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Metool Bard

A weaver of tales who enjoys a good story. What more is there to say, really?


Octavia has never considered Vinyl Scratch to be an ideal roommate. She's loud and obnoxious, she comes home whenever she dang well pleases, and she rarely (if ever) takes things seriously. So when Octy learns that she has a twin sister named Fiddlesticks who's coming in for a visit, she can't help but feel a sense of dread. Not because she fears that Fiddlesticks will be offended by Vinyl's bombastic attitude, although that in and of itself would be pretty terrible. Rather, she's afraid of Fiddlesticks embracing said attitude and proceeding to drive her insane.

To ease her roommate's worries, Vinyl promises to be on her best behavior. However, such a promise can only go so far, as she's not too keen on the idea of two Octavias running around and telling her what to do. With Tavi trying too hard to be a good host, Vinyl trying to curb her rebellious nature, and Fiddlesticks just trying to have a good time, something's gotta give...

Rated Teen for crude humor and suggestive themes.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 82 )

Seems good! Tracking! :pinkiehappy:

Hmm. Curious. Tracking in 3...2...1...


Love to see how this is all going to turn out :pinkiehappy:

Hmm... I see a lot of potential in this so far. However, I have no idea how this all ties into Octavia having a twin sister. :rainbowhuh:

I'm hoping that this is explained within the next few chapters. Nevertheless, well written! :twilightsmile:

I like where this is going, keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

Commence read.


You have me intrigued. The only bad thing about this was that it was so short. I am definately looking forward to more chapters. :pinkiehappy:

2371412 Don't worry, it'll be explained. This is just the setup. The bombshell will be dropped on Octy soon enough. :raritywink:

The premise for this story has piqued my interest. Please, do continue.


Liking this so far. One particularly good point, you've gotten a good balance with Octavia's attitude to Vinyl. A lot of authors tend to go for completely excepting or down right hateful to our favourite unicorn. Looking forward to some more and for the shenanigans which I expect from this paring with a twin sister introduced. :raritywink:

That last Line... BRILLIANT! :rainbowlaugh:
I'm really liking where this is going :pinkiehappy:

Liking the set up very much. Can't wait to see were this goes.

2380869 Glad you're enjoying it. :twilightsmile:

So wait, are Octavia and Vinyl a couple in this story, or does Vinyl just get her rocks off on teasing Octavia?

2381461 Actually, both of those statements are true. :rainbowwild:

Ah, OK. Some of their banter makes sense now. :twistnerd:

I eagerly await the next chapter... and the inevitable clop spin-off.

Thank. You. For. Updating. This. Awesome. Story
I would give you moustaches, but I'm typing this on an iPhone, and iPhone gets no emojis

Quite an enjoyable story thus far. In a time that it seems that Fimfiction is slowing down, and stories featuring Vinyl and Octavia seeming to have all but died off it is good to see someone keeping them alive in what I may say is a very good story and one I can't wait to see updated.:heart::heart::heart:

Looking forward for more~

I like this story, but could you please explain how Octavia could forget that she had a twin sister? :rainbowhuh:

2392678 Don't worry, all will be explained in due time. :raritywink:

2392434 I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. :twilightsmile:

I like Fiddlesticks.

... You're going to turn her into a scheming villain, aren't you? :applecry:

Commence read.

It begins.

2393057 Uh, no. What gave you that idea? :rainbowhuh:

Many authors have played the card where they introduce a super nice character that uses their charm to get the target to let their guard down. It's made me paranoid.

2394962 Oh. Well, I assure you that's not going to happen here. At least, it's not my intention. :scootangel:

2394962 This doesn't seem like one of these stories, its just an awesome story! :rainbowkiss:


It's so beautiful :raritystarry: Moar, s'il vous plaƮt? :pinkiehappy:

still wondering how she can forget a twin :rainbowderp:

I'm sure our fair author will elaborate on this in due course. I'm guessing severe head trauma.

Why the heck would anypony wanna sleep on a cot instead of a couch. Couch's are comfy!!


*logs on to FiMFiction after school, looks at feed*
:raritystarry: :pinkiehappy:
*Squees when seeing that this has been updated*

Good chapter.

Now I'm curious about this "missing" past.

2406077 me to bro, me to

Has anyone ever thought that this site needs a bro-hoof emoticon, it would make sense wouldn't it? Anyway, awesome chapter. Seriously can't wait to see where this goes! :pinkiehappy:

I second this idea. We could use some more emoticons.

Need. More. Story....
Must. Wait. For. Next. Update........
Good story, btw.

well at least octy doesn't have to pay up on the bet since vinyl already spent the 20 bits the night before

* Raises eyebrow* Really? "You don't know you're own twin sister cause she was always hiding under the table" ?
Oh well.

Tell Vinyl to get dinner, then go out for a night on the town? I'm sure Vinyl will be using the word "Hypocrite" a lot. :rainbowkiss:


I've been gone since Wednesday of last week, so I get back and read this chapter... The feels... :raritydespair:

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