• Member Since 21st Sep, 2011
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Argembarger


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a have to writ a stonry for fanffinction with ponneis so I did it with this a one for you

in it thes ponesi go to canterot for fvun and ponies

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Still a better love story than Twilight.

:moustache::
This story epically fails at spelling, punctuation and grammar. The plot is about a festival in Canterlot, I can see (:twilightsmile:), but there is absolutely no plot I can see whatsoever. :raritydespair: In fact, I may describe this as Pilipinas, Game KNB?-ish.

I almost suffocated on my own laughter while reading this. Every mechanical facet is so gloriously mangled that, at points, the story itself became incomprehensible.

I was going to call out my favourite misspelt character name, but there are just too many. Special mention goes to "falpolindashy" and "Appleoljiecanowickz" for making me choke on my own breath.

Oh my god I think I died. I'm giving this a thumbs down and favoriting it. Well done? No, not well done. I still enjoyed it though!:ajsmug:

572035 Nah, nah, nah. I'm from Singapore. I randomly stumbled on that YouTube video and put it here for the comedy. :rainbowlaugh:

572041
:pinkiesad2: i see
well i did get the point of you posting it in here.


well atleast i know that there are SEA Bronies out there. its rare to find one here :twilightblush:

571867
but there is absolutely no plot I can see... bow chicka wow wow

Everyone. Like this.
It get's favorited.
= Trollin those serious bronies!

Trollfiction as it should be

From the creator of Spiderses...

This is the best story in ALL OF EQUESTRIA! EQD should promote it even hasbro.

Ranibew Dash is fattest poney but can't run sardinely like spkie.:trollestia:

As far as troll-fics go this was a poor one. Bad grammar and spelling can only get you so far.

I remember, once, attempting to write a story while under the influence of Party-time Mint-als.

This crap's still better than that story.

Dolan wrote this story.

572225
Noooooo!:fluttercry: Never mention that fic ever again!

Side note: 5 likes and 5 dislikes? F**k that noise. I'll make dat shit 6:5

It starts off genuinely painful to read-- not enjoyably bad, but just regular awful. But then it keeps going, and the horribleness builds on itself and starts snowballing out of control, and the names get more and more incomprehensible, and it builds up into a glorious mishmash of non-sense.

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Beautiful, thought-provoking tale! Oh what a tangled literary web you weave, Argembarger. It's a shame Merriam Webster was unavailable for a cameo in this one. :raritywink:

i gave up half way through. sorry. i did try.

knighty
Site Owner

Greatest. Story. Eer. :pinkiecrazy:

im on an android and about 11 paragraphs in my phone crashed :facehoof:

i think this calls for celebration :moustache:

I'mma read this out loud on youtube, or at least attempt to. This calls for some Party-time Mint-als!

*Trollfaic*

I'm sorry, but I gave up at the bird singing part. I just couldn't keep reading it.

I did have many a laugh while reading this out loud, though.

>Fernship

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The only way I figure you were able to write this is that you smashed your face on the keyboard and rolled it back and forth a couple dozen times. It was the most horribly written, horrendously mangled, terribly decimated, and all around bad piece of literature I have ever read. I laughed through the entire thing. In fact, I haven't laughed that hard since... well, since I read Spiderses. Bravo Argembarger, bravo. Another masterpiece!

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

wehn i hda the raid of tshis them I arrd to mcuh fine harp om the drwosw

amn cant') of brith duer lingfhuag tom such

then im pooped*

(*this is a lie, I pooped first)

It takes raw talent to tuck something up this typically. I worry for your brain, guy.

It takes raw talent to fuck something up this typically. I worry for your brain, guy.

le epic troll! XDDD

This was read as part of a dramatic reading at Ponycon 2017, I was there, and it was the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard. Everyone was laughing their butts off.

They read this out during PonyFest, I laughed so hard, amazing. :rainbowlaugh:

This fic is fuf!

My brain does not like this at all. (but this gave us a lot of FUF)

FUF

Riffing Rainbow ∞: End of Lemongelatin brought me here.

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