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Waterwindearthfire


Writing for fun and to sometime get lost in my own world building

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Hi,

First, I just want to say thanks for taking time to write me a message.

Second, your story was excellent. I really enjoyed the whole feeling, the tone of the story and the sadness i experienced while reading it.

Other than the story itself, there was a part that struck me hard while being of little importance to the whole story. That part that really sold it for me (and lead your story to my fav section) was a simple dialogue and I quote: Her hoof moved gently across his scales as the fire reached further down the tree. “Do you want me to—” She gazed deep into him with those ancient, purple eyes of hers. “I’ll tell her you said hi.”

That little part about Rarity, right there, broke my heart and, as the saying goes, punch me in the feels :derpytongue2:

As i mentioned it, that part was not so important to the plot but, somehow, I sank in the abyss of nostalgia and almost got depressed just by this little phrase.

I never felt something like this before, never have I felt so hurt by words.

I will conclude by saying that it takes a great author to make readers feel that way. You're a great author my friend.

Sincerely, waterwindearthfire.

You are a beautiful person. Thank you for reading and favoriting my story. I'm glad you liked it.

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