• Member Since 28th Aug, 2015
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Fabian Corcair

An Artist's purpose is find what's best relevant to what you goal is, experiment, originate new ideas, and rinse and repeat




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:twilightsmile: How about a review?
I find the execution kinda fun because of how interactive is text is. The story's brimming with personality, coupled with some subtle or not so subtle hinting that makes an exciting guessing game, and I find a classic and unique twist heart-wrenching. Overall, I think you much potential as an author, your strength is knowing how to engage the reader at every step:pinkiehappy:

Weaknesses: I think while the dialogue is strong, the in betweeners/descriptions beyond dialogue are mostly okay. And I noticed by your other stories that you're having trouble trying to compact your stories or finishing long ones, which is common in this community. Overall, I think you just share some minor problems with other beginner authors, while you also well navigate around them and focus on your strong suits and the important parts of the story

Keep up the good work!:raritywink:

Thanks for favouriting 'A Princess Who Likes To Skip.':pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: That was an accident, but I guess I could follow you

Thanks for the follow then unfollow me I guess.

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