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After a spell misfires, Twilight and Big Macintosh find themselves trapped in a world like none they've ever seen before. Together, they will face adventure, hardship, loss and longing, as their shared experience brings them closer together.

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what the hell did I just read, dude so many grammer errors....


Obvious trollfic is obvious.

I remember when this was featured on ED. Still hilariously mind-bending. :pinkiecrazy:
I rate this story a BILLION STARS.

:derpytongue2: This stoy alasw makess m e derp!

The best thing about this story is the accurate depiction of average, slice-of-life elements in everyday pony life, and the quiet reflection upon common angst of the target audience.:coolphoto:

The next best thing is SPIDER SEX!:pinkiecrazy:

Thanks to this fic, my brain is attempting to drill its way out through my ear canals.


[GODLIKE] Every once in a while, I open my mail box and am instantly hit with a sense of absolute peace. The feeling is indescribable. This happened just yesterday, and I immediately forwarded the submission to the pre-readers to share the newfound joy I was now blessed with.

Four of them came back with super powers, and the other seventeen cryogenically froze themselves, because absolutely nothing else in this world could possibly top the experience they all shared while reading what has come to be known as the ultimate masterpiece of human intelligence.

Pre-Reader Quotes
"Every once in a while you get the chance to read a story that sets the bar for it's entire genre. This story will forever be the one by which all others are measured. You are witnessing greatness here ponies." -Pre Reader gifted with the ability to create life.

"There's a certain level of writing that simply cannot be explained to the regular reader. It cannot be comprehended. It's quality is so far past it's time that few, if any, will be able to recognize it's greatness." -Pre Reader gifted with the ability to cure any illness, and imbue their patient with immortality.

"A boundary shattering tale that pushes the envelope on what fanfiction can be."-Pre Reader gifted with the ability to travel across time and space.

"I wept pure hot tears
Literature so awesome
My world, now spiders"-Pre Reader Gifted with the ability to Haiku about anything

"I came"-Pre Reader... I'd rather not mention his new powers.

Author: Argembarger
Description: After a spell misfires, Twilight and Big Macintosh find themselves trapped in a world like none they've ever seen before. Together, they will face adventure, hardship, loss and longing, as their shared experience brings them closer together.

I remember this, the amount of LOLs i got cannot be measured with only 4 dimensions :rainbowlaugh:

weve been trolled :)

Thiz... thiz iz, da bast fanficl Ive evl reed. :heart::rainbowkiss::raritystarry:

This fanfic is the best fanfic ever!

I remember this story. It was awesome.

Still the perfect story.

This is so said and depessingng. i criede wehn the spidr babids had to gos int o the forst to life adn be separate from momym adn daddy adn tiwight wsa refusd loev from bestest alicorn

ps that hurt my fingers to type that :derpytongue2:

"lik dis if u cry evrytim" But seriously, what the fuck? Even more seriously, this is the greatest thing ever, in the history of ever.

> Finds a dramatic reading.

>Be reminded about my own arachnophobia


Its Half Life, FULL LIFE CONSEQUENCES:flutterrage:

I'm listening to Azekahh's reading. This is freaking awesome.

This fic is so awfully bad it has reached a state of bad fanfic nirvana :pinkiehappy: five stars

If you can stomach this, Cupcakes, and My little Dashie with no break in between them you must be some sort of cyborg or something not human. That is assuming you've never read them before, or in the case of Dashie that doesn't matter because you just know what happens next and it hurts emotionally in ways you didn't know were possible:raritycry::fluttercry::raritydespair::applecry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2:

:derpytongue2:f lol nice story about :twilightsmile: and :eeyup:

I remember when micthemicrophone did a dramatic reading of this and airshipping is magic, I had never laughed so hard before

Nice story, but TOO MANY F*CKING GRAMMAR ERRORS! This could be a good story, but you just had to f*ck it up. :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

This reminded me of Octocat's adventures.

oh.. Sweet Celestia. I've never laughed so hard in my life, it's so idiotic that it entered the time warp and became awesome! The part where they just spit out Spike bits and reassemble him.. :rainbowlaugh: Oh Celestia.. I need a minute

161720 You don't recognise the most famous trollfic of all time?

"being alive was more good than eating bugs was bad so she did it"
I think you should have put "more gooder" for extra lulz :trollestia:

What.. What the.. I.. WHAT.

You should be happy to know that this has become a sort of legend as a troll fic. Don't feel good about yourself. Don't you DARE feel good about yourself. This is the first time I've actually needed to read it out loud to comprehend it, and the logic in it is.. I don't even have a word for it. Someone make a new word to describe this.

The part that confuses me the most is that I find it funny. WHY AM I LAUGHING AT THIS?! I should hate it, but I don't. This is either this fanbase's worse story or the world's best riddle.

Oh, you've posted it here now, Argem? Excellent! :moustache:

The thrilling conclusion to a thrilling saga. :eeyup:


Wha- I ju- I mean... wh- uh... Ok let me regain my thoughts. *ahem* Dafuq?

:pinkiecrazy: sir i think you have a future in trolling

Oh so everyone on EqD just says it's the best cuz it's a trollfic? I don't understand, what, why, how, the hay is this.

I jsut laek teh fraze "solid black mass of itchy screaming death". :pinkiecrazy:

:ajbemused: horribly written. i like the plot though.

This. Just this. A trollfic that will go down in history. I Crai teirs Afrtur readgying dis storeh. :fluttercry: (My brain hurts after attempting to match the way the story was typed :applejackconfused: )

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