows much about, most of the ponies have lost their hope and wanderlust. My story is about a mare who finds herself starstruck with the stories of the past and leaves the safety of her home and into the volatile underground and even worse surface hoping to find some answers. Though more than she knows is awaiting her in the metros.

TUnder Eternal Winds
Somber & sorrow follows a desperate scavenger as she discovers a terrible truth deep within a prewar bunker, plunging her into something larger than the metro could have imagined.
TheFictionalWriter · 4.9k words  ·  15  1 · 218 views

Hello! Ive got bunch of ideas for fics (most of which were inspred by other fics, comics, etc)
but I havnt written anything in years.... and anyting good in... probably over decade ago.
My main issue is I can think out specific scenes, but cant connect them together.

Quick question: should stories be added to both the applicable genre and the story length folders? They clearly overlap.

I am currently working on a Sunset Shimmer x Adagio Dazzle story, but I honestly am not very good at writing stories that aren’t x readers. Anyone interested in helping me and maybe providing feedback?

Hey guys just to let you know that my story ''A Pegasus Promise'' is finally complete. It's been one year in the making and I think my writing got better with time.

It would mean the world to me if you gave it a try and maybe a like (hopefully). :D

Here's the link:


Hello there. I'm new to the FimFiction community and I would like to get some feedback on my stories, mainly on this one, which I want to expand into more chapters.

Finally, a group that gets me:fluttershyouch:

Hello I just posted a story here a few seconds ago. I'd like to get some feedback on it if thats possible.

Please can I get some feedback on my first story, btw I know about the capitalisation I keep forgetting and am writing on my phone keyboard.

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