This story is a sequel to A Cheesy Reunion
(This story is also a prequel to A Chessy Reunion. Rated Teen to be safe.)
Maud Pie's foal is finally ready to be born, and everyone is excited by the prospect of a new addition to the Pie family. No one's more excited than Lil' Cheese, however, who can't wait to meet his new cousin.
As the delivery takes longer than expected, Lil' Cheese begins to grow impatient. To calm him down, his mother and father decide to tell him about the events surrounding his arrival into Equestria.
What was pregnancy like for ponies like Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich? What sort of trials and tribulations did they have to undergo before Lil' Cheese was born?
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Again, an excellent job on the dialogue, characterizations and general wrap-up. Most definitely liked Pinkie and Cheese's recall of Pinkie's time carrying Li`l Cheese. And, yeah, Pinkie "editing the story to be more kid-friendly" makes sense for her, as does Li`l Cheese's confusion concerning the "birds and the bees" phrasing.
Admittedly, considering this is a year of the dragon, I was thinking that there could be a ship fic this year featuring Ember and Thorax (though, to be fair, it IS still pretty early in the year, so there's still plenty of time). But, yeah, I can understand that why you would go for Pinkie and Cheese on Valentine's Day/Hearts and Hooves Day. And, oddly enough, the comics just did a Romeo and Juliet parody starring Pinkie and Cheese.
A decent little story.