• Member Since 22nd Sep, 2020
  • offline last seen Jan 1st, 2021

TheHooligan


A proper lout, still in the process of regaining my Fimfiction sea legs.

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As Canterlot begins to crumble under the might of the changeling horde only a small few can hope to stop the catastrophe that should have been A Canterlot Wedding.

It was never his intention to 'Be A Hero' but when someone's life was at stake he had to do something. An act of bravely can come with its rewards, but can Spike the dragon handle the consequences as well? A spider fueled on revenge spins herself a new web with the intent to ensnare a certain dragonfly; To save the lives of his friends as well as his own Spike must survive a deadly game of deception... and obsession.

They say tartarus has no fury like that of a female scorned. Let's see how you handle a bride denied her 'special day' Spike.

A New story for your entertainment

Big ups to my beta-reader xgfhj for always bein willing to help me out.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Hmm...this is an interesting concept and it help makes Spike out as a hero. But...i wonder if it'll be good or ill for the rest of the main six.

This looks promising. Just don't get too side-tracked, ok?!:twilightsmile:

I like your characterizations in your stories and can't wait to see where this goes.

Yeah! GiantMako! Great as always, hope to see more battles, but I won't get my hopes up.

wow... that ending was REALLY stupid of the ponies: simply shackling a shape-shifting enemy, which they undoubtedly saw alter its own form, and that's not even mentioning the fact that they so overwhelmingly fell for that final move... but as they say: anything for the plot, and I can't wait to read more heroic adventures with my favorite character; Spike, with the possibility of him controlling his new-found abilities (after finding someone to teach him a fighting style he can actually use, since hooves and wings/horns are VERY different from claws, fire, and sharp teeth)

Very, very well done! Like it better when, Chrysalis goes good, or not so evil, because of all the damage she can really do, but this works too. And, Spike and Luna, is an awesome team here, as well as everyone else during the battle song!

Looking forward to more of this story. Just hope it doesn't get too dark! Combine my imagination and Changelings with dark, and I can come up with some fucked up shit:pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp:
Hope your not like me!:twilightsheepish:

You have my attention! :ajsmug:

I completely look forward to the following chapters.:twilightsmile::moustache:

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Will we get to see any sort of r and r after this or will it just go straight to what Chrysalis has planned

Well what does chrysalis plan to do now cause from the romance that will be added to the story its seems chrysalis may fall in love with spike only it may be a crazed obsessive love.

If you ever read this comment, GiantMako, I have to say this story is one of the stories that cause me to write fanfiction. You left me wanting more out of this story. Ever time I see this story it reminds me that anything is possible. When I read it the first time, I couldn't stop thinking about it. I read many stories since then, which cause me to discover something about myself... I want to try writing my own. If I ever finish writing my story, I will be satisfy... because the story I want to read will be written for others to read as well.
This Story idea is really great and as sad as it sounds only you can write it.

This is awesome! Please keep it up!

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Probably the greatest thing a writer can do with their work is pass the embers of inspiration to one of their readers, and hear about it. It's an equally great thing when said embers find their way back to you. I'll have to make some time to read your story once I'm all caught up with things. Reading these comments gave me a bit of a positive overcharge and for that I thank you all.

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Happy to see you are back.

Brother come back pleaseeee

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