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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Collab with yodajax10 who suggested the idea. Takes place immediately after "Horse Play".)

After witnessing Spike go out there and stall for time in an important play, Princess Luna becomes concerned about the adverse effects it might have on the little dragon's mental state.

She uses this an "excuse" to pay a visit to him after the play and have a one on one talk with him, giving him a chance to know that he is helpful.

But that is not the only reason the night princess comes to see Spike, the alicorn is dealing with her own personal issues and needs a friend she can trust to confide them in. Plus, Luna isn't the only one who wishes to give praise to Spike.

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Comments ( 21 )

Was... was that the TARDIS at the end?

Good story. :) Btw, that was the only episode from Season 8 I enjoyed so far XD

PLEASE do a sequal where luna does talk to the main 6 and she talks to celestia about the sun thing, PLEASE

8901844 Yes. I thought I'd throw in the nod.

I don't think Luna has properly introduce Spike to her pet possum Tiberius.

I also didn't enjoy how Spike's "friends" threw him out in front of all those ponies to be boo'd. Rainbow Dash invited them all and made grandiose remarks about the performance, so she should be made to entertain them... isn't she the one that likes to showoff?? Kind of upsetting that after all Spike's been through and put up with he still gets treated poorly by ponies who are either out of character or don't fully appreciate the baby dragon. :(

Not a bad episode, but not a particularly memorable one either...
6/10

Could I say something?

Spike is very helpful!

Whenever Ponyville needs rampaging, the ponies can always count on Spike!

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:trollestia:

But seriously, we need more giant Spike. He looked awesome.

8902768 Something.

I said it for him. :trollestia:

8902445 Spike is the butt monkeyest butt monkey of them all. :moustache:

I almost had hope after the "Gauntlet of Fire" that Spike would finally be allowed to grow into a significant role and develop. But then I realized what show I was watching and knew that was borderline delusional thinking!

8902768
I could've sworn Spike would speak to his friends about these issues by now, do you think he feels this same way in the show?

A very heartwarming story. I look forward to your next spike story.

8903173 Probably. We did see in "Crystal Empire Part 2" that his worst fear was that Twilight wouldn't need him anymore and would send him away. And episodes like "Spike at Your Service" and "Power Ponies", as poorly written as they were, indicate that Spike is self-conscious about his role within the group.

Aw so cute.

8903509
I do wished those were done BETTER, not to mention seeing Luna's DRAGON SITTER duties in action as well.

JWR

8902445
I think you're overreacting.

8912510
I don't know...
would you throw tomatoes at a baby/small child? Would you send someone less than half your age to console an angry crowd? I think it's a fair criticism.

8914393
True , I did find it a bit annoying that the mane six fee spike to the wollves I mean pinkie probably could would have been better choice

Fleur actually has her own tag

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