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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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Twilight Sparkle has found herself feeling a bit lonely in Canterlot, even with Spike for company. And her first friendship council isn't scheduled to meet for at least another week. What's a princess to do?

Why, invite some of her other friends over for a sleepover at the castle of course. Twilight reaches out to her old Canterlot friends, offering them an opportunity to spend the night in the royal palace with her. They all accept.

Even though Twilight is the supreme ruler now, she still wants to make time for her friends and catch up. The rest of the group, meanwhile, are curious to know just what it's like to have an entire castle and its staff under your command.

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REALLY good job on this one-shot with the dialogue, characterizations and general wrap-up all well done. Yeah, I could see where Spike would give Twilight the idea of catching up with her old friends from Canterlot. And, yeah, that playful jab at the "future present day" look for Twilight in "the Last Problem" was also well done.

REALLY looking forward to more of your stories this year. I mean, at least it will make this year A LITTLE better, right?

"What?" Twilight pondered, before realizing the obvious. "Oh... right," Hastily, she lit up her horn, and in a flash her appearance changed: She reverted back to how she had appeared upon taking the throne, as if her earlier size change hadn't happened at all. "Sorry about that," She apologized. "Just a little something I'm working on. I figured that since ponies are so used to seeing Princess Celestia, the least I could do is try to look more like her to make the transition feel more natural."

Well that explains a lot!
and could work with g5 as well!

But Minuette waved a hoof and dismissed the idea. "Me? A princess? Nah. Unless maybe you made me the princess of dental hygiene. Then I'd make sure everypony brushes and flosses every day. Anypony who didn't would be thrown in the dungeon." And that prompted a chorus of laughter from everypony in the room.

Heh
Nice one Colgate

I like it.

This was very enjoyable!:twilightsmile:

Nice. Transformation spell could be a good explanation as to why Twilight looks like her old self in the hologram in G5. That's my main reason for considering it an au but this is a good way to think of it as well.

Fortunately, Spike quickly had an idea come to his mind that he was certain Twilight couldn't say no to. "Well then, if your Ponyville friends can't come, why not invite some of your other friends? You know: Your old ones from Canterlot?"

Oh yeah I'm sure they probably would like to see you again

Spike was as good as his word about filling in for Twilight as needed. And compared to the last time he'd taken charge in her absence, to say he did a much better job would be an understatement. Even Twilight herself was amazed at how well he seemed to handle keeping things running smoothly and taking care of small details so she didn't have to. " Definitely made the right choice making him my royal advisor. " She thought to herself.

Yep he definitely learned his lesson during the episode of Princess Spike

"What?" Twilight pondered, before realizing the obvious. "Oh... right," Hastily, she lit up her horn, and in a flash her appearance changed: She reverted back to how she had appeared upon taking the throne, as if her earlier size change hadn't happened at all. "Sorry about that," She apologized. "Just a little something I'm working on. I figured that since ponies are so used to seeing Princess Celestia, the least I could do is try to look more like her to make the transition feel more natural."

That is interesting that she can change her appearances and size which I've always thought that could be an interesting Theory during the Make Your Mark

Lyra breathed a much needed sigh of relief. "Oh, thank goodness. For a moment there, we were all worried we'd missed something, or that you might be an imposter. I think I speak for everypony when I say we like you better like this, not when you're looking like Princess Celestia's long lost doppelganger."

Well I wouldn't say that way

"Those have to be the best s'mores I've ever tasted!" Minuette exclaimed afterwards, licking her lips to get traces of chocolate and marshmallow off her face. Then she added. "Make sure you all brush your teeth really well before you go to bed tonight, girls. After all, I'd hate for any of you to end up in my office with cavities."

Some people forgot that Minuette is a dentist

Now, the princess was wondering how she might go about introducing her Canterlot friends to her friends in Ponyville. She knew Pinkie Pie and Minuette were friends with each other, but did that mean all of her Canterlot friends would get along with her Ponyville friends, and vice versa?

Actually that would be interesting to see something for having interaction with each other

I got to say this was a pretty nice story so Twilight wanted to do something but she couldn't do that to her friends since they have their own life and their friendship Council will not be in a few days but Spike gave her an idea to invite the ones in Canterlot which it was moondancer twinkle shine lemon heart Minuette Lyra which all of them did showed up and apparently Twilight knows how to transform herself when she was like back in season 3 through 9 which that's a pretty interesting power which it makes sense what we saw back and make your mark but anyway it looks like the girls were having fun talking about how they been doing lately which is always nice to hear again very nice and a fun one keep up the good work

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Your telling me Princess Twilight Sparkle the Supreme Ruler of all Equestria can't just invite both her Canterlot Friends and Ponyville Friends together to have this sleepover with all of the money, power and control that she has now?

Tall Twilight.
Small Twilight.

Does she do Filly Twilight too?
And sit at the back in magic kindergarten for fun, until she is noticed by the poor soul teaching the class?
:twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

I have a question. Twilight is supposed to have grown more mature here after her coronation because of character development so why can't she just be chill without thinking of all the bureaucratic stuff all the time? Twilight could invite both her Ponyville friends and Canterlot friends here, also why can't Spike join the sleepover too? He deserves to have fun as well! Can't he just leave those paperwork to other ministers of Canterlot? I'm sure all of the duties are not just on Twilight and Spike. Besides Twilight can just pay money and compensation to Applejack and Pinkie if she's worried about them missing a day of profit. The sleepover is fun and all but she could have taken her Canterlot friends on a Girl's Night Out better yet take a trip with them to Las Pegasus or go shopping in Manehattan!

Adorable! Twilight deserves to de-stress.

—Cragadilian

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