Thanks for the fave

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Interesting. I'll have to take a look at it when I've got the time. I'll be sure to give you what criticism I can. But I have to say, 24 upvotes and no down with about 400 views. Already looks like you've got a good story there.

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I love it! Would you like to read my first story? It's my first time writing and I would like some criticism.

Thanks for adding A Balance of Fire and Light to your favorites. I'm glad you've been enjoying it.

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