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Waterwindearthfire


Writing for fun and to sometime get lost in my own world building

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Aug
15th
2020

A Pegasus Promise Update · 3:23pm August 15th

Okay everyone,

It's been a while but chapter 4 is out and chapter 4.5 is also going to be published later on today.

Next step is going to chapter 5, 5.5_A and 5.5_B

This is the biggest challenge my editor and I will face. But don't worry, We will deliver.

I can't tell how happy I am for chapter 4 to be out. It's the pillar of ''A Pegasus Promise''. I hope you will like it.

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Thanks for favoriting All the Angels, deuces!

Thanks for the fav!

Thank you for having added Welcome Home Soldier to your favorites. I'm really grateful for that, hope you continue to enjoy it sugarcube. :ajsmug: :eeyup:

Thanks for the comment on my story. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Hi,

First, I just want to say thanks for taking time to write me a message.

Second, your story was excellent. I really enjoyed the whole feeling, the tone of the story and the sadness i experienced while reading it.

Other than the story itself, there was a part that struck me hard while being of little importance to the whole story. That part that really sold it for me (and lead your story to my fav section) was a simple dialogue and I quote: Her hoof moved gently across his scales as the fire reached further down the tree. β€œDo you want me to—” She gazed deep into him with those ancient, purple eyes of hers. β€œI’ll tell her you said hi.”

That little part about Rarity, right there, broke my heart and, as the saying goes, punch me in the feels :derpytongue2:

As i mentioned it, that part was not so important to the plot but, somehow, I sank in the abyss of nostalgia and almost got depressed just by this little phrase.

I never felt something like this before, never have I felt so hurt by words.

I will conclude by saying that it takes a great author to make readers feel that way. You're a great author my friend.

Sincerely, waterwindearthfire.

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