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- Alexander
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Welcome to Struggling Authors. Here, if you feel as though your stories are not being recognized for all that they are, if you want to receive constructive criticism and input, if you are an editor and proofreader and are looking for things to preview, or if you just want to hang around and read some pretty great stuff, then join us here at Struggling Authors. Everyone and everything is welcome here.
Regarding the forum and posting threads, tread softly on that. I'm fine with threads but take it easy on posting new threads so that the forum doesn't flood. I'll monitor the forum and delete threads that aren't getting any attention. Other than that, I don't have any problems.
I hope you enjoy the stay.
- Alexander
Mare Do Well: As The Sky Falls by ShadeJak
[Adventure]
Set after Wonderbolts Academy but before Magical Mystery Cure. Rainbow Dash still remembers the Mare Do Well incident that taught her an important lesson: Real heroes don't brag. However, her sense of loyalty compels her to be the hero for ponies in need again, and with a trip to Cloudsdale just around the corner for her, Rainbow sees an opportunity for a fresh start in heroics as the very symbol of heroism who had taught her grace and humility. She couldn't have picked a better time, however, as a new enemy arrives in Cloudsdale that will pose a threat bigger then she could have imagined!
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Hello, everypony!
Chapter 2, after some delay, is out at last! Check it out :3
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Comedy
- Mystery
My Little Pony-themed series, set in the distant future, centered around an earth pony (corn) named Brainchild as she slowly forms a group of like-minded friends to spread joy in a near-impossible scenario.AUTHOR STATUS: STRUGGLING
Good any given time of day, civilians. I'd like to bring a story to your attention that is appealing to fans of science fiction. Science fiction, as I've come to understand, was quite popular in year two thousand and twenty-five.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/577877/1/8113-the-crypt-of-chevalization/episode-134655
Feedback would be appreciated. Gratitude expression.
Hello New Friends!
Now, since you can see my username, I won't bother with that!
Anyways, I'm new round these parts, and well, I love reading Fanfictions! (Who doesn't?)
Although I am a fairly new author, I got some pretty interesting ideas (To me at least) I just don't know how to write, and or I need courage too, however, this has gone on long enough!
Hope we can be best of friends here,
PEACE!
I just joined the group and yes, I'm a struggling author. Go check out my stories and you'll see what I mean.
Hello everyone!
I have been planning an MLP AU fix-fic idea focusing on Lauren Faust's own ponysona, the Fausticorn, and I'm looking for fellow fanfic writers/readers willing to help me develop and expand my current ideas and give me their feedback on my fanfic plans. (For those of you asking why I'm not starting the fic yet, I already have several works ongoing, and I can't afford to start a brand new one this soon). If interested, please contact.
Is anyone doing anything about the bots? Anyone?
Hey y'all! I'm here bc I keep asking my friends to read my stories, but they never do ðŸ˜. If you want to read, like, or comment, I'd appreciate it a lot!
I put a lot of time and effort into making my stories engaging and original! I hope you like them if you check them out!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/565268/one-horse-town-a-my-little-pony-story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/568045/dark-horse-a-my-little-pony-story
Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!
- MLP: FiM
- Slice of Life
- Thriller
- Tragedy
Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!Thank you for reading friends!
Hi everybody. I'm MLPEG Lover and I have a story that could use all the feedback it can get. MLP - Equestria Girls: The Magic of Friendship
Greetings, I am Fireflight Startrottor and writer of Fallout Equestria: Blood of The Hero and I am a new writer and it shows in my train wreck of a story. I am here to see what people have to say about my story, but due to how mixed it is, I don’t know what folder to put it in, so if anyone can tell me, that will be greatly appreciated, anyways, once again, my name is Fireflight Startrottor and it is a pleasure to be here
Fireflight Startrottor
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548598/fallout-equestria-blood-of-the-hero
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Hey there!
The Ghost of Coltistrano is a fun, cape and cowl adventure diving into themes of heroism in a conflict spanning three entries, including Restless Peace and Phantom Eulogy. If you've been looking for something to scratch your pulp hero itch, this is the place.
Stop by and enjoy!
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Adventure
- Thriller
There are stories children are told of a figure in black, emerging from the darkness to strike at those who threaten the goodness of the world. This creature is the Ghost, but for young Silver Spade, it's his last hope for vengeance beyond the grave.I'm here because I was told I would be able to hang around and read some pretty great stuff
Is promoting allowed in the threads?
Hey everyone I am Aether Spark and I have a great story based on the hit game Dark Deception.
Dark Deception: Friendship is magic
I'm in need of more views and comments, the story may seem dead but it is actually on Hiatus until Dark Deception releases it's 5th chapter.
Till then, here's the link, tell me what you think down in the comments.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/503089/dark-deception-friendship-is-magic
So, I'm writing my first Chrysalis story, and I can't seem to get beyond 500 words or so for my first chapter, as I don't want to publish two chapters at once.
It's about the cast being a literal cast of characters, but C is tired of Changelings being given the short end of the stick, so she and her family are trying to escape the embodiment of Hasbro and bring along as many creatures as possible.
Hey, so I have this next gen fic that I started and am working on in my free time, so far I've gotten a couple likes and a couple comments on, like, one chapter that say that it's going good so far without any real insight on what was good about it and things that I could improve. I'm looking for constructive criticism, and especially on more than one chapter if that's alright. Any advice and insight would be much appreciated :D —Frosted Sketch( AKA Sketchy, AKA The Hopes'nDreamsVerse )
Here's the link if anyone is interested in assisting: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/512452/hopes-n-dreamsverse-a-better-beginnings
Hello! So I wrote a story (Go figure) and published it, and not a lot of people liked it (Literally, not the website feature). So I need help to find out what I did wrong, because the most I've gotten is 4 dislikes, and that ain't telling me that much. Any criticism, even overtly negative, is appreciated. It's my first big story and I just need an answer why so many found it so bad.
Have a new story if anyone's interested.
- MLP: FiM
- Horror
- Mystery
- Slice of Life
Fluttershy discovers a creepy horror within the Everfree, and promptly decides to adopt it...I've just started publishing my first story since my return from a two year hiatus, I'd love for some feedback on it!
After being trapped underground from a calamity no one knows much about, most of the ponies have lost their hope and wanderlust. My story is about a mare who finds herself starstruck with the stories of the past and leaves the safety of her home and into the volatile underground and even worse surface hoping to find some answers. Though more than she knows is awaiting her in the metros.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
- Drama
Somber & sorrow follows a desperate scavenger as she discovers a terrible truth deep within a prewar bunker, plunging her into something larger than the metro could have imagined.