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I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Takes place immediately after "Luna Eclipsed", colab with yodajax10.) Another Nightmare Night has come and gone, and now Ponyville begins the process of cleaning up after it.

Spike offers to help out, but Twilight reassures him that they can handle things on their own. So, reluctantly, the baby dragon decides to spend a little time with Princess Luna, who has just come out of her shell.

But what can the two talk about? Quite a lot, actually. And both will come to realize, they have something in common.

(Featured on 9/09/2016)

First Published
8th Sep 2016
Last Modified
8th Sep 2016
#1 · 36w, 4d ago · 3 · 1 ·

You did a great job bringing this idea to life! And thanks for recommending me! :pinkiehappy:

#2 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·

>>7548982 You're more than welcome. I'm glad you offered me the chance to write this. :twilightsmile:

#3 · 36w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>7549005 No problem! :pinkiehappy:

#4 · 36w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

This was a adorable fic, SuperPinkBrony12.

It was nice to see Spike and Luna interacting here, and you've made me think and notice that they do have a lot in common. :twilightsmile:

#5 · 36w, 4d ago · 3 · 1 ·

This was a great story, Superpink! You know, I never thought about, but these two have a lot in common.

#6 · 36w, 3d ago · 4 · 1 ·

Great moment with Spike and Luna.

#7 · 36w, 3d ago · 6 · ·

Kind of mixed. The idea isn't bad, but the character voices are very inconsistent. One moment, Spike is talking about "his tendency to be left out" and the next he goes "wow, that stinks." Luna flip-flops between Ye Olde Formale Speake and going "Plus, bla bla bla" like some random tween adding an afterthought. Those parts could've been done better. Otherwise there isn't much to say.

#8 · 36w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

     It didn't take long for Spike to Princess Luna, the

I suppose you're missing a "find" here.

#9 · 36w, 3d ago · 4 · 2 ·

A very nice job here.

#10 · 36w, 3d ago · · ·

He also hadn't been allowed to help with Applebuck Season or Winter Wrap Up

Wait, hold up—not allowed? He spent the whole time whining about how stupid it was they were doing it by hoof anyway!

Methinks Spike is remembering some things a little differently than they actually happened. What's a good thing and a very nice change from the norm, though, is that he's being relatively mature about it.

#11 · 36w, 3d ago · 4 · ·

I enjoy a good Spike and Luna story, whether it be romance, slice of life or even horror (if one exists).  Nice job! :twilightsmile:

#12 · 36w, 2d ago · 1 · 1 ·

>>7548982 I liked the way this story illustrates Spike and Twilight's relationship as more of a mother and her son rather than a sister and her brother. Twilight was the first living thing Spike saw upon hatching. And when Twilight was thrust into the role as Spike's caretaker while she was at school it's quite obvious that she took on the responsibilities of a mother. I thought the dynamic between them was very cute!^^ I had to give it a like.

If neither of you minded would you maybe like to read my short ten chapter story? It's similar in style to this one (though mine could definitely use a savvy editor!). I wrote it about Spike where he has this sudden issue of being unable to keep his basket dry at night while he sleeps. I try to write it as an episode of the show leaving it slice-of-life style and all-age appropriate. Twilight and Spike resembling a mother and son is very important to me and that is why your story stood out to me. Please if you have some time will you check out my story? I need all the help I can get.

#13 · 36w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7550181 I think for Luna, it makes sense because she's trying to change her dialect, but I agree with you that it doesn't work for Spike.

#14 · 36w, 2d ago · · ·

>>7552976

I would agree with you if I believed it was actually intentional here, but the way it's presented doesn't really make me think it was.

#15 · 5w, 5h ago · 1 · ·

This pairing should be done more often. :)

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