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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Other tag is due to Comet not yet having his own character tag.)

Comet doesn't regret the decision to leave his village and accompany his new friends back to Maretime Bay. But a part of him still misses his old home all the same.

Naturally, there's only one thing for Comet do in a situation like this: Talk to his friends. More specifically, his fellow unicorns Izzy and Misty, hoping that they might be able to help him.

Izzy and Misty, though not the most experienced at giving pep talks, are more than eager to share some of their life experiences with Comet. And together, they'll help him see that home is more than just where you come from.

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Home is Where the Horn Is

Just ask Tempest Shadow.

Excellent job on the dialogue, characterizations and general wrap-up in this one-shot. Definitely appreciated Izzy and Misty connecting to Comet about how he was missing Starlight Ridge (though the crew DOES have the Nova Charm to travel to and from Starlight Ridge, it would probably be an extremely good idea to use that sparingly) with Misty going into more detail about how she ended up in Opaline's "care" and Izzy describing Alphabittle's mood after Misty went missing but before he took Izzy under his - care (since the usual term was a jinx word to the unicorns until after re-unification). And yeah, the thought of Comet visiting Bridlewood and getting to talk to Alphabittle and Elder Flower sounds like it could have a fair bit of potential.

I am most assuredly looking forward to more of your work in general.

Misty, however, could sense much better what Comet was feeling. She herself was a pony who tended to be better suited to sensing things ponies might keep hidden. "You miss your village, don't you, Comet?" She asked him in no uncertain terms.

Yeah I guess the only Pony who can actually connect to him was Misty feeling a little homesick or being in a unknown area

Comet turned around, adjusting his glasses as the auroracorn looked at Misty. "Wait, you didn't know where you were from? How could anypony not know? Doesn't everypony have at least some idea of where they come from? I know I don't remember everything from my past, but I know for sure I'd never left my village until after you guys helped to defeat Allura."

Well Misty is a special case because Opaline really messed up her mind up

"Were you thinking about Mommy again?" Misty asked with a sweet smile. "You said she might come back someday. Do you think someday will be soon?"

Actually yeah what did happen to Misty's mother and for Alphabittle That poor man just lost both of them

The blank flanked filly giggled as she hopped off the swing, hugging her father as best she could. "Nu-uh. I'll always be your little filly, daddy. I'll never outgrow you. Never! Even when I'm all big and strong like you, I'll still want to be with you. You're the best daddy ever!"

Ouch 😢

And there was a voice complaining, talking to itself. "Curses! That spell should've worked! I finally managed to store up enough magic to break the enchantments, and nothing happens!" There came the sound of hooves frantically stomping on the ground in frustration! "That blasted Twilight Sparkle! Who is she to tell me I don't understand magic? That I need friends? Friends are useless! It's not my fault I'm so much better than everypony!"

And look what that got you in Opaline 😡

Then, one night by chance, Alphabittle had his life changed yet again. On the step of the front door of his house lay a wooden basket. Looking down into the basket, he saw a note resting atop a baby pink blanket. Curiously, the wrinkly stallion picked it up and examined it. The lettering was faded and clumsy, having apparently been written in a hurry. If he squinted, he could just make out the words "Izzy Moonbow".

Oh Misty is the oldest of the group?

11841376 Well, it would seem that way, unless Alphabittle aged really fast after Misty's disappearance.

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