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Arreis Of Avalon



You are my queen. I am your servant. We are both Changelings, separated by our fates. I will protect you with all my life and heart. If a Changeling could only love...

Inspired by the youtube PMV of Servant of Queen : Chrysalis Another Story.
Translated into Spanish by MasterSounds: http://mastersounds.deviantart.com/art/Mi-Deber-Como-Capitan-524799635

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Inspired by the youtube PMV of Servant of Queen : Chrysalis Another Story.

Where can I watch this?


4598159 Should I assume that means you liked it?~ xD Glad you enjoyed it.

YES! I have waited for a Story that is inspired by this song!

Let's see if the story is so Sad/beautiful as the Song.

4699878 I hope you enjoyed it. Sorry it took so long to respond - Derpy phone, messed up messages, and overall being busy has kept me from FiMfiction seriously lately. :twilightblush:

Oh...what we have here. A fiction version of my PMV. This is a good one. :twilightsmile:

4819952 WAIT WAIT WAIT, YOUR PMV?!?!! :pinkiegasp: OH MY GOOD GOSH I LOVED THAT PMV SO MUCH!!! :heart::heart: Seriously, I am just freaking out right now, the fact that you read MY fan fiction :rainbowkiss:


Heh, Heh. I just accident found your fiction while searching for Changeling fiction here. Your fiction is so deep fo search but I still found you after all. It feel great that somepony love my PMV so much until made fiction version of it.:twilightblush:

4820022 Eeeeee :heart: Thanks for taking the time to find me!!! :pinkiehappy:

Eacko's last words: "lol jester" :trollestia:

4835332 Did you get my hilarious pun?

4836044 No, actually, but it spun a few ideas in my brain for Trollestia ^^

4837526 In the online MMO game "Town of Salem", in each online server, each player is given a role they must fulfill, including evil ones, and every day everyone talks about the evidence they've gathered and decides to put someone on trial, and that can lead to a hanging. One of the roles is Executioner, and his goal is to get his target lynched (hung) by any means necessary. If his target dies by any other means (assassination, hit by serial killer or arsonist, commits suicide), then their role switches to Jester, and the Jester's goal is to get himself lynched. Someone I know who was the Jester once purposely changed his story several times and later denied doing so in order to make himself more suspicious. eventually, he succeeded in getting himself lynched, and his last words were "lol jester". Everyone in the chat list shouted and groaned as he won.

link: http://www.blankmediagames.com/

my oc calls the pmv and old nymphs tale but the end is were the changeling faked the death and he couldn't find her until the end

4870338 sorry that was random you still did a great job

Short, sweet, and very... hmm not sure what it is but I like it. And only very few grammer problems, not bad. :pinkiehappy:

Hmmm, very interesting perspective. :derpytongue2:

I don't think there was ANY mistakes. If there was I just didn't see them.

4911977 Thanks for the comments~ I try my best to keep my grammar and spelling in shape (Plus, I run everything by my editor that I can). This is all basically practice for my books (2 of which are being written, 2-3 of which are being planned). :twilightsmile: Glad you enjoyed~

The feels. Are. REAL. :fluttercry:

Something I have to say...
Ow my heart...
This is a really good story. Great Job. Happy yet sad end.

4916889 There IS a sad tag~ *chuckles and pats on the back* :pinkiehappy: Thanks for the comment~

Comment posted by DeathOcty deleted Sep 8th, 2014

It was a good thing to read the comments on the PMV or else I wouldn't have found your story.I really enjoyed the story by the way, a little short but still very good.

4976447 Comment's ON THE PMV? Woah, I wanna check that out. Thanks for the compliment. Sorry about the short length~

I have not cried in over a year up until now.

5101478 *pats on the back* Aye, the tears fill the seas of those around you. *salutes those who cried*

5187643 *hugs* :raritydespair: T'is truly a sad fic.

4595620 You don't have to cuz here it is my friend.

This. Was. AMAZING!
Now write one about "If I were a pony"

5452566 If I were a pony? Never heard of it.

5452664 Edit: I now have seen it, and I'll consider a short one op~ (Or a long fic, who knows)

Yay for another Stories of Evil~MLP crossover~

5467742 Always yay for crossovers >w<

5599522 I also hate you for making me cry. It was beautiful!

5600267 Screw you!(Takes box of tissues) Thank you...

beautiful, just beautiful.

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