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Starlight Fan


I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.

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When Cozy Glow was defeated, Twilight had been notified of Starlight nearly being sent to another dimension because of her plan. Ever since then, she had began having nightmares of losing her friend. Starlight knows she’ll need to reassure Twilight that she won’t lose her.

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Pretty good if a bit short. Are we getting more? I'd like that. Really like this pairing alot. I could definitely see this being canon. Good work.

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What do you mean by getting more? I got tons of TwiStar.

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Sorry I'm not very perceptive sometimes. It's marked completed so obviously this is done. I meant more chapters. Guess I'll check out your other stuff for more similar stories.

Short and sweet, much like many of your other pieces.

Unfortunately, one major error did jump out at me.

“But what if you-“ Twilight tries to push back before Starlight cut her off with a hug, “I’ll always be here for you no matter what.” The unicorn emphasizes.

Assuming the second part is coming from Starlight, it should be in its own paragraph. New speaker, new paragraph, and all that.

Other than that, I really enjoyed it. Would love to see more of these two as you portray them.

I loved this, thank you so much!

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