Cover art created by thewaffler
Based just a bit after "Bats!" we find our favorite shy pegasus still feeling a little batty despite Twilight's reversal spell. Not wanting to cause anymore trouble Fluttershy decides to keep it to herself.. until Spike happens to find out accidentally. A one-shot (or perhaps more) regarding the possible outcome(s) that would result from Spike the dragon trying to help his timid friend cure herself while at the same time keeping a secret that he less then enthused about.
Another attempt at stepping into new territory for me which I hope you enjoy.
Can't tell us what happened eh? Well little do you know that's a dangerous thing to say because it sparks our imagination.
"AND THEN SEX HAPPENED!!!"
It cant be the end.
Another great piece of work. This is probably the best SpikeXFlutterbat fic yet. You really should continue this story.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just as awesome I remember it being two days ago. The middle of the fic is where it truly shines. Great use of atmosphere, you get a real sense of anxiety from Spike. Can't really say anything other than it is just a very well made story that ends with a great cliffhanger. Oh and I got your cover art done, bro.
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Peace Out.
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Funny thing is if I said anything about a possible 2nd chapter Mako would kill me.
Continue this story, please
I would love to see this story continue, I mean what if Spike started to fall for both sides of her. LIke if Flutterbat developed into a more open personality of Shy. But then the problem becomes that both sides start to blend together. I would love to see some intimate moments between the two. Seeing them share a apple, or Spike giving her a nibble on the neck as she does the same to him lol. There is so many places these story can go and I only hope you keep it going.
4052363 I will neither confirm or deny these accusations good sir. Thank you for being the first comment lol.
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Oops did I put that there total accident
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I ain't saying nuthin!
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Aww thanks Phantom glad you liked it man, once again ellipses!
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Fuhahahaha as if I'd write another chapter to a story just because my awesome readers all asked for it...yup never done that before :l
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Waffler! my bro it's good to hear from ya. I hope those other updates are going well dude, and that cover art awesome dude. You can bet that I'll be using it.
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Well at least your asking nicely...maybe.
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Well Dragonpony I'm glad that you liked it, I thought about raising the intimacy but kept it chill so I don't go grossing out my big manly macho readers with too much fluff. No promises, but maybe.
4053790 I literally find you on every spike story
4054296 What can I say I know what character I love and I love the broad range Spike can go as a character. Hey look at my favs you'll see a ton of Spike. Hell he is the character that got me here in the first place.
4054213 Hey! real mean can enjoy a intimate moment lol. . If a man can't share a moment with someone then he got to turn in his mustache!!!
I love this!!!
I like this story but I fail to see it actually deserving the Tragedy tag. It seems more deserving of Slice of Life. Really good story though.
well i think the tragedy might be for future chapters, if he chooses to go that way
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I like it. All of it!
The comfort, the fear, the secrets, and the possible of a romance between Spike and Fluttershy/bat. With sex if your feeling up to it. And if you are, I mean sex with the shy and timid Fluttershy and the Intimidating and feral Flutterbat.
All in all, you did a great job, and should really continue the story.
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Right on, right on then I correct my earlier statement. I kept it light because all of my super macho readers are all smooth operators who can imagine the rest themselves..you till I like throw in another chapter or something (no promises)
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Glad you like it Sandstorm
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You make a great point my friend. Gonna change the tag to slice of life till it earns such a thing.
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Happy to hear that you enjoyed the read DarkDMan. Maybe I will..F.B.N.T.M. was supposed to be a one-shot too.
4058366 And like everyone of your stories, a one-shot is just short changing yourself. Unless you make it like 10,000+ words or something like that.
Sweet!! Like an apple!!
Oh Spike, you must tell me this tipe of problem!
I would love to see more of this pairing
Flutterbat kinda reminds me of marceline when she acted feral in that 'Red Starved' ep; also flutters' later neck bite attempt on spike n' sayin that she can't help it reminds me a lil of moka whenever she tries to bites tsukune . Anyways this was a interestin read n' whenever u get round to it; i'd lik to see moar of this
Yes keep the story going
do please continue oh this will be very fun to read if you make it a 12 chapter story!
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Dead. i'm sorry. this story is dead. its been 3 years.
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NO! NO! FUCK FUCK FUCK THIS STORY IS DEAAAAAAD!!!!!! AAAAAAH!!!!!