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RoyalBardofCanterlot


Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus

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Lately, Spike has become a recluse. He won't go out. He won't try new things. All he does is stay inside the library. And Twilight has had enough.
(Used to belong to a longer series. Not sure what to do with it since I took down the series it was part of, but I liked this chapter. Now it's a one-shot. Might continue it.)

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´soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fucking nice

:moustache: sorry Rarity I'm a thief, a clepto . . .
:duck: I must confess Spike I too have stolen something of value
:moustache: wut????:twilightoops:
:raritywink: Your heart Spikey poo........:facehoof:

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Quite a cool idea. I would support a continuation if one were to happen.

A beautiful bit of storytelling, especially the use of colorful language. This story made me sad, made me really angry, and left me happy. Bravo!

Wow. Another stirring of Spike's greed. I don't know what to think about this.

Well done, I like how you brought up Twilight's own mistakes. She is definitely the pony who would understand Spike the most cause of their close bond and respective brushes with their own worst instincts. The next pony I could imagine Spike dealing with this alongside is Rarity because she has been shown to also have a severe problem with greed and after Twilight she is closest to Spike. I guess Applejack would be third cause of her humble nature and honesty, making her the opposite of greedy. Fluttershy, Rainbow, and Pinkie would probably help Spike out with this, but they wouldn't have the impact the others would.

Interesting idea. I like it. Reminds me vaguely of addiction, which makes a lot of sense. I've always been told that giving up an addiction or living with compulsion is a lot like what you portray here. An interesting angle and one with a lot more potential than "get gift, get consumed by greed."

Well done, have a like.

Why did you take the series down?

7552206 With the exception of this chapter, it wasn't very good. It's my fanfiction.net account as "Family Matters" if you want to read it.

"You thieving brat! You should know better!" She shouted.

And like that, I wouldve kept it for myself if I were Spike. Geez, Berry, he's trying to be NICE and RETURN IT!

Spike wants to abduct Princesses and eat unicorns, like all proper dragons.

And there's plenty of both in Equestria! Lucky him! :pinkiecrazy:

What happen to rest of the series I don't need sleep I need bloody answers

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The series dealt with vignettes revolving around different moments with the Mane 6 and their families...other than this one it wasn't very good.

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