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What can I say, ponies are my fortay

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Misty blindly follows Opaline's rule. She couldn't refuse, because she had nowhere else to go. No family, no real friends. No one knew who she was or where she came from, besides Opaline.

She feels shame for all the things she has done, from her lies to her outright theft. But everypony has a price. Opaline has promised her a cutie mark for her unconditional servitude. Opaline is an Alicorn, one of the most powerful creatures to ever to exist, her rise to ruler is inevitable.

After helping Opaline, Misty realizes her mistakes and regrets them. Perhaps even a cowardly mare like Misty can stop whatever evil plan Opaline has in store.

*Original Cover Art done by me*

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“You need to learn to use your unicorn abilities, if you can do that, then you might be able to capture the dragon" Opaline said as she walked closer to Misty.

huh.


I don't remember seeing Misty use magic actually.

The small unicorn looked at her blankly. "Huh? You think she's pretending?" She said looking at Misty with a bewildered stare.

😬😬😬😬😬

Looking around the town, Izzy was nowhere to be found. And that put Misty off, that pony was usually the easiest to run into. Always aware of everyone and everything.

well then she's at the brighthouse

"Huh.. so you wouldn't happen to know why I saw all 3 of them acting really peculiar" Izzy Said, pulling her hoof close to her face in contemplation.

oh no. plz let it not be what I think will happen

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Well, it is called Misty's new Magic 😁

It seems interesting...

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Yeah, Misty better hope they don’t snitch on her.
If that happens she’s compromised even more than before.

This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Whether or not she even realized it, Misty just made the first step towards earning that cutie mark...
Definitely keeping an eye on this one.

She turned her head, seeing that Opaline had already awoken. She was glaring into her precious pool once again. Misty wondered why she couldn't just leave the castle herself…

THATS WHAT I KEEP ASKING!!!!
OH MY GOD im not the only one!

"What? Well… I don't know." Opaline said. "His egg practically came from nowhere, I doubt there would be others" She firmly remarked.

There is the Dragonlands but.......

"Misty, I'm going to tell you a story." Opaline said, while looking queasy and unkempt.

Oh great what more lies do you got?🙄

"And so, these dragons became powerful adversaries, possessing size, brute strength, and magic on a whim. It was madness, spells of great caliber once held for sorcerers were now in the clawed hands of dragons. I chased them down. Finding them and taking back what was ours. I fought many foes at once, many called me insane for going up against them. But I persevered, and that is how I became a princess. I defeated them all single-hoofed." Opaline shook her head and hoof in a threatening manner to the sky.

ppphhhttt!!!! That is complete horseapples, dragons can't steal magic!!
And If I remember correctly, dragons were at peace with ponies and violence doesn't turn you into a princess.

This new chapter we is amazing, I like it! Hope to see more of your chapters and remember: Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.

“Cadence of the Crystal Kingdom" Misty was confused yet again, she didn't know who Cadence was either. These ponies sounded important, but she had no idea who they were. She snapped out of her trance, when she heard the sound of the door opening again.

Are you serious!?
The answer that ponykind used to be friends was in the library THIS WHOLE TIME?

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BROOO I'm sorrry 😭😭😭 look, I'm trying

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I said that the books were locked away because they were "propaganda"

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not everything opaline says is truth!

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She's assuming they went mostly extinct in their lands she hasn't seen one for a long time. Also she can't send Misty to the dragon lands! It's dangerous and there is a dragon right in front of them

Cadence of the Crystal Kingdom, leader of crystal ponies and cultivator of the element of love."

Ha! knew love was an element

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Also, books from all 3 tribes have been moved around and shared

"Misty, the old Princess tried to stop me in my pursuit to claim back what was already ours. We deserve everything that they stole from us. I became the way I am by liberating unicorn magic. Even earth ponies wanted to steal our power for themselves, that's why you must restore me. Once I'm restored, I can liberate Equestria once again. I can be a princess again! You want me to become a princess don't you Misty?" Opaline said with a glaring crazed look.

Correction: You want to steal all magic for yourself so that you can take over Equestria. We know you are a tyrant.

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I dont with to spoil anything but there is a reason Opaline became an alicorn!

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Isn't it a possibilty she was born one?

"Huh? Oh, she was the last princess of Equestria before it's collapse, apparently some other princess didn't agree with her methods and they duked it out, leading to the loss of magic. They say she was locked up somewhere" she said.

So she could still be alive!?

Comment posted by Someoneirrelevant deleted Nov 21st, 2022

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I meant that to be about Opaline, sorry

Misty walked with her book out of the castle. She turned towards the door, noticing a flame on the front. She hadn't thought much of it before. But now, it made sense. It all made sense. Opaline was a powerful and ruthless mistress. But she couldn't leave the castle, for whatever reason

Thaaaat... makes a lot of sense actually. Though it still doesn't explain where Misty came from. Maybe she just wandered into the castle one day and didn't come out :unsuresweetie:

Looks like Misty did the right thing and I'm proud of her.

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I'm giving you good vibes, hope you like it! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💝💝💝💝💝💝💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💖💖💖💖💖💖

I love this story
💙💙💙

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I don't remember seeing Misty use magic actually.

Me neither. I had always assumed that Opaline either couldn't be bothered to encourage Misty to learn magic, or consciously chose not to so that Misty would remain more dependent on her. Though knowing Opaline, the idea that she just wouldn't know how to teach that is equally plausible.

After all, I've been reading for most of my life, but if some kid asked me to teach them how to read, I'd be 100% clueless.

"Misty, where are you?” “Fine, hide then.” "The princesses were incompetent, I was making everything better! They let beasts roam with ponies!” "I might've lied about many things, but I'm all you have. Come out now"

So what? SO YOU CAN KNOCK HER INTO THE FLOOR!?

"What? Hah…. No Misty, that was the only thing I wasn't lying about. I can give you your cutie mark." The alicorn said, defeated.

LIAR!!! Cutie marks can't be given!!

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They can't be given, but can be taken and stored elsewhere 👀

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Are you saying what I think you’re saying?

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