Do you think your story is good, but needs more ratings?  Don't know why you are disliked to hell?  Can't find any more polite ways to self-promote your story? You're in the right spot.

Welcome to Authors Helping Authors

We have a folder for your stories.  But this isn't just your typical place the story in the folder and hope for the best.  This is Author Helping Authors, this isn't just self-promotion, its self-promotion with a purpose, for this group has two Golden Rules.

You review, you can promote.

If you are reviewed, it is recommended you review the other author's story.

Members that review the stories in this group will get to ask the people they've reviewed to review their own stories (if they have any) and those people are obligated to review them.  That way everybody has a higher chance of getting more readers, ratings if the reviewer likes their fic, or at least an opinion of how people think of one's fic.

Congratulations to Prolet and his story A Hole in the Sky, for wining the Five-Hundred Member Fic Contest! Go give it some love!

Reviewing Rules

This is how it works. Author A and B are both members of this group, and know by checking the member list that either author is a member, with their stories submitted into their folders. Author A reviews B's story. A fills out this form:

This review is brought to you on behalf of the group: Authors Helping Authors

Name of Story: Eg. Inky Jay's Awesome Adventure in Equestria

Grammar score out of 10 (1 is grammar that needs to be worked upon as basic principles such as capitalization and spelling is an issue, and 10 is impeccable):  Example. 8

Pros (list three pros)

Example: Its premise was a delightful spin on the Human in Equestria genre.

The OC is energetically developed.

It was hilarious.

Cons (list three cons)

Example: You have some issues with advanced grammar and capitalization

You tend to get wordy at times.

I thought Twilight was slightly out of character when she went crazy

Notes Section (how you can improve your fic, at the very least an elaboration of Pros and Cons section)

Example: I think you may want to try to give more reason for Twilight's descent into stress mode.  Possibly try to involve Inky Jay a little more.  I like how wordy you get, but sometimes a simple sentence shall suffice in certain situations, such as the romantic scene between Inky and Rainbow Dash.  As for the advanced grammar and capitalization, I would be happy to point them out in a private message and would recommend you to a proofreader for future reference.

Enjoy your review!  Please help me out by looking at my story/ this story: Example. Vren55 in Canterlot

And posts it in the COMMENTS SECTION, of Author B's story. Author A also likes and favs Author B's story because he wants to.

Now what does Author B of this group do?  Well, he is obligated to respond with a similar review.  If he's busy Author B tells Author A's that he is busy and then later reads Author A's story and fills out the form again.  Because he find's Author A's story interesting, Author B likes and fav's the story.

In the end both struggling authors authors gave each other likes/favs and reviews.  At the most Mr. Struggling Author, you'd get to have one more person read your story, that's ONE MORE VIEW!!! Possibly ONE MORE FAVORITE or ONE MORE LIKE!!!  And if your story doesn't get another favorite or like, at least you'd know what is wrong with it and you'd get to see a possibly better example of a good story.  That my friends, is the purpose of this group and if you agree to all these conditions, to review when you've been reviewed, JOIN!.

Regulations and Punishments

We do not tolerate bashing in this group.  We're trying to help each other.  If there is any problem about a review in this group from another group-member, send a PM to me or Inky with a link and I will caution that member.  If he or she does not after 3 times, clean up his or her act, he or she will be banned.

Additionally, you are OBLIGATED to reply to reviews and give counter-reviews!  I don't know if I can enforce this rule, but if I catch you I will begin to pester you.  If you are busy, reply comment and at least let the reviewer know you're busy.  Think about all the authors who've taken precious time to review you, but got absolutely nothing out of it.

Also, if any 'story help' or please give me a review threads are posted, they must be about a specific aspect or portion of the story that the author is particularly concerned about!



Can someone please review vren55's adventure in Equestria?


Can someone look at vren55's Adventure in Equestria and specifically check the characterization within the story?  I'm not sure if this self-insert is done badly.

Any future 'story help' or 'please review my story' threads that are deemed too general will be deleted by the admins without prior warning!  

Finally, don't add stories you haven't written to the folders.  It's not respectful to the author who has written the story, neither is it fun for other seeking a counter-review and then reviewing those stories, then finding out that they aren't getting anything in return because the author hasn't joined the group and hence isn't bound to our rule system.  

Places you Should Visit and Things you Should Do After You've Joined

After you have joined, you should check out the Forum for the Introductions and SELF PROMOTIONS thread. Additionally, do immediately add your story to the folders.  As this is an in-group activity, we do not review any stories not within the folders until further notice.  Do try to ask people to join so that they can add their stories to the folder.

Have no idea what to do if you got a review or have no idea how to give one?  Read this: Founder's Advice: How to Give and Use Criticsm.

Who in Equestria founded this group and who runs it?  Meet your admins here, as they are interviewed by our co-founder Inky Jay.

If you happen to have not published your story yet, or only have it in the idea stage head over to School for New Writers!  They've got people to help you make your idea into a story (do make sure to return here though to promote your story).  And if you are still struggling, head over to Struggling Authors.

Additionally, if you want continued discussion on your fic that you can always check up on, head over to our sister group, Indie Authors Unite. There you can post a forum thread specifically about your fic for other people to talk about outside of a review.

And a sincere thank you to the awesome site admin Wanderer D featuring our group in his monthly group report!  He also has several excellent "How to" guides that are funny and extremely useful as they consult multiple experienced authors on this site.

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#284 · 6w, 1d ago · · ·

Hello, my name is LeeRoy I am a amateur writer and I m fairly new to this site, but I have been making stories for a long time and because of a deep depression, I never shared my stories. The new year happened and I worked up the courage to actually share, something. Found myself an editor -he is the best! But now I just want to improve, I would like criticism as I still have fears that I'm not good enough.

This place seems perfect as I will help those that help me if anyone reading this is interested in a story about a hero Here you go. Or you may PM me personally.

Thank You, LeeRoy

#283 · 8w, 5d ago · · ·

Hello. I'm not one to really go around and self-promote, but I am left with no choice but to do so. The reason is that I am trying to find some people to give me honest reviews and criticism as I feel that someone is intentionally trying to mess with the like to dislike bar. I would appreciate some feedback so I know what I am doing wrong and what can I do to correct for a future sequel to this story.

While it may seem I have already done much, there is a point where I went on a three hiatus and I always thought it would never see the light of day. I'm coming to the point where I feel as if I had gone off track after coming back to finish the story and would greatly appreciate some feedback than having to worry about a like to dislike ratio.

#282 · 10w, 2d ago · · ·

hey every pony can any pony help me with proofreading my story plz the administrator said it had alot of problems so just punctuation and capitalization

#281 · 16w, 6d ago · · ·

Hi guys,

Does anyone have any free time to become a pre-reader for my fic, just looking for someone to check the grammar and general way the story reads?

Any help is welcome.


Professor Vector

#280 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·

How do I know if my story will reviewed?:rainbowhuh:

#279 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·

Hi there i am new here and yesterday i started to write my own MLP fiction. I need some feedback and suggestions. I don't know if it is worth to publish here or not. I am afraid to publish it and afraid to get hateful comments and my motivation is at 0. Here is the story:

I doubt that anyone will even look at it but it's worth a shot. Thank you in advance.

#278 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·

So, a few people have pointed out to me that I struggle with run-on sentences. I would be most grateful if someone could offer some helpful advice on it and I will make time to help anyone who helps me.

#277 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·

Hello I'm new here but that's not my name don't let grammar fool you.

I have an idea for a HiE that I've had for a long time I just couldn't find the homework assignment that sparked the idea until a few days ago and I need help with filling a few gaps and Proofreading and editing. So if anyone would help that would be greatly appreciated

#276 · 39w, 36m ago · · ·

Im very, very new to writing fiction I decided to start with the stereotypes and cliches and move on from there. I have a concern about my wordage, is it too report like? How is my dialogue? I almost feel guilty putting my work on here. So I will take any pointers possible, and I shall do my best to give what little I have back towards you. My story is this poor thing. I would prefer to fix my early errors than continue with them abundantly.

Feel free to contact me any way you feel most comfortable. I appreciate any wisdom you give to me.

Skype- Declipse('Murican)

Steam- If you know, want to play games, or find this a simpler way of communication.

Merry Part!

#275 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·

I have a question. I'm a minor, so I'm not comfortable reviewing clop. Can I refuse if someone reviewed my story and only has clop and mature fics, or should I leave the group?

#274 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·

Hi everypony my name is rainbowjack and well i just want somepony to help me get back on track with my story

I really need to get it up amd running agian so i would love to hear some feedback... Oh yeah dont mind grammar or spelling errors  I am just a bit bad at english typing

#273 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·

New Author here! I want some reviews on my story The Twilight Adventures. I want honest reviews. but I am mostly looking for some exposure for it, so I can learn for later chapters and my next story I will work on. Lets say the first story I wrote got REALLY bad reviews, so this is attempt 2. Thanks :twilightsmile:

#272 · 53w, 2d ago · · ·


Ehh, s'all right.

My stories are good enough without art

#271 · 53w, 2d ago · · ·


Hello. Yes I draw but not like before.

I stopped accepting requests or commissions. Sorry the disapointment. :ajsleepy:

You know, when ou grow up more, life gets busier... :fluttershysad:

#270 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·

Hey guys. I've hit a snag with my story writing.

As usual, I've been a little over-ambitious with putting up stories and as a result, I now have four stories up that are only in their first couple of chapters.

I haven't got a clue how to progress on any of them, so if people could help me, contribute ideas, or even help co-write any one of my stories, I would be insanely grateful and owe you one. Plus everyone who helps me will be given credit in some way.

The stories I need help with are;

A Tale of an Autumn Glow. It was cancelled, but status can be changed. Story about an original character who gets pushed into the equestrian portal by Sunset and finds himself in Celestia's basement, where the mirror was kept and he is a pony. He bumps into the Mane 6 and has to get his bearings around this new world.

Appledash: The Magic of True Friendship. An Appledash, (Obviously.)  It is centered around Rainbow and Applejack's relationship, and they are wondering about whether they should come or not to their friends. Twilight shows a homophobic streak and breaks the friendship. Rainbow offers the hand of friendship again and it is up to Twilight whether she accepts or not.

Apples and Rainbows: A summertime story. Another Appledash fic. Applejack is forced to question her life and perspective on things, after a dare from Big Man, reveals that she is in love with her best friend, Rainbow. Together they must sort out their feelings and unite against a cruel and unforgiving world.

Equestrian Magic (AKA the Tricks of Trixie.) Another O/C character is forced into the world of equestria and has to get his bearings. However I started writing this story back in season two of MLP FIM, so some deets maybe a little inaccurate.

Hope there are people out there who can help me out. I would really grateful

#269 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·


Hey, you said you were an artist? Just wondering, are you interested in maybe doing some artwork for my stories? Heads up, I can't pay you for your work, so it's ok if you decline.

#268 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·


I look forward to reading you stories. If you need help, don't hesitate to ask

#267 · 55w, 4d ago · · ·

Hey Guys.

Hope you're all well and feeling inspired.

I have been planning ideas for a new story, but have decided, that since I already have 5 stories, I will give the ideas to somebody else.

If your keen on seeing the ideas, PM me with your e-mail address and I'll give you access to the g-doc. (First come is first served.)

If you've been given access and decide not to use the ideas, then let me know and I'll advertise again.

If you've been given access by me, you are encouraged to;

Use the ideas included.

Change and re-shape all or some of the ideas.

Ignore or remove some ideas.

Once I've given access over, I will have nothing further to do with the G-doc, unless requested by the person I've given access to.

Just one catch though. If my ideas are made into a story, all I ask is that I be given a little credit, (promoting awareness for me.) just mention my name in the authors comment, or something small.

Sincerely yours,


P.S. The ideas within the G-doc are NOT full. cohesive or story-finished ideas, they are merely rough ideas and suggestions I scrawled into the docs. If you want the ideas, you've got to be prepared to put in work, to make these ideas, perfect.

That's all, hope you all have a nice day

#266 · 57w, 1d ago · · ·

Hey guys, my radio station will be starting podcasts as of the 1st April this year. I am looking for any authors who would like their stories to be read out on a monthly basis?

You can contact me through here, or through my website at the following address.



#265 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·

Hi, I accidentally posted one of my stories into the wrong folder, it's called, The choice is yours Discord, I don't know really how to remove it from the folder because I am new here. Somebody please help me out?

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