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Bad_Seed_72 is one creative writing gal! You should check her out!
My Writing Process




Appreciate your writing and never put yourself down. Continue to improve on your skills.
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I never really got a chance to introduce myself, I'm known by a lot of people on this site, as Gleaming (formerly ChaoticLightning). But you can really call me Gleam if you'd like, take a seat and have a nice a cup of coffee or tea.

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Anyway, ever since I saw the show that this site is based on in all of its pony glory, I decided to dabble in writing stories about ponies like the rest of us are here for.
Favorite Cutie Mark Crusader: Scootaloo
Favorite Mane 6: Rainbow Dash
Favorite Filly: Sweetie Belle
Favorite Colt: Rumble
Favorite Stallion: Cheese Sandwich
Favorite Princess: Luna
Favorite Pairings: TwiLuna, FlutterDash, RariLight, RariJack, MaudTosh, and other pairings.
Associated with: Blue Lantern Corps

Favorite Sisters: Sweetie Belle and Rarity, AJ and Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo + Rainbow Dash.
That is all! Feel free to PM me, read any of my stories, or leave a comment on my page! <3

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I'm open to all friendly chats! Here's a little music to listen to on your way out.
I'll see you all later!

After all, there's a clear pacing difference between:
The Patrol Pony dashed down the road, his non-spark horseshoes crashing on the pavement as he chased the flower thief. He pursued the masked pony past several stalls in the marketplace, maneuvering the best he could around customers, shop owners and booths. The thief turned into an alleyway that led out of the market into an alleyway, only to find that it was a dead end.
and:
The Patrol Pony stood to attention at the center of the park. His eyes wandered around the lush green grass, faded in spots of intense sunlight and the constant traffic of athletes and foals enjoying the bright summer day. The scent of a Tofu barbecue was carried to his nose from a Northern breeze, which made it twitch a little; he never liked the taste of fire-grilled food on an open day.
- MrAlbum321
- Write more details on the part that you want to slow down.
- Describe some additional events, going on paralel to the event you want to pass slowly.
- Describe the passing of time with more than one sentence to make sure the reader doesn't miss it.
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Don't just stare at me, type horse words.
Go bio quotes, yippee!
Thanks for your support, Gleaming! It's people like you who follow me that kick me in the butt and remind me that I have stories that need finishing. <3
Super appreciate you following me and being a reader. <3
Anyone who is a follower to Smitty91 you should go to Fanfiction.net where he still active and making stories there.
Smitty's account: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1396356/
I'm a friend of Smitty's and I hope everyone relay this message.
#CutePie
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I think it goes without saying that a lot of your followers are gonna miss a guy who's made some neat stories.