We "animals" never get to speak in your language, Equines, but we do have some interesting tales to tell. Some perhaps disturbing. (And also, some Equines have disproportionate say in this, which I'm highly against)
Tempest finds the invasion more difficult than she expected; Twilight grew a backbone, albeit a cold one; and Discord found his way into this fic somehow.
My unicorn parents called me a worthless mud pony. They pushed me every day to overcome my lowly status. When I woke up one morning with my cutie mark, I thought they would love me. I couldn't have been farther from the truth.
Carrot Top discovers her coltfriend is cheating on her. Her first reaction is to kick him to next Monday, even though that can get her in jail. Good news? Her friends are going to get her out of trouble. Bad news? They're all sociopaths.
Nightmare Moon is defeated, Ponyville is celebrating the return of the sun and Princess Luna finds herself a thousand years from the world she knew, where even apples are strange.
Pinkie Pie isn't alone in her head- she has multiple personalities. The three of them have kept this fact secret for a very long time. Now, however, Twilight's overheard them arguing....
Jake finds himself roped into a high tea with Princess Celestia and a group of snobby nobles. The lunch is boring, the tea is boring, and the nobles are boring. Jake must brave a conversation with Rarity before he can escape and get some damn coffee.
Twilight Sparkle’s brilliant mind was gone, burned away by her own power when she nearly destroyed Canterlot twelve years ago. Now there is a monster prowling the Everfree. And it is starting to remember what true power felt like.
Schadenfreude is a butler to Blueblood and he's no stranger to being tossed in the dungeon for ticking him off. He decides to tell the story of how he got there this time.
When Twilight Sparkle went to bed, she had friends she loved and a life she enjoyed. But she awoke to hospital gowns and padded restraints. And the doctors, they keep telling her that she is sick and none of it was real. They’re lying, right?
2613741 How about a review? I find the execution kinda fun because of how interactive is text is. The story's brimming with personality, coupled with some subtle or not so subtle hinting that makes an exciting guessing game, and I find a classic and unique twist heart-wrenching. Overall, I think you much potential as an author, your strength is knowing how to engage the reader at every step
Weaknesses: I think while the dialogue is strong, the in betweeners/descriptions beyond dialogue are mostly okay. And I noticed by your other stories that you're having trouble trying to compact your stories or finishing long ones, which is common in this community. Overall, I think you just share some minor problems with other beginner authors, while you also well navigate around them and focus on your strong suits and the important parts of the story
Here to make your day 'cuz why not
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How about a review?
I find the execution kinda fun because of how interactive is text is. The story's brimming with personality, coupled with some subtle or not so subtle hinting that makes an exciting guessing game, and I find a classic and unique twist heart-wrenching. Overall, I think you much potential as an author, your strength is knowing how to engage the reader at every step
Weaknesses: I think while the dialogue is strong, the in betweeners/descriptions beyond dialogue are mostly okay. And I noticed by your other stories that you're having trouble trying to compact your stories or finishing long ones, which is common in this community. Overall, I think you just share some minor problems with other beginner authors, while you also well navigate around them and focus on your strong suits and the important parts of the story
Keep up the good work!
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That was an accident, but I guess I could follow you
Thanks for the follow then unfollow me I guess.