What if things turned out differently? What if the MLP movie and things made sense? Meh, worth giving it a shot.
(Spoilers for MLP: The Movie. A what-if scenario/Satirical parody)
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Fabian Corcair
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This is so ironically bad you should team up with Sherclop Holmes, and convince him to make the next Friendship is witchcraft with you.
Seriously, I think you might fit in.
As funny as this is, there is a special place In Tartarus for people who think they can do better than those Hasbro actually uses. So while I did like it.
Not enough to upvote.
I was already rolling on my floor with the princess of Oxytocin, but the part with the sea ponies killed me! XD
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There's a difference between being a fan of a franchise and sucking said franchise's unmentionables. The people Hasbro uses are still people. They're susceptible to flaws same as the fans. And as fans, we have the right to address flaws so long as we're being fair. And believe me, even being fair, there's a lot of flaws with this movie.
Besides, he wasn't actually trying to write something better than the writer's work. Ever heard of a YouTube series called "How It Should Have Ended"? That's what he's doing. And again, not for malice, just for a bit of fun satire.
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This isn't meant to be at all a serious criticism. It's just for dung and giggles
That's why I put the Discord bit in there, smarts, It's a counterpoint to the existence of this fic
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Ooh, I read fics that are influenced by that style, but really what influence this Twilight was the stories called "Seeking Power" and "Nightmare moon's apprentice" both written by Forthwith
Editing, criticisms, and silly comments are all welcome into this comment section. I just ask of you not to do go overboard and start cussing and stuff. Thank you
How are people disliking a parody of "How it should have ended"?
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Or they misunderstanding the point of the joke. I'll have to re-edit the description to make it more obvious
Maybe because people don't like the somewhat Machiavellian sense of humor?
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Fair enough.
That was enjoyable.
Not to be a pain, but I believe it's meant to be:
Remember to write a question mark at the end of a question.
*taken from http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Tempest_Shadow
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Thanks. Say, should i make a bonus chapter where the villains win?
I forgot about that part of the formula
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If you want, I won't interfere.
This makes a hell lot more sense than the movie itself!
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I just re-edited and made it more sensical. Now, some of the jokes are better, the typos are probably all gone, and the description is coherent. Additionally, the short introduction is no longer snarky.
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Ok.
Only to avoid a misunderstanding:
My comment was meant in a positive way. I wanted to express, that you surpassed the writers of the MLP-Movie
Your story is also much better than similar fanfics about this subject. Others tend to just talk sh*t about the princesses, how "weak" they are bla bla bla...
You on the other hand depict the princesses in an accurate way
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Don't give me that look, I know your pro-Celestia bias
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Absolutely!
But I also like your story aside from that.