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Khaki Cap


Off we go to a great start...

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It is the year /????/ and the War began amongst all places in Equestria. All princesses have mysteriously disappeared and their thrones we're taken over by surrogate royal leaders and rogue militias. In the last effort before being overtaken by military attack, several cities and villages have created new nations with many of them having an agreement to be unified, to build an army, manufacture newly made planes, weapons and at last and most importantly, find the princesses and restore Equestria back to its peace. The stories written in the War journal are about recruited bomber crew from "Ruby Shores' Royal Aerodrome", located outside the Ruby Shores, hidden around the mountains and forests.

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Comments ( 1 )

Millimeter is messed up man. How could a pink pony be so…that?
It was good, and i especially liked how you put the logs in between parts. Apart from a few grammatical errors and incorrect tenses your writing is mostly sound.
I think you can fix those problems no problem! The story itself is very good and i got the gist of what was happening. Whens the next chapter coming?

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